As with solitary appositives, appositive phrases are placed near the noun or pronoun they describe.. Part and Participle A participle is a form of a verb that functions as an adjective.
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Confusing: Do you know my friend Bill?
Is Bill the friend or is the speaker talking to Bill?
Clear: Do you know my friend, Bill?
Appositive Phrases
Appositive phrases are nouns or pronouns with modifiers Appositive phrases provide
additional information and description to the sentence As with solitary appositives,
appositive phrases are placed near the noun or pronoun they describe For example:
• Columbia University, the second-largest
landowner in New York City {after the
Catholic Church), is part of the Ivy
League
• David Prowse, the guy in the Darth Vader
suit in the Star Wars movies, did not find
out that his lines were going to be
dubbed over by James Earl Jones until
he saw the screening of the movie
Appositives are great stylistic devices because they allow you to eliminate unnecessary words and put more information in one sentence They can also help you
• Create more graceful sentences
• Eliminate repetition
• Create a beat or rhythm in your writing
• Make your writing more interesting
Here's an example:
Two sentences: Phineas T Barnum was a great American showman Barnum was near
death in 1891 when a New York newspaper asked if he'd like to have his obituary
published while he could still read it
One sentence: Phineas T Barnum, a great American showman, was near death in 1891
when a New York newspaper asked if he'd like to have his obituary published while he could still read it
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nouns or pronouns with modifiers
In grammar lingo, nonessential appositives are called "nonrestric-tive."
More on this and other stylistic devices in Part 5
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appositives with commas
The Moment of Truth
As with appositives, appositive phrases come in two varieties: essential and tial Don't set off essential appositives with commas, but be sure to set off nonessen-tial appositives with commas
Essential appositive: The famous British mystery writer
Danger, Will Robinson ASa t h a Christie disappeared in 1924 and was missing Don't set off essential
Nonessential appositive: Agatha Christie, the famous British mystery writer, disappeared in 1924 and was
missing for 10 days
One of the most common writing errors concerns misuse of commas with appositives and appositive phrases Writers sometimes set off essential appositives with commas, but neglect those poor nonessential ones You would never do that, would you? To make sure you're not guilty of that comma abuse, let's take a minute to practice, shall we? Add commas as needed to each of the following sentences
1 Isadora Duncan a great American dancer of the early twentieth century has become almost as famous for her death as her dancing
2 John Styth Pemberton an Atlanta pharmacist created the original Coca-Cola
in 1886
3 Richard Nixon is the only American president who was forced to resign his office
4 King Louis XIV of France a ballet dancer from the time he was a teenager established the Royal Ballet Company
5 Robert Benchley the American humorist and critic was a member of the
Algonquin table of noted wits
6 Nellie Melba a famous Australian soprano of the late nineteenth and early twen-tieth century gave her name to a snack food called "melba toast."
7 The centaur a mythological creature is said to feast on raw flesh and prodigious amounts of liquor
8 Alexander the Great died of a fever
9 Ferrets a domesticated variety of polecats were first tamed in 1500 B.C.E by the Egyptians
10 Some people consider the number 13 unlucky
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1 Isadora Duncan, a great American dancer of the early twentieth century, has
become almost as famous for her death as her dancing
2 John Styth Pemberton, an Atlanta pharmacist, created the original Coca-Cola in
U
3 No punctuation change needed
4 King Louis XIV of France, a ballet dancer from the time he was a teenager,
established the Royal Ballet Company
5 Robert Benchley, the American humorist and critic, was a member of the
Algonquin table of noted wits
6 Nellie Melba, a famous Australian soprano of the late nineteenth and early
twentieth century, gave her name to a snack food called "melba toast."
7 The centaur, a mythological
crea-ture, is said to feast on raw flesh and
prodigious amounts of liquor
8 No punctuation change needed
9 Ferrets, a domesticated variety
of polecats, were first tamed in
1500 B.C.E by the Egyptians
10 No punctuation change needed
Take My Word for It
Appositives, as with other parts
of a sentence, can be com-pound To create a compound appositive, connect the apposi-tives with a correlative
conjunc-tion: and, but, or, for, so, nor, and yet
Verbal Phrases: Talk Soup
A verbal is a verb form used as another part of speech Like Gaul, verbals come in
three varieties: participles, gerunds, and infinitives Each type has a different function in
a sentence:
• Participles function as adjectives
• Gerunds function as nouns
• Infinitives function as nouns, adjectives,
or adverbs
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A verbal is a verb form
used as another part of speech
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Although a verbal doesn't function as a verb in a sentence, it does retain two qualities
of a verb:
• A verbal can be described by adverbs and adverbial phrases
• A verbal can add modifiers to become a verbal phrase
Let's get to know the three verbals a little better
Part and Participle
A participle is a form of a verb that functions as an adjective There are two kinds of participles: present participles and past participles
• Present participles end in -ing (jumping, burning,
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-• Past participles usually end in -ed, -t, or -en (jumped, burnt, spoken)
A participle is a form
of a verb that functions as an
adjective
In the mood to add some participle action to your sentences? Here's how you do it:
• The howling children disturbed the neighbors
The present participle "howling" describes the noun "children."
• Fred Flintstone gave Barney Rubble a crumbling rock
The present participle "crumbling" describes the noun "rock."
• The frozen candy bar broke her $900 bridgework
The past participle "frozen" describes the noun "candy bar."
• Annoyed, Rita ate dinner by herself in the bathroom
The past participle "annoyed" describes the noun "Rita."
Don't confuse participles and verbs Participles aren't preceded by a helping verb, as these examples show:
• The sputtering car jerked down the road, (participle)
• The car was sputtering down the road, (verb)
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Participle phrases contain a participle modified by an adverb or an adverbial phrase The whole kit and caboodle acts as an adjective, as these examples show:
• Swimming slowly, I didn't notice the shark on my tail
The participle phrase "swimming slowly" describes the pronoun "I."
• Annoyed by its heavy breathing, I told it to get lost
The participle phrase "Annoyed by its heavy breathing" describes the pronoun "I." However, the participle phrase can also be placed after the word it describes In that case, it is usually set off by commas, as in this example:
• "My sister, burning the toast, looked distracted."
Like appositives, participles and participle phrases are an indispensable part of the
writer's bag of tricks because they allow you to create concise and interesting
tences Use them to combine information from two or more sentences into one sen-tence Notice how much more punch the following sentence has when it is combined
by using a participle:
Two sentences: Noel Coward made a slight but pointed adjustment to an old cliché He
once described another writer as every other inch a gentleman
One sentence: Making a slight but pointed adjustment to the old cliché, Noel Coward
once described another writer as every other inch a gentleman
Gerund Phrases
A gerund is a form of a verb used as a noun Remember the following two guidelines
when you hunt for gerunds:
• Gerunds always end in -ing
• Gerunds always act as nouns
Gerunds can function as subjects, direct objects, indirect objects, objects of a preposi-tion, predicate nominatives, and appositives Here are some examples of gerunds:
• Leroy expanded his skills by studying ^^0^%
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the preposition "by." ^ « 4 3 ? A g e r u n d is Q v e r b f o r m
• At the age of 10, Irving started running use< ^ QS a n o u n
-The gerund "running" is a direct object
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• My mother's sole occupation, kvetching, makes her tedious company
The gerund "kvetching" (an especially virulent form of complaining) is an
appositive in this sentence
Like a participle, a gerund can be part of a phrase In that case, the whole package is
called a gerund phrase (Got you with that one, didn't I?) Here are some gerund
phrases busy at work in their sentences:
• The quiet, steady rowing soothed him
The gerund phrase is "the quiet, steady rowing."
Danger, Will Robinson
Don't confuse gerunds
and present participles, because
both end in -ing A gerund
func-tions only as a noun, while a
participle functions only as an
modifier
• My evening routine features jogging slowly around the block
The gerund phrase is "jogging slowly around the block."
• Thousands of "Dead Heads" show their
dedica-tion to their departed leader by following what s left of The Grateful Dead around the country
The gerund phrase is "following what's left of The Grateful Dead around the country."
Infinitive Phrases: The Final Frontier
Last but not least we have the infinitive, a form of the verb that comes after the word
to and acts as a noun, adjective, or adverb Versatile little babies, infinitives can fill as
many roles as gerunds, with the addition of adjectives and adverbs Here are some examples:
• To succeed takes courage, foresight, and luck
The infinitive is "to succeed," and it functions as the subject
• Alone in her cubicle, all she wanted was to survive
The infinitive is "to survive," and it functions as the direct object
• Afraid to move, she froze in terror
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The infinitive is a verb
form that comes after the word to
and functions as a noun,
adjec-tive, or adverb The infinitive is "to move," and it modifies the
adverb "afraid."
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An infinitive can be used as a phrase An infinitive phrase, as with the other verbal phrases, contains modifiers that together act as a single part of speech Following are some examples:
• His goal, to break into Fort Knox, was
never achieved
The infinitive phrase is "to break into
Fort Knox" and modifies the noun "goal."
• The pilgrim's hope was to reach the shrine
before sundown
The infinitive phrase "to reach the
shrine before sundown" describes "hope."
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Don't confuse infinitives with prepositional phrases that begin with to Remember that a prepositional phrase always ends with a noun or a pronoun; an infinitive always ends with a verb
The Least You Need to Know
• A phrase is a group of words, without a subject or a verb, that functions as a
single part of speech Phrases cannot stand alone as independent units
• Prepositional phrases begin with a preposition and end with a noun or pronoun; they can function as adjectival phrases and adverbial phrases
• Appositives rename another noun or pronoun; appositive phrases include modi-fiers
• Verbals are verb forms used as another part of speech Participles function as adjectives, gerunds function as nouns, infinitives function as nouns, adjectives,
or adverbs
• This sounds a lot more difficult than it is
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Clauses: Kickin' It Up a Notch
In This Chapter
• Learn about independent clauses
• Discover dependent clauses
• Explore adverb, adjective, and noun clauses
You know all about Santa Claus, retractable claws, and Claus von Bulow There's no reason to be claustrophobic: Clauses are your friends
In this chapter, you meet independent and dependent clauses, including adverb,
adjective, and noun clauses Along the way, you learn how to use clauses to add description, show relationships between ideas, and eliminate unneces-sary words
Clauses: Phrases on Steroids
You've got words, you've got phrases, and now you've got clauses The
pro-gression suggests that clauses are pumped up phrases Indeed, clauses tend
to be beefier than phrases That's because a clause is a group of words with its own subject and verb
Like phrases, clauses enrich your written and oral expression by adding details and making your meaning more exact Clauses also allow you to combine ideas to show their relationship This adds logic and cohesion, very good things when you're trying to communicate
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A clause is a group of
words with its own subject and
verb An independent (main)
clause is a complete sentence; a
dependent (subordinate) clause
is part of a sentence A
depend-ent clause cannot stand alone
There are two types of clauses: independent clauses (main clauses) and dependent clauses (subordinate
clauses and relative clauses)
• An independent clause is a complete sentence; it can stand alone
• A dependent (subordinate) clause is part of a sentence; it cannot stand alone
Here are some examples of each type of clause
Until Captain Cooke returned
from his voyage to Tahiti,
Although they had the worst
batting average in baseball,
Because his salary in 1930 and
1931 was $80,000,
Tattooing was not known in the Western world
The New York Mets won the World Series in 1969
Babe Ruth was the best-paid athlete in the world at the time
Strictly Speaking
Why is there a period at the end
of each independent clause?
Because they are complete
sen-tences Note that there's no period
at the end of each dependent
clause That's because they're not
complete sentences
Independent Clauses: Top Dogs
An independent clause contains a subject and a pred-icate It can stand alone as a sentence because it expresses a complete thought The three independ-ent clauses shown on the previous chart all contain a subject and a verb and express a complete idea The following table shows some independent clauses divided into their subjects and predicates
The door opened
Dancing burns up 200 to 400 calories per hour
Elvis's twin died at birth on January 8, 1935
Don Larsen pitched the only perfect game in World Series history
It was the fifth game of the 1956 Series