I encourage you to do this, and I’m sure that we — the company and you — will find the position that best matches your experience and background.. Sincerely, Signature Hiram Scott Vice P
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This letter turns down an employee’s request for a new job within the company
Business Letters for Busy People
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Powell Glove Company
4709 South 110th Street Omaha, Nebraska 68127 October 10, 20XX John Holiday
304 Spruce St
Omaha, NE 68128 Dear John:
Thank you for your interest in becoming part of Powell’s training and development department as an instructor I agree that everyone needs a change once in a while However, though you have good production experience, this position requires in-depth knowledge of the training process
Although you have been with Powell for five years, your background and experience have not prepared you for this particular position Several applications have been received from people with training experience and even some with training experience in the manufacturing industry The company will fill the position from these applicants
Unfortunately, you are not being selected for this position, but I am aware that you wish to continue to upgrade your position with the company I encourage you to do this, and I’m sure that we — the company and you — will find the position that best matches your experience and background
Again, I appreciate your interest and hard work in the company and wish you luck in all your future promotions
Sincerely,
Signature
John Williams President JW:gd
Goodwill Agreement
Rejection Reason
Encouragement
Goodwill
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Application
This letter is used to inform an applicant that there are no
positions available at the present time for which she is qualified
First National Bank
223 Ames • Casper, WY 82676
August 30, 20XX
Kelly Flanders
1795 Whisper Lane, #3
Casper, WY 82676
Dear Ms Flanders:
Your qualifications are impressive Unfortunately, we are not
presently hiring bank tellers
As you may know, we recently went through a major
expansion However, we have filled all of our bank teller
positions and do not foresee any change in staff in the near
future We will, however, keep your application on file for
one year should something arise
Thank you for your interest in First National If you should
have any questions, please call me
Sincerely,
Signature
Hiram Scott
Vice President, Human Resources
Compliment Rejection Reason for Rejection Added Service
Thank You
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This letter is used to inform an applicant that the position for which she applied has been offered to someone else
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Morton Engineering
3457 Randall St N.E • Armond, AR 72310
January 25, 20XX
K.J Land
356 Denver
University of Nebraska
Lincoln, NE 68308
Dear Ms Land:
Thank you for applying at Morton Engineering I am sorry
that we are unable to offer you the position of electrical
engineer for which you recently interviewed
We have selected another person who has the type of
experience we feel is necessary for the position I enjoyed
interviewing you and hope that you are successful in your
employment search in the near future
If you should have any questions, please call me
Sincerely,
Signature
Hanna Westcott
Personnel Director
HJW:kmm
Thank You Rejection Reason for Rejection Goodwill
Contact Information
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Arrange appointment specifications for easy, quick visual
access This letter can set the tone for the actual interview
HILL MULTI-MEDIA CORPORATION
301 E Armour Blvd • Kansas City, MO 64111
March 5, 20XX
Kay E Anders
7923 Noland Road
Lenexa, KS 66215-2528
Dear Ms Anders:
Thank you for your application for the position of
communications director We are pleased to invite you to be
interviewed for the position Your interview has been
scheduled as follows:
Date: March 17, 20XX
Time: 11:15 a.m
Location: Conference Room A
Second Floor (Northeast) Gillham Plaza Building
301 E Armour Blvd
Kansas City, MO 64111 Parking: Underground area off Gillham Road
You can expect to meet with the committee for 30 to 45
minutes If you have any questions, please contact me at
816-555-6889
Again, thank you for your interest in the position
Sincerely,
Signature
Carol J Kennedy
Interim Director of Programs
Acknowledgment Request
Details
Expectations Contact Information Thank You
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These letters are used to offer a position to a potential employee and should be treated as a legal contract Be clear that the offer is formal and official It should outline all of the essential information the potential employee needs to make a decision It is fine to make the informal offer by telephone and then follow up at once with a formal letter Be sure to make the potential employee feel welcome
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Morton Engineering
3457 Randall St N.E • Armond, AR 72310 January 25, 20XX
J Wallace Mercer
7898 Talleyho Lane
Lexington, KY 40329
Dear Mr Mercer:
It is with great pleasure that I am able to offer you a position
at Morton Engineering as an electrical engineer
The position pays $35,000 annually, in equal increments
every other Friday Additionally, you will receive two weeks
of paid vacation every 12 months, a bonus equaling two
weeks’ salary payable the payday before Christmas, health
benefits and $25,000 of life insurance This position is a
two-year agreement, after which it may be renegotiated
Either party may terminate with a two-week notice
We are very pleased to offer you the position and are sure
that you will make a superb addition to our firm If you have
any questions, please call me at any time
Sincerely,
Signature
Hanna Westcott
Personnel Director
HJW:kmm
Job Offer
Outline the Position
Welcome
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and friendly
Omega Corporation
P.O Box 666 • Phoenix, AZ 99065
March 2, 20XX
Jessica Carswell
3498 Grant
Overland Park, KS 66214
Dear Jessica:
I am pleased to offer you the position of public relations
director at Omega Corporation We all appreciate your fine
background and experience in the public relations field as
well as your interest in building up the public relations
department at Omega Your selection by the committee and
board will enhance the fine professional team that sets the
direction for Omega Corporation
I am enclosing in this letter the items we discussed in our
last meeting, on February 23: the terms of employment and
your benefits as a member of our team I have also added
specific information, brochures, etc., from each of our
medical insurance carriers so that you may consider your
insurance options
John, I am personally very pleased that our discussions
ended on such a positive note — for both of us I’ll meet you
in my office at 8:30 Tuesday morning, March 21, to make
sure that you get around to meet everyone
Sincerely,
Signature
Robert C Hanks
President
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Enc
Job Offer Compliment
Details
Enclosures
Goodwill Contact Information
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Haven Home
P.O Box 124 • Memphis, TN 38124 September 15, 20XX
Kory Chandler
45 Main Drive
Memphis, TN 38118
Dear Kory:
We are pleased that your experience and education match
our needs for a fund-raiser and program coordinator Your
enthusiasm convinced the interview committee that you are
the appropriate match for Haven Home
Your vision for adding follow-up questionnaires to our
first-time clients is a dynamic idea That effort will initiate many
improvements in our service to family members
experiencing domestic violence At the same time, the
questions will increase awareness of personal choices in our
clients living with violence
The transition and training schedule for your first week at
Haven Home is attached Please review it for Monday
morning at 7:30
If there is anything I can do to help make your transition
more comfortable, please let me know My voice-mail
number is 64 I’ll check in with you later to see how your
first day is going
Welcome to our team!
Sincerely,
Signature
Anna Phelps
Executive Director
AP:dmc
Job Offer Compliment
Contribution
Attachment
Contact Information
Welcome
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This letter welcomes a new employee to a business
Pink’s Shears, Inc.
763 Kekke Dr • Hibbing, MN 21111
May 6, 20XX
Linda Jean Tremel
1205 Mickey Mouse Dr
Orlando, FL 32078
Dear Ms Tremel:
It is my distinct pleasure to welcome you to Pink’s Shears,
Inc We are looking forward to your arrival on May 21
We at Pink’s are very proud of our complete line of pinking
shears and know that you will take the same pride in your
work as we do in ours Your role as sales director will be an
important one We know that your education and experience
will bring to Pink’s a much-needed momentum
Once again, welcome to Pink’s If there is any way I can
help you make the transition, let me know
Sincerely,
Signature
Harold “Pinky” Pinkham
President
HJP:cpa
First Welcome
General Comments Specific Position
Second Welcome
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This letter congratulates an employee or business associate on her promotion
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Cadrell’s
290 26th Ave • Winston, GA 30067
August 8, 20XX
T Molly Rathburn
8944 Tripp
Winston, GA 30067
Dear Molly:
I would like to congratulate you on your recent promotion to
assistant plant supervisor You must be proud of your
accomplishments
Because of your hard work and dedication, you deserve this
promotion Employees like you help Cadrell’s keep ahead of
the competition and lead the way in the field of dental
equipment Your efforts are appreciated
Congratulations again Welcome to the management team
at Cadrell’s
Sincerely yours,
Signature
J.K Cadrell, Jr
President
JKC:ltj
First Congratulations
General Statement (optional)
Second Congratulations
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This letter announces the promotion of an employee
Nacogdoches Notebooks
277 Linden • Nacogdoches, TX 75963
August 1, 20XX
Truc Phan
3009 Clipclop Lane
Nacogdoches, TX 75963
Dear Mr Phan:
We are pleased to offer you the promotion to vice president
in charge of sales
Nacogdoches Notebooks is promoting you because of your
outstanding and untiring commitment to your work
Nacogdoches Notebooks has grown substantially because of
your efforts
Please see Ray Norton on Monday He will show you your
new office and begin your orientation
Congratulations We are proud to have you associated with
our company
Sincerely,
Signature
Susanna M Graham
President
SMG:eer
Announcement
Reason
Instructions
Congratulations