Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planet to live, such as Mars.. Sample band 8+ Many people believe more financial resources should be allocated to univer
Trang 1Đề thi IELTS Writing ngày 16-04-2016
Topic: In the future, it seems more difficult to live on the Earth Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planet to live, such as Mars.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample band 8+
Many people believe more financial resources should be allocated
to universe studies in order to discover a new habitable
environment for humans due to the increasingly harsh living conditions on the Earth.In my opinion, this idea is completely justifiable.
The population explosion is the first urgent matter urging results from space studies which currently are in need of more money to afford facilities and modern machinery The world is facing the threat
from the lack of land and accommodation for the ever-increasing rate of
birth Especially in densely populated cities like Hanoi, it is a common
picture of people struggling to find an apartment This forces humans to resort to alternatives of changing living places to other planets Such an idea would not be actualized without enough money, emphasizing the demand for sponsorships
Another thing which justifies the budget spent on discovering a new suitable home for human beings is the depletion of natural resources, such as fuel and water Unfortunately, fossil fuel and water reservoir are being over-exploited for short-term benefits In the long
term, the essential elements for life sustainability will be used up, and human life will be put at stake since there is no fuel to maintain production or transportation Therefore, if there is even a fragile hope to discover a new environment, people should value the opportunity and invest money in researches on the space to ensure the survival of human race
In conclusion, I strongly suppose that financial investments on discovering another planet as a new home replacing the Earth are reasonable
Tác giả: Toàn ZIM - Anh Ngữ ZIM
Word counts: 259
Band Score: 8++
Essential words list
ZIM ACADEMY
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Trang 2 the increasingly harsh living conditions: điều kiện sống ngày càng khắc nghiệt
rate of birth: tỉ lệ sinh
depletion of natural resources: cạn kiệt tài nguyên thiên nhiên
thạch
life sustainability: duy trì sự sống
the survival of human race: sự sống còn của loài người
ZIM ACADEMY
Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi
http://zim.vn