Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle… After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers, we
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Letter layout, content and style
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A business letter is a formal document often sent from one company to another or from a company to its clients, employees, and stakeholders, for example.
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[Sender’s Name]
[Sender’s Company Name]
[Sender’s Street Address]
[Sender’s City, State/Province, & Zip/Postal Code]
[Sender’s phone number and/or email address]
[Date]
[Recipient’s Name]
[Recipient’s Company Name]
[Recipient’s Street Address]
[Recipient’s City, State/Province, & Zip/Postal Code]
[Recipient’s phone number and/or email address]
[Subject]
[Dear Name], [Introduction – this is where you explain the purpose of the letter such as why you are writing it, what you hope to achieve from it, and any other important information you want to state upfront.]
[Middle Section – this is where you elaborate and provide more detail about what you outlined in the first paragraph There may be several more paragraphs like this depending
on how long the letter needs to be]
[Conclusion – this is the place where you wrap up and summarize things There may be a call to action or next steps included in this paragraph.]
[Sincerely], [Signature]
[Name of Sender]
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1 Sender’s address/ Return
address
Usually: top right-hand corner
Less common : top left-hand
corner
No punctuation
ABC EDUCATION INC
1234 – 123 Street New York
NY 01218May 21, 2018XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Sir/Madam,
ABC EDUCATION INC
1234 – 123 Street New York
NY 01218May 21, 2018XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Sir/Madam,
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2 Reference
At least one blank line below the
sender’s address or letterhead
Right-hand side or left-hand side
XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Sir/Madam,
Your ref:
Our ref: JB/JGMay 21, 2018
XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Sir/Madam,
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3 Date
At least one blank line
below the sender’s address
May 21, 2018
XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Sir/Madam,
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4 Recipient’s address/ Inside
address
One to ten blank lines below
the date and always on the
left-hand side
Should be on separate lines as
it would appear on the
envelope
May 21, 2018
XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Sir/Madam,
May 21, 2018
XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Sir/Madam,
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Recipient’s surname known
Write it as first line of the inside
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Ms Geenie,
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
May 21, 2018
Ms Sarah GeenieXYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Ms Geenie,
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
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Recipient’s name not known
If you only know the person’s job title, you can use that in the inside address, e.g.
The Sales Manager , or The Finance Director
Accounts Department
Or you can address to the company itself:
Compuvision Ltd , or Messrs Collier
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5 Attention line
Alternative to the recipient’s name
or job title in the inside address
Should be underlined or printed in
bold or CAPITALS, e.g.
For the attention of the Sales Manager
ATTENTION: MS TERRY ROBERTS
A blank line below the inside
May 21, 2018
XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851For the attention of the Sales ManagerDear Sir/Madam,
May 21, 2018
XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851For the attention of the Sales ManagerDear Sir/Madam,
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6 Salutation
Addressing people you know their names:
but do not know them well, use title &
surname, do not include initials or first
names:
Dear Mr Smith / Dear Miss Tan
NOT Dear Mr J Smith or Dear Mr John
Smith
and you know them well, use just first
name: Dear John / Dear Mary
Note: A comma after the salutation is
optional
In American English, a colon is used instead.
May 21, 2018
Ms Sarah GeenieXYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Ms Geenie,
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
This letter is simply to notify you of the upcoming changes, and no immediateaction is required from you at this time We thank you for your continuedbusiness
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Ms Geenie,
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
This letter is simply to notify you of the upcoming changes, and no immediateaction is required from you at this time We thank you for your continuedbusiness
Sincerely,
John Bravo
John Bravo
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6 Salutation
Addressing people you do not
know their names:
May 21, 2018
XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Sir/Madam,
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7 Subject title
Directly after the salutation
and separate from it by a blank
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Ms Geenie,
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
May 21, 2018
Ms Sarah GeenieXYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Ms Geenie,
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
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8 Main (body)
The actual message of your letter
Leave a line space between
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
Dear Ms Geenie,
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
This letter is simply to notify you of the upcoming changes, and no immediateaction is required from you at this time We thank you for your continuedbusiness
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
Dear Ms Geenie,
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
This letter is simply to notify you of the upcoming changes, and no immediateaction is required from you at this time We thank you for your continuedbusiness
Sincerely,
John Bravo
John Bravo
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9 Complimentary close
Yours faithfully
Dear Sir Dear Sirs Dear Madam Dear Sir or Madam Dear Mr Smith
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10 Signature/ Sender’s
identification
Write your job title or
department directly beneath
your name
behalf of the sender, write
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Ms Geenie,
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
This letter is simply to notify you of the upcoming changes, and no immediateaction is required from you at this time We thank you for your continuedbusiness
Sincerely,
Selena Gomez
p.p John BravoSales Manager
May 21, 2018
Your ref:
Our ref: JB/SG
Ms Sarah GeenieXYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Ms Geenie,
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
This letter is simply to notify you of the upcoming changes, and no immediateaction is required from you at this time We thank you for your continuedbusiness
Sincerely,
Selena Gomez
p.p John BravoSales Manager
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11 Enclosures
A line space below the
sender’s identification
Consisting of the word: “ Enc ”
or “ Encl ” followed by a list of
the enclosed items, e.g
Enc Bill of Lading (3 copies)
Insurance certificate (1
copy)
May 21, 2018
Ms Sarah GeenieXYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Ms Geenie,
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
May 21, 2018
Ms Sarah GeenieXYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Ms Geenie,
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
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12 Copies
At least a blank line below the
sender’s identification or the
Enclosures
Consisting of the word: “ C.C ” or
“ Copy ” followed by the name/s
and designation/s of the copy
recipient/s, e.g
C.C Ravi Gopal, General Manager
Candice Reeves, Accountant
May 21, 2018
Ms Sarah GeenieXYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Ms Geenie,
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
This letter is simply to notify you of the upcoming changes, and no immediateaction is required from you at this time We thank you for your continuedbusiness
Sincerely,
John Bravo
John BravoC.C Ravi Gopal, General Manager
May 21, 2018
Ms Sarah GeenieXYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851Dear Ms Geenie,
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
This letter is simply to notify you of the upcoming changes, and no immediateaction is required from you at this time We thank you for your continuedbusiness
Sincerely,
John Bravo
John BravoC.C Ravi Gopal, General Manager
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Trang 22Group discussion
1 Name compulsory parts of a business letter.
2 Name optional parts of a business letter.
3 What is a letterhead? What do you do when there’s no letterhead?
4 What does “Messrs” stand for? What is it used for?
5 When do you use Miss, Mrs and Ms?
Trang 23Call out parts of this letter
Which part(s) should be added?
Trang 24Letter layout
1 Full block
May 21, 2018Sarah GeenieXYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
Dear Ms Geenie,
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
This letter is simply to notify you of the upcoming changes, and no immediateaction is required from you at this time We thank you for your continuedbusiness
Sincerely,
John Bravo
John Bravo
May 21, 2018Sarah GeenieXYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
Dear Ms Geenie,
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
This letter is simply to notify you of the upcoming changes, and no immediateaction is required from you at this time We thank you for your continuedbusiness
Sincerely,
John Bravo
John Bravo
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2 Block
complimentary closing,
company signature, writer’s
identification start at the
horizontal center of the page
May 21, 2018Sarah Geenie
XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
Dear Ms Geenie,
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
May 21, 2018Sarah Geenie
XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
Dear Ms Geenie,
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effective February 1, 2019 Onthe first of February, we will be switching from an annual billing cycle to aquarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from our customers,
we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterly billing cyclerather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
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3 Semi block
spaces).
Signatures, Name and
Designation are on the right
side of the margin.
heading is on the right side of
the margin.
May 21, 2018Sarah Geenie
XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
Dear Ms Geenie,
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effectiveFebruary 1, 2019 On the first of February, we will be switching from an annualbilling cycle to a quarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from ourcustomers, we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterlybilling cycle rather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
This letter is simply to notify you of the upcoming changes, and noimmediate action is required from you at this time We thank you for yourcontinued business
Sincerely,
John Bravo
John Bravo
May 21, 2018Sarah Geenie
XYZ Company Inc
6789 – 789 StreetNew York, NY 04851
Re: Updated Billing Frequency
Dear Ms Geenie,
I am writing to inform you of our new pricing model effectiveFebruary 1, 2019 On the first of February, we will be switching from an annualbilling cycle to a quarterly billing cycle…
After conducting extensive research and receiving feedback from ourcustomers, we have determined that most customers strongly prefer a quarterlybilling cycle rather than an annual one In order to best suit your needs, …
This letter is simply to notify you of the upcoming changes, and noimmediate action is required from you at this time We thank you for yourcontinued business
Sincerely,
John Bravo
John Bravo
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Trang 28Practice 2: Type this letter in layout 1, 2 and 3
Trang 29Jacquenlien Brauer Jacquenlien Brauer’s address Jacquenlien Brauer’s email/ phone July 9, 2020
The Middle Atlantic Institude of Technology
Trang 30Structuring the body
4 Point Plan
1 Opening or Introduction
2 Central/ Middle section (details)
3 Conclusion (Action or Response)
4 Close
30
Trang 31Structuring the body
1 Opening or Introduction (state the reason)
E.g Thank you for your letter of …
Further to our telephone conversation today,…
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Công ty ABC xin cảm ơn thư của bạn hàng đề ngày 20 tháng 3 2020 về hỏi mua áo len phụ nữ.
ABC Co thank you for your letter of 20 March 2020 for Ladies’ woolens.
Chúng tôi muốn mua đồ gốm sứ Việt Nam nhằm mục đích xuất khẩu.
We are interested in Vietnamese china and pottery for exporting purpose
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2 Central/ Middle section (details)
Trang 34Translate this sentences into English
bảng giá hiện hành cho những mặt hàng nói trên
We would be obliged if you would send us a catalogue and the
current price list for the mentioned items
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If payment is not received within seven days, this matter will be placed in the hands of our solicitor.
Trang 36Translate this sentences into English
chúng tôi sẽ đặt mua với số lượng lớn hơn trong tương lai
If we feel we can develop this market in Vietnam, we will place
larger orders with you in the future.
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Usually, a simple one-line closing sentence
A prompt reply would be appreciated.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Trang 38Practice 4: Match the sentences to their correct section in the letter
1 We can offer you immediate shipment of 100 tons of rice… A Introduction
2 Please let me know if you need any further question B Middle/ Central
3 We thank you for your inquiry of 1st June concerning wool
4 If the account is still not settled, we will have to take legal
Answer: 1-B; 2-D; 3-A; 4-C
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