Emphasize what the reader wants to know.. Start by answering these questions: How do I create you-attitude in my sentences?. Looks at things from the reader’s point of view.. E
Trang 1Module 6 You-Attitude
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Trang 2 Begin building goodwill.
Continue to adapt your message to
the audience.
Emphasize what the reader wants
to know.
See another point of view.
Trang 3Start by answering these questions:
How do I create you-attitude in my
sentences?
Does you-attitude basically mean
using the word you?
I’ve revised my sentences Do I need
to do anything else?
Trang 4 Looks at things from the reader’s
point of view
Respects the reader’s
intelligence
Protects the reader’s ego
Emphasizes what the reader
wants to know
Trang 5To Create You-Attitude
Talk about the reader.
Don’t discuss feelings,
except to offer
congratulations.
In positive situations, use
you more than I Use we
when it includes the
reader.
Avoid you in negative
situations.
Trang 6You-Attitude Examples
of September 21 this afternoon.
shipped this afternoon and should
reach you by September 28.
a credit line of $5,000.
$5,000 on your American Express
Card.
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your scholarship has been renewed.
scholarship has been renewed.
Lacking: You failed to sign your
check.
Trang 8Situations
In a positive message, focus on
what the reader can do
Avoid you when it criticizes the
reader or limits the reader’s
freedom
Trang 9Situations continued
In a job application letter, show
how you can help meet the
reader’s needs, but keep the word
you to a minimum
Trang 10To Create Goodwill with Content
Be complete
Anticipate and answer questions
readers are likely to have
For information the reader did not
ask for, show why it is important
Show readers how the message’s
subject affects them
Trang 11For Goodwill with Organization
Put information readers are most
interested in first
Arrange information to meet your
reader’s needs, not yours
Use headings and lists so that the
reader can find key points quickly