IELTS WRITING 12 03 2016

Bài mẫu band 8.0++ cho đề thi ngày 12/3/2016Topic: Some believe that it is good for a country’s culture to import films and TV programmes, while others think it is better for a country t

Bài mẫu band 8.0++ cho đề thi ngày 12/3/2016

Topic:

Some believe that it is good for a country’s culture to import films and TV programmes, while others think it is better for a country to have their own films and TV programmes Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Bài mẫu band 8.0+ - Toàn ZIM

(1) There has been a difference of opinion regarding the merits of foreign movies and TV channels to the culture of a country as people believe

domestic products would be better. (2) From my perspective, both of those

categories are equally important

(3) On the one hand, people usually believe foreign films and TV telecasts can contribute to the cultural diversity of a

nation. (4)Fascinating  social norms and practices, such as public hugging which is common in the US, can follow the wave to other nations as Hollywood blockbusters  are becoming more popular. (5) This phenomenon

is believed to benefit the richness of the host country’s traditional backgrounds  (6) Moreover, the import of international movies and TV

shows could perfect the flaws of thecountry’s sets of beliefs  (7) In

Vietnam, for example, the ceremony of funerals is often perpetuated with ongoing depraved customs  such as gambling and drinking. (8) Since

the arrival of TV shows from more developed nations, which triggers a new and civilized way of thinking, such practices have been gradually aborted

(9) On the other hand, it appears to me that producing local movies and TV

programs has the same importance. (10) Citizens of a country would be able

to acquire knowledge about their own culture. (11) Apparenly, profound

insights of traditional values can be vividly conveyed in cinemas and on the

media if the content is made by local people. (12)The second point to be

considered is that this way can relieve the worry of cultural assimilation which has emerged as a detriment to the existence of a

country’s traditional beliefs and customs. (13) In fact, if  exotic practices are absorded thoughtlessly, it might lead to the oblivion of the long-standing ethics, which emphasizes the necessity for domestic products

(14) In conclusion, I would argue that both types of films and TV telecasts

play an equal role in a country’s culture

(304 words) – Band 8+

Essay analysis:

Với chủ đề này thì mình đưa ra 2 idea cho mỗi arugment như sau:

Foreign films and TV programs:

· Cultural diversity

· Perfect the flaws of the country’s sets of beliefs.

Domestic films and TV programs:

· Acquire knowledge about national culture

· Relieve the worry of cultural assimilation

Một số từ vựng hữu ích mà mọi người có thể học được như là:

· TV telecasts: Chương trình TV

· Cultural diversity: sự đa dạng văn hóa

· Depraved customs: hủ tục

· Cultural assimilation: sự hòa tan văn hóa

· Exotic practices: tục lệ xa lạ

· Long-standing ethics: chuẩn mực đạo đức lâu đời

1- Câu phức

2- Câu đơn

3- Câu phức

4- Câu phức

5- Câu đơn

6- Câu đơn

7- Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần

8- Câu phức

9- Câu đơn

10- Câu đơn

11- Câu phức

12- Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần

13- Câu phức

14- Câu phức