4 Regarding individual economical merits, customers now can enjoy inexpensive purchases of diverse types of goods, which is particularly favorable for the households with limited incomes
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Topic
People in community now could buy cheaper consumer goods Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Bài mẫu band 8.0 của thầy TOÀN ZIM
(1) At the contemporary market, buyers have a wider range of choices for more affordable commodities. (2) Although some benefits can
be seen from the phenomenon, the drawbacks are more significant
(3) The provision of cheaper goods presents several advantages (4) Regarding individual economical merits, customers now
can enjoy inexpensive purchases of diverse types of goods, which is
particularly favorable for the households with limited incomes. (5) On the
societal level, the affordability of consumer products promotes people’s purchasing power, which contributes to the development of the economy (6) It is common knowledge that the market’s demand for products increases when commodities’ exorbitant prices are
reduced. (7) Therefore, people will be attracted to buying these products on
a large scale, fostering the general prosperity of a country’s economy
(8) However, those advantages above still cannot overshadow the disadvantages. (9) As the goods’ prices are inexpensive and the quantity is
huge to satisfy the market’s need , yet businesses still have to balance their capital and generate more profit , the quality of commodities might
be taken for granted. (10) In the long term, without quality products ,
customers will gradually lose their trust in those products’ manufacturers, which directly jeopardizes the economy . (11) Another repercussion worth mentioning is that the environment may suffer. (12) In order to meet the
enormous demand from buyers, companies have to expand their factories and accelerate their production process , which causes much harm to the surrounding due to their toxic waste and exhaust
(13) In conclusion, the benefits of cheapening modern goods should not be
overrated as the disadvantages are greater
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Essay analysis
Trang 2· Customers now can enjoy inexpensive purchases of diverse types of goods, which is particularly favorable for the households with limited incomes
· The affordability of consumer products promotes people’s purchasing power, which contributes to the development of the economy.
Disadvantages:
· The quality of commodities might be taken for granted.
· The environment may suffer.
Vocabulary:
· The contemporary market: thị trường đương đại
· Affordable commodities: mặt hàng giá rẻ
· Purchasing power: sức mua
· The market’s demand: nhu cầu của thị trường
· Commodities’ exorbitant price: giá cả đắt đỏ của hàng hóa
· Quality products: hàng chất lượng
· Toxic waste and exhaust: chất khí thải độc hại
Sentence construction:
1 Câu đơn
2 Câu phức
3 Câu đơn
4 Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần
5 Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần
6 Câu phức
7 Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần
8 Câu đơn
9 Câu phức-ghép
10.Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần
11.Câu đơn
12.Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần
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