Combining SentencesA semi-colon ; is used to connect clauses and is the most important punctuation mark for combining sentences.. If no substitution is necessary, choose “Leave as is.”
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is also called figures of speech
It changes the literal meaning of
words • to express complexity,
• to capture a physical or sensory
effect, or
• to extend meaning
There are a number of
figures of speech Some of the more common ones are:
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things, using “like” or “as.”
Forrest Gump’s famous simile is
“Life is like a box of chocolates You
never know what you’re gonna get.”
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things without the use “like” or “as.”
An example is, “Your eyes are the
windows to your soul.” – Immanuel Kant.
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He ate a thousand pounds of pizza
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animal, thing or idea
The wind screamed my name.
The window flew open.
The book jumped out of my locker.
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Protagonist - main character
Observer - person who is indirectly involved in the story
Non-participant - not at all involved, can be omniscient (knows everything)
Someone who tells the story
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audience, subject or character
The tone is conveyed through the
author’s words and details.
Think of when someone says, “Don’t use
that tone with me!” Your tone can
change the meaning of what you say
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or the message the author is
conveying This message is usually
about life, society or human nature
Flashbacks
A scene in a narrative that returns to an
earlier time.
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by saying the exact opposite of
what is really meant
(Sarcasm is one kind of irony
It is praise which is really an insult
Sarcasm generally involves malice, the desire to put someone down, for example
“ This is my brilliant son who failed
out of college.”
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Listen to the following TRUE accounts…
1 The average cost of rehabilitating a seal after the Exxon Valdez oil spill in Alaska was $80,000 At
a special ceremony, two of the most expensively
saved animals were released back into the wild amid cheers and applause from onlookers A minute later, they were both eaten by a killer whale.
2 Iraqi terrorist Khay Rahnajet didn’t pay enough postage on a letter bomb It came back with “return
to sender” stamped on it Forgetting it was the
bomb, he opened it and was blown to bits.
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• Dramatic says that it could be acted
out, and is a form of drama,
• while monologue defines it as a speech
that one person makes, either to
themselves or to another
• A dramatic monologue is written to
reveal both the situation at hand and the character herself.
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meaning kind or type
The major genres in literature are
poetry, fiction, drama and essays.
It can also refer to more specific
types of literature such as
comedy, tragedy, epic poetry or
science fiction.
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designed to convince reader to view things from the author’s point of view
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of an individuals life, written by
another person
Proverbs or Maxims
are old sayings which illustrate a truth
“An apple a day keeps the doctor away”
doesn’t mean you have to eat apples everyday The general truth being communicated is that a diet that is rich in fruits can keep one healthy and
not in need of medical care.
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Theme Tone Mood Stanza Drama Foil Character
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while you’re reading
Some literature makes you feel sad, others joyful, still others angry
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groups of lines, often with a
regular pattern, these groups are
known as stanzas or verses.
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That’s when characters tell a story in a theatrical performance.
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This may be an unfamiliar term.
A foil is a person who is paired with
another character to develop the latter’s
traits and personality by contrast.
A foil is much like the twin character in class, rank, and background, but has
opposing characteristics that provide a mirror to those of the paired character.
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Sentences can be combined by using three punctuation marks:
the dash (-), the colon (:), the semi-colon (;).
You can also use coordinating conjunctions
(and, or, but, so)
To combine sentences (clauses) that are
grammatically equal.
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A dash (-)
is used to add more information about
some part of your sentence
It is rather informal and although you may see it when you read, it is better to
avoid this punctuation in your writing.
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A colon (:)
is also used to add more information
and especially to give examples of
something in the sentence
What follows a colon may be a clause (He is
a great athlete: he plays soccer, baseball and basketball.) or a group of words that
cannot stand by themselves (He plays many
sports: soccer, baseball and basketball.)
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A semi-colon (;)
is used to connect clauses and is the
most important punctuation mark for
combining sentences.
It can be used alone to connect clauses
(He’s not heavy; he’s my brother.)
It can also be used to connect clauses
together with special linking words such as
however, moreover, therefore.
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Sample Question: Choose the answer that is the
most effective substitute for each underlined part
of the sentence If no substitution is necessary, choose “Leave as is.”
The Alaska rivers are clear and sparkling in
summer however; they are frozen in winter.
(A) in summer, however they are frozen in winter (B) in summer, however, they are frozen in winter (C) in summer: however they are frozen in winter (D) Leave as is.
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Solution: What punctuation mark joins the two
thoughts into one sentence?
A semicolon joins them, but the semicolon is in the
wrong place “However” goes with the second
sentence, so the semicolon needs to be placed
before it The correct answer is B.
The Alaska rivers are clear and sparkling in summer
however; they are frozen in winter.
(A) in summer, however they are frozen in winter.
(B) in summer, however, they are frozen in winter.
(C) in summer: however they are frozen in winter.
(D) Leave as is.
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There are three strands:
Writing Strategies Writing Conventions Writing Applications
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Writing Strategies
12 test questions that ask you to read a rough draft of an essay and make modifications to
improve the thesis statement or topic sentences
You will also have to use synthesize information or
revise the writing to improve the logic and
coherence of the paragraph
Combining sentences is included
in this section.
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(e.g semicolons, colons, ellipses, hyphens)
You will also have to identify and use clauses and
understand sentence construction (parallel
structure, proper placement of modifiers, etc.)
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Writing Application
On the writing portion of the
CAHSEE exam, you will be given a
“ Writing Task” which is an essay question
You may be asked to do one of the following:
Biographical Narrative Response to Literature
Expository Essay Persuasive Essay Business Letter
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Biographical Narrative:
This writing is often about a real person who is
important to you.
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Response to Literature:
You read a passage
[literature], and write an
essay [response] based on
that passage
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Expository Essay:
Exposition is most often nonfiction,
meaning that it deals with real
people, things, events and places.
The question may ask you to write about a moment in history and its
importance in today’s world
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Persuasive Essay:
A persuasive essays ask you to defend a position or issue you support
An issue is something about
which people disagree
The individuals who score these essays want you to
include arguments of those who disagree with you, then
explain why your argument is stronger
A sample question may ask you to write an essay for your school paper in which you convince the readers of the importance of getting
rid of the trash and making the school more attractive
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Make sure to answer all parts
of the writing task
If the question is asking you to describe the main characters
personality and emotions,
make sure to address both
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# 2 Remember
Make sure you have the correct structure with
a strong introduction, body and conclusion.
Use specific details and examples from the passage to demonstrate your understanding of the main idea’s and the author’s purpose
Vary your sentences to make your writing
more interesting.
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# 3 Remember
Check for mistakes
in grammar, spelling, punctuation,
capitalization and sentence
formation.
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Other Key Points
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Other Key Points
When you give evidence
to support your argument,
it should be explicit and direct
(or specific textual details and
quotes to support the thesis and
main idea) instead of implicit or indirect (in the form of summary).