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3 2 * i Part S : Style: All the Write Stuff A Note on Words and Expressions to Avoid for Non-Native Speakers If you are a non-native speaker of English, this chapter is especially impor

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Danger, Will Robinson

Proverbs are often

con-fused with clichés, but then again, I'm often confused with Cindy Crawford Such is the way of the world Unfortunately, I'm not Cindy, and proverbs aren't clichés Proverbs are economical phrases that pack a great deal of meaning in a brief wallop; a cliché, on the other hand, is bloated and meaningless

Gorgeous George

George Orwell was the pen name of Eric

Blair, one of the most brilliant English stylists

ever In his landmark essay "Politics and the

English Language," Orwell wrote, "Modern

English prose consists less and less of words

chosen for the sake of their meaning, and

more and more of phrases tacked together like

the sections of a prefabricated henhouse." He

concluded: "The great enemy of clear language

is insincerity When there is a gap between

one's real and one's declared aims, one turns

as it were instinctively to long words and

exhausted idioms, like a cuttlefish squirting

out ink." You've read about Orwell before

in this book He deserves more ink,

be-cause he nailed style in writing

But Orwell didn't just complain

Fortu-nately, he suggests a number of remedies

I've yet to come across six guidelines that

make more sense than Orwell's And here

they are:

1 Never use a metaphor, simile, or other

figure of speech that you are used to

seeing in print (In other words, cut all

those clichés!)

2 Never use a long word where a short one will do (Remember what you learned

in Chapter 23 on word choice, or diction.)

3 If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out (Look back to Chapter 22.)

4 Never use the passive voice when you can use the active (This was covered in Chapter 22.)

5 Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think

of an everyday English equivalent

6 Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous

Take My Word for It

Steer clear of slanted

lan-guage, too These are

emotion-ally loaded words and phrases designed to inflame readers Describing a lab experiment as

"viciously maiming helpless rats"

is an example of slanted lan-guage At its most offensive, slanted language descends into propaganda; at its best, slanted

language merely offends readers

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A Note on Words and Expressions to Avoid for Non-Native Speakers

If you are a non-native speaker of English, this chapter is especially important to you for several reasons:

• Many other countries are not as concerned with "politically correct" language as America has become recently Thus, the issue of sexist and biased language is not as significant or likely to cause offense in your native language

• Ornate and flowery language may be considered more polite than direct dis-course in your native language This is true in Japanese, for example In general, direct, blunt speech is judged as very rude in Japanese culture

• Certain bodily functions may not be referred to with euphemisms in your culture However, these functions are cloaked indirect expressions in English Thus, knowing when to use euphemisms and when not to use euphemisms may pres-ent special problems for you

To deal with these issues, study the documents in your workplace and read

well-respected newspapers such as The New York Times Listen to the language used by public speakers and leaders who are held in high esteem Do not rely on television,

entertainers, or sports figures to help you master correct usage

The Least You Need to Know

• Use bias-free language

• Avoid doublespeak, including jargon, bureaucratic language, inflated language, and euphemisms

• Nix on clichés, too

• Write simply and directly

Part

In Your Write Mind

Brenda Starr and Lois Lane can whip out a story in a flash, with nary a chipped nail According to the movies and television, even L.A lawyers, New York City cops, and lowly office workers sit at computer terminals and bang out perfectiy crafted memos, letters, or reports at breakneck speed Hollywood would have us think that effective writing is a cakewalk— without the cake, of course

On the other hand, we have Hollywood's picture of the starving writer, toiling away in anonymity in a garret, painfully facing that blank sheet of paper while waiting for the muse The floor is littered with a mountain of crumpled pages; towers of empty coffee cups teeter against the stained walls

Of course, both are equally unrealistic views of the writing process, yet each contains a germ of truth In this part, you explore the process of writ-ing and learn how to produce powerful resumes, cover letters, business communications, and personal writing

Chapter

Business Writing:

Write Angles

In This Chapter

• Design effective business letters

• Create winning resumes and cover letters

• Send business thank you letters

• Deliver good news and bad news in writing

Today, there's stiff competition for positions, and people who can commu-nicate often win out over those who can't Many companies don't advertise

at all, preferring to do their recruiting through formal and informal net-working The stock market is a wild roller coaster—and people are edgy Knowing how to write a powerful resume and cover letter can help you get the job you want If you've already got a job, these tools—along with the ability to write effective business letters and memos—can help you get where you want to be Those are the skills you learn in this chapter

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Letter Perfect

Successful business writers know that an effective document reads well and looks good Here are my top 10 ways to make your documents look as professional as they read:

1 Use white space (the empty space on a page) to separate and emphasize key points

within a letter Provide sufficient white space around paragraphs, too Figure 1

inch to 1 Vi inches on all sides

2 To help readers locate key elements, use indented lists, bullets, or numbers—just like this book does!

3 Use headers (words or phrases that group points) to lead the reader through the

document

4 To get maximum impact, put key elements such as return addresses and com-pany contact information in the top-left and lower-right quadrants of the page

5 Go easy on the bells and whistles such as

high-0 1 «^ r\ J_ j - lighting, decorative devices, fonts, and color

A _ J / Quoth the Maven

Templates (available on

stan-dard software) can make

format-ting business letters, resumes,

and memos a breeze

6 Decide whether to justify the right margin (line

up the type), based on the situation and audience Justified margins let you add about 20 percent more text on the page However, use them only with proportional type to avoid distracting, wide spaces between words

7 For all important business writing, such as letters of application and resumes, use good quality, heavy, white bond paper and matching envelopes Tradition-ally, local printers typeset letterhead, but a good-quality laser printer and soft-ware package can create fine letterhead as well

8 When possible, limit your letters and resumes to one page

9 Consider your audience's needs and expectations Show that you understand the purpose for the business communication and the context in which it is read

10 Use conventional formats, explained in the following section and shown in

Appendix A

Form and Function

Business letters are single-spaced on 8V2 by 11-inch letterhead There are three differ-ent formats you can use: the block style, the modified block style, and the semiblock

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style The differences among the three styles relate to paragraph indentations and the placement of headings and closings

• The block style has all parts of the letter placed flush left

• The modified block style places the

head-ing in the upper-right corner and the

closing and signature in the lower-right

corner, parallel to the heading The

paragraphs are not indented

Danger, Will Robinson

The semiblock style places the heading in

the upper-right corner and the close

and signature in the lower-right corner,

parallel to the heading The paragraphs

are indented

Pick one letter style—the block style, the modified block style, or the semiblock style—and stick with it You're less likely to make mistakes if you're consistent

The following list contains the guidelines for the block style Vary it as explained ear-lier if you want to use the modified block or semiblock style instead

Date

Inside address

Salutation

Body

Close

Signature

Initials

Enclosures

Copies

Month (spelled out), day (followed by a comma), year The recipient's address; place two lines after the date Recipient's title, last name, colon (Dear Ms Streisand:) Short, single-spaced paragraphs stating the information Capitalize the first word, conclude with a comma (Yours truly,) Place two lines after the last line of the letter Sign your name in ink Leave three lines of space after the close for your signature

If the letter is typed by someone other than the writer, insert the typist's initials below the typed name of the sig-natory Capitalize the writer's initials; use lowercase for the typist's (LR:st or LR/st)

"Enclosures" or "Enc." indicates that additional material is included with the letter

List other recipients alphabetically or by rank (cc: Samantha Harris, Tracey Jefferson)

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Kissing Cousins

Although no two kinds of business letters are identical, they do share certain features

besides their format

• They are brief but clear

• The relationship between the writer and reader is established at the beginning of the letter

• Any necessary background information is provided

Danger, Will Robinson

Using e-mail addresses

like sonofsatan, hotlips69, and

imababy will get you kicked out

of the pile so fast you'll get

whip-lash Your e-mail should read:

Firstname_Lastname@carrier, as in

Laurie_Rozakis@Farmingdale.edu

If action is required on the part of the reader, the action is stated outright

If the letter is a response, it mentions the date of the previous contact

The tone matches the occasion A letter to a

col-league is appropriately friendly, but general busi-ness correspondence is formal

The overall tone is always polite

Business communication falls into the following general categories: letters of applica-tion, informational letters, and memos Let's check out these categories

Resumes and Cover Letters: Get on the Fast Track

You don't have to rescue a child from under a flaming Chevy or donate a kidney to get

the job you want (although it probably wouldn't hurt) You do have to write effective

resumes and cover letters—and writing is a lot less painful than heroics

A resume is a persuasive summary of your qualifications for employment It is always

accompanied by a cover letter Employers use resumes and cover letters to decide

whom to interview An effective cover letter and resume are not like sweat pants: One size doesn't fit all To get you some face time, a winning cover letter and resume must be tailored to suit the employer's needs and your qualifications as closely as possible For that reason, many people have several different versions of their resume Here's how to make your resume work for you

You Could Look It Up

A resume is a

persua-sive summary of your qualifications

for employment

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Resumes

As you write your resume, emphasize the things you've done that are most relevant to the position for which you are applying and show how you are superior to other

can-didates Emphasize what you can do for the company, not what the company can do for

you Be realistic, use the layout to emphasize key points, and relate your experience to the job you want

Here are the facts you must include:

• Name, address, phone number, e-mail address

• Education

• Relevant experience

Here are the facts you can include:

• Career objective

• Previous and current employment

• Promotions

• Foreign language and computer language proficiency

• Volunteer positions

• Education and course work

• Honors and achievements

• References

Here are the facts you never include:

• Age

• Health (It's assumed that every candidate's health is excellent.)

• Religious affiliation, political affiliation

• Race or ethnicity

• Gender or sexual orientation

• Marital status (as in married, widowed, divorced, or single)

• Information about children or pets

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You're expected to put your accomplishments in the best possible light, but always tell

the truth Background checks are a hot topic in personnel circles today Experts say a decade of litigation has nervous employers turning more and more to professional background checkers, who report that caseloads are growing at 30 percent a year Investigators find discrepancies or outright lies in about one-third of the resumes

they check Gloryoski!

Shooting Yourself in the Foot

Here are the top resume turnoffs

Resume No-No's

Poor formatting and exotic fonts

Unnecessary personal information

Buzzwords that obscure meaning

Vague descriptions of achievements

Incomplete contact information

Spelling and grammar mistakes

John J JobSeeker, Àn^Àf^ax^t'

I'm a single white male I'm a Libra

As the Director of Integral Operations,

my mission involves convergences in delivering synergized solutions to my strategic customers

"I increased widget sales." Instead, say

"I increased widget sales by 25 percent

or $2 million."

Some people actually forget to give their own names and telephone numbers! The worst is misspelling the name of the company or contact person

Chronological Resume

There are two kinds of resumes: chronological and skills Although each type of resume

lists basically the same information, the information is arranged very differently

A chronological resume summarizes your accomplishments in reverse chronological

order (starting with the most recent and working backward) It stresses degrees, job titles, and dates Consider using a chronological resume when

• Your education and experience are logical preparation for the job you want

• You have an impressive education or job history