• In a laboratory TP report you must show that you are able to put order and coherence in your measurement results, that you have insight in the accuracy and reliability of the measureme
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Swiss Federal Institute of Technology Lausanne
EPFL-DMT-IMS, 2001
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importance for engineers
The purpose of this guide is to help you, the student, with writing good reports
While remaining compact, it combines basic advices and rules for lab experiment (TP), semester and diploma reports We emphasise that these are only guidelines As a
consequence these rules should be applied with intelligence
This is a modified copy of a manual that was made 20 years ago by teachers in Holland, with a few additions from other sources It has been adapted, we hope, to the tastes and opinions of the teachers here
Suggestions for improvements, from teachers and students, are welcome
Harald van Lintel
Raphael Holzer
Pierre-André Besse
Lausanne, March 2001
v.1.1, 7/03/01 HvL
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The purpose of a report is to transmit coherent information on a subject to the target
readers
Reports at the EPFL are usually technical and should be based on verifiable facts or experiments
You should write the report in such a way that it will be as easy as possible for the reader to understand, and eventually to apply the information in it It is not a history of your work
Obviously, the requirements of your readers (and tutors especially) must be taken into account: what information is requested, how much does the reader know already, what interests him/her?
Your report should be written in such a way that your fellow students will be able to understand it
• In a laboratory (TP) report you must show that you are able to put order and coherence in your measurement results, that you have insight in the accuracy and reliability of the measurements and that you are able to link the experiment
to the related theory
• Semester and diploma reports often are part of a project The success of the project may be influenced by the quality of the report A clear and critical problem description and a well-motivated solution form an important
contribution to the goal to be reached Often a report is the starting point for a next phase in the project Therefore, a thorough description of the experiments and results are important, as well as clearly formulated conclusions
The teacher or tutor who has to judge the report will certainly appreciate it when the contents are clearly the intellectual property of the writers Copying someone else’s work is not appreciated!
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2.1 Laboratory reports (TP)
In general, depending on the type of experiment, for your “Travaille Pratique” report
you may use something like this:
• Title
• Purpose of the experiment
• Theoretical background
• Description of the experiment
• Results of the experiment
• Calculations
• Discussion of results
• Literature
• (List of symbols)
• Appendices (may be put ahead of “Literature”)
Answers to questions in the TP instruction are to be integrated in the report in the appropriate places
Hereunder follow some clarifications and details in relation to the above example layout
2.1.1 Title
Every report must be clearly recognizable by its title The title is here a compact
description of the experiment
This title appears on a title or cover page, that also should contain the following
information:
• Names of the authors
• Class, affiliation
• Date
2.1.2 Purpose of the experiment
Describe in detail the purpose of the experiment and try to touch the heart of the matter
2.1.3 Theoretical background
Explain shortly the background, preferably using consulted literature You should include short derivations of non-standard formulas in the main text
2.1.4 Description of the experiment
Here the experiment or practical training is described You should include things as:
• Description of the measurement equipment
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• Particularities of equipment or materials
It is in most cases not useful to go in great detail about the equipment; eventually you may refer to manuals and type numbers Don’t mention details that are useless Use appendices
2.1.5 Results of the experiment
Describe the results you obtained, your observations, and how you dealt with
unexpected problems
Often the results include sequences of numbers that can and should be shown in tables
or graphs Don’t forget to indicate measurement accuracies where useful
Also other types of information, such as oscilloscope images and photos are experiment results
2.1.6 Calculations
Here belong:
• Calculations, where needed incl accuracy calculations
• Extractions of measurement results from graphs
In case of a number of identical calculations you only need to show one calculation example Clearly indicate to which measurement it applies The results can be collected
in tables
2.1.7 Discussion of results
This may be the most important part of the report, as from this should become clear what meaning and relevance the results have and what conclusions can be drawn from these
Where possible, compare the results with theoretical predictions or literature sources
(give the value and the source!) Discuss the differences Try to reach clear conclusions
2.1.8 Literature
Give here an overview of consulted literature
2.1.9 List of symbols
In case you make use of many symbols, it is good to add a list of symbols as well
2.1.10 Appendices
In the appendices you can put items that would interfere with the logic and readability
of the report, such as big tables (or too many), graphs or derivations, and items such as computer print-outs, program code, process lists, data sheets and detailed component descriptions Make sure that the reader will not have to jump much to-and-from the appendix
We also want you to add all your original notes of the main experiments here
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Both types of report transmit relevant information, understanding and know-how that you developed during the project This should be exposed in a coherent, scientific way
In practice there is often not much difference between them, so the layout can be
similar:
• Title
• Table of Contents
• Summary
• Project description
• Introduction
• Body of the report
• Conclusions
• Literature list
• List of symbols
• Appendices (may be put ahead of “Literature”)
Some clarifications:
2.2.1 Title
The title should indicate in a few words the subject and the way it is approached
Example: a title like “Silicon microfluidics” is insufficient “Silicon microfluidic
sensors” is better but lacks information on what has been done
A better title is for example “Fabrication and test of silicon microfluidic sensors” However, a title like “Realisation and test of a novel microfluidic sensor” is more appealing
On the title page belong as well:
• Name of writer
• Time period or date
• Institute where the work was done
• Names of professor, assistants
2.2.2 Table of contents
The chapters and sections (and if you like, subsections) are mentioned with their page number
2.2.3 Summary
Mention for who the report is primarily made Inform the reader about the purpose, used methods and results; give the main conclusions and recommendations (about half a page) Stress the novelty and possible impact
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The description as formulated at the start is to be given here
2.2.5 Introduction
Here you can indicate in more detail the purpose, background, starting points and limitations Explain briefly your approach and what is new In order to get the attention
of the reader, it is good to write „top down“, i.e mention the main achievement already
in the introduction
2.2.6 Body of the report
This will be split up in several chapters, depending on the work that has been done Nevertheless, the body should be logical and fluent Transmit your message in the form
of coherent information, not as a historical description
In accord with the point of depart as formulated in the introduction, you should build up the subject matter in a logical way All matter that you feel should be in the report but does not fit with that logic has to go to the appendix Where appropriate you can refer to that in the text
Examples of items that may be put in the body of the report:
• Theoretical background
• Reasons, motivations for design choices
• Key design or layout
• Key aspects of realisation
• Choice of measurement method or set-up
• Discussion of results
• Anything else that the project description requires
2.2.7 Conclusions
Give all relevant conclusions, even negative Stress novelty and scientific or industrial impact Also new insights, outlook and recommendations for improvement should be put here
However, do not introduce results or concepts that belong in the body of the report Bring structure in your conclusions
2.2.8 Symbol list
Every report with a large number of symbols benefits from a symbol list
You should have all used symbols in alphabetic sequence (small letters, capital letters,
Greek)
Indicate both meaning and units Try to adapt generally used symbols, and try to avoid the use of the same symbol for different meanings
Also non-standard abbreviations can be added here
2.2.9 Literature list
See section 3.6
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Hereunder fall things that would interrupt the fluidity of the body of the report, such as:
• Long derivations of formulas
• Calculations that would interrupt the body of the report (keep them compact)
• Large tables with measurements or calculated results
• Large drawings and schemes or layouts, series of pictures
• Part lists
• Computer simulation print-outs (listings, runs)
• Partial copies of articles
The report without the appendixes must be understandable and contain all important information
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3.1 Basic layout
Use A4 paper In long reports, start each chapter on a new page Use large margins (ca
3 cm left margin, top and bottom) Preferably put explaining text next or under pictures, especially in semester and diploma reports Group the information in paragraphs
On the cover, put title, names and date
3.2 Numbering
3.2.1 Chapters and sections
We advice the use of a decimal enumeration system, such as used in this manual
Thus:
1 Title of chapter
2 Title of chapter
2.1 Title of section
2.1.1 Title of sub section
2.1.2 Title of sub section
2.2 Title of section
Use the same code in the table of contents (can be done in an automatic way with
programs like Word)
Don’t include Summary, Appendices, Literature list or Symbol list in this numbering
3.2.2 Formulas
Essential formulas and formulas that are referred to in other places in the report must be numbered
For example:
m s
f = 0.5 / (1)
If you do not have many formulas (say less than 20), you can use this type of
numbering; otherwise you can use (3.1) etc., referring to the chapter the formula is in
3.2.3 Tables
Tables should be numbered, and indicated: Table 1, Table 2 (or Table 3.1, Table 3.2)
3.2.4 Figures
All graphics that are placed in-between the text, such as drawings, graphs, pictures are called “figure” You can number them Figure1, Figure 2 etc (or Fig.3.1, Fig.3.2)
Together with the numbering you give a short and clear description (figure caption) This should be self-explaining: all the relevant information has to be in the figure or in the figure caption State clearly what is shown: “Measured…”, ”Simulated…”,
”Theoretical…”, ”Comparison…”, …
The figures are placed close to the related text
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If you have only a few:
Appendix A Tables of expansion coefficients
Appendix B Specifications of current amplifier SRS 570
If you have many that can be grouped into types:
Graph A First DC current measurement
Graph B First AC current measurement
Mask 1 Back side
Mask 2 Front side
Mask 3 Metallisation
You indicate these in the Table of Contents as:
Graphs
Mask layouts
3.3 Tables
• Put above or under the table a description: Table 2, “short description”
• Better not to make horizontal tables: such save space but are difficult to read
Thus not:
But like the following (with the cause in the left, and the result in the right column!):
U [V] I [mA]
0 0.4
2.00 2.7
4.00 4.2
6.00 5.3
8.00 5.5
10.00 5.6
• Shift repetitive information from the columns to the heading In the heading above each column you mention:
o The contents, often using a symbol (e.g U)
o The unit between brackets (e.g [mV]); choose the unit to be convenient
in size, e.g 13.6 mV instead of 0.0136 V (only use brackets [] where needed!)
o The precision, if this is of importance and similar for all values
• Try to shift as much as possible information from the heading to the description
• Choose the sequence of columns in a logical way (put together what belongs together)
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3.4 Graphs
3.4.1 Axes
a Horizontally (x) you put the independent variable (the cause) and vertically (y) the dependent variable (the result)!!
For example, if you measure the resistance as function of the temperature: then you put the resistance on the vertical axis But if you measure the temperature
as function of a heater resistance, you put the temperature on the vertical axis
b The divisions on the axis depend on the following:
o The space should be used efficiently
o Usually the axes go preferably through the origin (0,0)
o If you don’t start at 0, it’s good to show it (but cumbersome with Excel):
o Please divide the axes in multiples of 1, 2, 5, 10 (etc.) units (“ticks”), do not put them every 3 or 4 units! Add enough (not too many) values
o Consider the use of logarithmic divisions; realise what is useful and/or common
c Near the axes you indicate the variable (preferably a symbol) and the units: e.g
I [mA] or t [s] Near the vertical axis you put the comment horizontal or, if there is lack of space and you place it vertical, it should be readable from the right Don’t forget to describe what exactly is plotted as function of what
d Use exactly the same layout for two results that you want to compare (identical axes)
3.4.2 Measurement points
• Include all measurement points, also the ones that seem to be out of range Make them sufficiently large to see them after you draw a line through them
• Make sure when you do the measurements that the points will be well
distributed Where the graph behaves strangely (resonance peaks and so on) there should be more points (hopefully you realised that when doing the
measurement!)
• Often it is useful to indicate an estimation of the inaccuracy using error bars (especially when large)
3.4.3 Lines
• Ideally you draw a smooth line without trying to exactly force them through all points, in accord with theory (expectation) and common sense (error bars are