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Thursday, April 13, 2017Many people believe that scientific researches should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private company.. It is argued that the authorit

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Many people believe that scientific researches should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private company

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that the authority should be the one who conducts and manages scientific studies While I agree with this point of view to some extent, I strongly believe that private organizations are a better candidate taking responsibility for such essential research

Admittedly, there are some good reasons why the government should be in charge of carrying and controlling scientific research Firstly, it is the budget from national taxes that supports scientists and researchers Therefore, the company in charge would receive money to complete their work without worrying about the depletion of resource Secondly, some dependent companies only look for profits, which makes it extremely dangerous For example,

a company may find out a chemistry that can make biological weapons, and then may sell it to

an antisocial party in Pakistan, this is certainly harmful to almost all human beings

However, despite some argument above, I am of the opinion that private firms would do the research mentioned much better Firstly, non-governmental companies usually pay a huge amount of money for their staff, this helps them attract more talented and skillful scientists to work for them As a result, scientific studies and papers conducted by these organizations are likely to be more accurate Secondly, as the authority has many aspects to take care of, independent firms often concentrate on one to two field, which helps to bring more proper results For example, MCG, which is a medical company in Binh Duong, only concentrates on 2 particular fields that are researching and manufacturing new medicines, which makes it better than other governmental companies in Vietnam

In conclusion, it seems to me that private institutions are much better in conducting and directing important research

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