Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability.. It is argued that university should offer permissions to all individual
Trang 1Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that university should offer permissions to all individuals to study without any academic requirement While this practice has some benefits, I strongly believe that its drawbacks are more significant and so I agree with this position
Admittedly, giving full access to tertiary education for everyone can certainly improve the economics of a country and its people’s life Since everyone can attain further education to acquire a Bachelor’s degree, there are more knowledgeable and qualified employees fulfilling important positions such as managers and doctors This could result in an increasing numbers
of now jobs generating a great amount of money from taxes to the national budget Besides, the living standards of citizens is enhanced remarkably because they can earn more money now
However, despite some arguments above, I believe that this practice can bring more harm than good and thus should not be allowed Firstly, it can result in an overload of universities and college When people do not need to test their levels of academic ability, they can go to study in higher education without having any foundation knowledge of some academic subjects like math and physic This could result in a significant lack of facilities and lecturers Secondly, it is a waste of money to build more universities and colleges to meet the great demand of learners For instance, the state would have to spend a huge amount of money on investments of constructing more rooms and buying more teaching equipment when there are
a massive number of citizens attending university
In conclusion, it seems to me that allowing everyone to studying in tertiary education without examining their academic ability might bring more harm than good, and thus I do not agree with this practice
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