Đề thi và bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 30/3/2017

It is understandable that people want to remove advertisements from our lives because advertisements can be disturbing, therefore the pumping out of advertisement on the internet is dist

Đề thi và bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 30/3/2017

The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience You should write at least 250 words

Sample Answer 1:

It is a fact that advertisements are now widespread on mass media Some people believe that these do not serve any beneficial purposes and even spoil the society There should be an advertising restriction to hinder their negative impacts on customers So everything has its own pros and cons and that is why someone rightly said that all that glitters is not gold

It is understandable that people want to remove advertisements from our lives because advertisements can be disturbing, therefore the pumping out of advertisement on the internet is distractive when doing research online and insertion of ads during TV dramas and movies is obnoxious Moreover,

advertisements are sometimes misleading and cause impulsive purchase thus the exaggeration and

eye-binding techniques employed in the advertisement overshadow the true function of products and the consumers, especially the young people, would fall victims to this intensive commercial completion

On the other side, it is irrefutable that the proponents of advertisement argue that it is unfair to ban

advertisement because it is the only efficient and viable way to show their products If the advertisement

is eradicated then the link between products and consumers would be cut off Without advertisement, companies would find it hard to reach out to their customers Consequently, giant companies would manipulate the market and small companies would never be known by the public Furthermore,

advertisement provides more options to consumers

To draw the conclusion, I pen down by stating that advertisement is disturbing now and then, there is realistic need of it The government should make them more trustworthy Nowadays, the advertisement

is an inescapable and necessary existence

(Written by - Sukhdev Gautam)

Sample Answer 2:

There is no denying the fact that advertisement plays a vital role in human life The advertisement is the backbone of commerce and industry It is a source of information as well as the source of entertainment

It is important for us These days are the days of marketing We cannot think of life without

advertisement Without advertisements, life is like a fish without water No businessman or industrialist

can ever hope of tapping the market without proper advertisement Advertisements are all around us - on television, radio and newspaper

Apropos to above parable about the conversation, many people hold the opinion that advertisement is an important part of our life because the advertisement is the best way to educate the people For instance, they inform the people about new products, their uses, merits and other similar products available in the market Moreover, many advertisements are issued by the government agencies, NGOs, and social

welfare organisation which have great value in education the people Furthermore, advertisements raise the standard of living of the people

On the flip side, those who disagree with this point of view mention that those advertisements have their disadvantages because they distort and exaggerate reality In addition to it, they aim at profits

Furthermore, another objection is that many advertisements are bad for that they provide the wrong information to the people Besides this, the producers have become profit hungry They throw the moral values to the winds

To conclude, I pen down by stating that advertisements put deep influence on the people’s mind Some advertisements advise people the direction of the right path Good advertisements help the people to choose the right products and make informed decisions

(Written by - Sukhdev Gautam)

Band 7:

Advertising has great emphasis on the general public Nowadays,the consumerism changed the

dynamics of shopping trends.The vast media and advertising go hand in hand.The numerous ways to advertise the product hit the general attitude of buying the product There is always clash of arguments among people,some assert that the society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because

it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging while others presume that advertising plays a crucial role in today's scenario In my perception, advertising is the present and the future and it must not

be banned

To begin with,one can not shun the fact that solely because of advertisement,an individual came to know about the on going trends and the new better products available in the market It has been seen that from last one decade,advertisement substantially affect the industry Advertisement should not be banned because it attributed to numerous parameters Firstly,convenience for public, an individual may learn and aware about the new products and items in the market for example, television is the ultimate source to

fetch information about the different product currently present in stores Secondly, price list,one could compare the prices of various products present in the market and could buy as accordance to his/her pocket as for an illustration,there are countless food brands in the market,offering same item at different rate such as potato chips etcetera Thirdly, one can learn about the difficult schemes and offers in a simple way because the company portrays their products in a most effective and easy way With the passage of time, everything is changed in the surroundings and advertisement is the ultimate result of technological development,so it must be welcomed and one should enjoy the immense benefits from the advertisement

Moving further,as everything that glitters is not gold,sometimes the faux people portrays their product in

a wrong way for an example the fairness creams and lotions which offer skin fairness in 4 weeks and pragmatically it is not possible The general public is very innocent and struck in the traps of the leading companies Some advertisement serves no useful purpose The monopoly of the leading companies, largely harm the public These are the reasons because of which the good products also seems to be fake There are some herbal products which has got no severe harm but an individual never believe on it because of bad experiences in the past Moreover, the companies target children because they are most innocent and largely influenced customers In addition to this,companies offers different perks to

children as for an example,a free toy with a chocolate or any food item An individual must not trust the advertisement blindly and must take care of the plagiarism

To recapitulate,I would like to say that advertisement is an essential need of today One must enjoy the benefits of advertisement and keep himself/herself updated and should also take care of the faux

products