Tài liệu Writing for toefl ibt book 3rd eidition part 7 ppt

Task: Summarize points and explain how they oppose each other Contrast words: in contrast Revision Checklist CONTENT Thesis Statement | Topics thac support the thesis Main ideas

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summarize the main idea of the reading and of the lecture The transition words in contrast let the reader know that these ideas are in opposition to each other

Task: Summarize points and explain how they oppose each other Contrast words: in contrast

Revision Checklist CONTENT

Thesis Statement

| Topics thac support the thesis Main ideas

Supporting details FLUENCY AND COHESION Transition words

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v CHECK FOR TOPICS THAT SUPPORT THE THESIS The supporting topics are the main idea of the reading and the main idea of the lecture They are presented in the thesis statement The model essay summarizes the main points of the reading and of the lecture and explains how the author's ideas contrast with the speaker's ideas

Main idea of the reading and lecture Reading Advances in technology do not always lead to increased productivity Lecture Investmentin technology is paid back in increased productivity

Thesis Statement

“Topics that support the thesis

W | Main ideas Supporting details FLUENCY AND COHESION

‘Transition words Grammar and Spelling Sentence variety

V CHECK FOR MAIN IDEAS

‘The second paragraph in the model essay supports the reading main idea by summarizing the main points of the reading The third paragraph in the model essay supports the lecture main idea by summarizing the main points of the lecture.

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Writing Skills Integrated Task 91

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prodiacsiviry desks all day This cannes discomfire

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‘The paragraphs in the model essay have topic sentences and supporting details In

the body of the response, the topic sentences of the paragraphs match the topics

introduced in the first paragraph

2: Main idea

«because of technology, workers often stay at their desks all day, but this does not

lead to increased productivity

Supporting details

— This is very uncomfortable and actually lowers productivity

— Workers need to take breaks more often and go out for lunch

— They also should have meetings in person instead of using e-mail

— Inaddition, companies can buy special equipment that is more comfortable to use

Paragraph 3: Main idea

« «technology increases productivity

Supporting details

— Photocopy machines, for example, can copy, collate, and staple much faster than

a person

— When people communicate by e-mail, they do not have to go to so many meet-

ings They can spend more time working

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Fluency and Cohesion

Thesis Statement

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“Transition words show how the ideas fit together The model essay includes appro-

priate transition words

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CONTENT

‘Thesis Statement

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Ít can cause back, neck, and eye pain

In addition, companies can buy special equipment that is more comfortable to use

‘When people communicate

by e-mail, they do not have to

go to so many meetings

They can spend more time working

‘Compound sentence Clearly, technology solves some

problems, but it causes others,

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Model Task 2

Summarize the main points of the reading pastage, and explain how they are supported by the information presented in the lecture

The author explains how pets improve both emotional health and physical health Pets are good companions for lonely people They also give their owners things to do, like hobbies or club activities In addi- reading senmary | tion, pets are a comfort to anxious or worried people Pets are good for

physical health, as well They help people with high blood pressure and heart problems They help people stay physically active They give people a chance to play: Finally, pet therapy is used with elderly people

‘The speaker supports pet therapy He describes a study where pets had a positive effect on the health of heart patients Half the patients had a dog to rake care of The other half only got traditional treat- lectre summary | ment Afcer six months, the patients with pets had lower blood pressure, and they had lost more weight than the other patients They fele

happier, too These are all things that can affect heart disease This is

a case that shows how pet therapy works to improve physical health

(based on Reading 6, page 55 and Lecture 6, page 57)

Content

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Topics that support the thesis Main ideas

Supporting details FLUENCY AND COHESION

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WV CHECK FOR THESIS STATEMENT

‘The model essay has a thesis statement that shows understanding of the task The task asks the writer to summarize points and explain how one supports the other, that is, to compare them The first sentence is the thesis statement It summarizes both the main idea of the reading and of the lecture The transition word and lets the reader know that these ideas are similar to each other

Task: Summarize points and explain how one supports the other Compare word: and

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Writing Skills integrated Task 95

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Thesis Statement

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Main ideas

Supporting details

‘Transition words

V CHECK FOR TOPICS THAT SUPPORT THE THESIS

‘The supporting topics are the main idea of the reading and the main idea of the

lecture They are presented in the thesis statement The model essay summarizes the

main points of the reading and of the lecture and explains how the author’ ideas

are supported by the speaker's ideas

‘Main idea of the reading and lecture

Reading _Animal-assisted therapy is used to improve emotional and physical health

Lecture A study showed positive effects of pet ownership on health

Thesis Statement

Topics that support the thesis

7 | Main ideas Supporting details FLUENCY AND COHESION

“Transition words Grammar and Spelling Sentence variety

V CHECK FOR MAIN IDEAS

The second paragraph in the model essay supports the reading main idea by sum-

marizing the main points of the reading The third paragraph in the model essay

supports the lecture main idea by summarizing the main points of the lecture

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physical activity

patients without pets

‘Thesis Statement

vV CHECK FOR SUPPORTING DETAILS

‘The paragraphs in the model essay have topic sentences and supporting details In the body of the response, the topic sentences of the paragraphs match the topics introduced in the first paragraph

«+» pets improve both emotional health and physical health

Supporting details

— Pets are good companions for lonely people

— They also give their owners things to do, like hobbies or club activities Pets are also a comfort to anxious or worried people

— They help people with high blood pressure and heart problems

— They help people stay physically active

— They give people a chance to play

— Finally, pet therapy is used with elderly people

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«study where pets had a positive effect on the health of heart patients

Supporting details

— Half the patients had a dog to take care of, The other half only got traditional

treatment

— After six months, the patients with pets had lower blood pressure

= They had also lost more weight than the other patients

= They felt happier, too

~ These are all things that can affect heart disease

Fluency and Cohesion

CONTENT

‘Thesis Statement

Main ideas

Supporting details

v CHECK FOR TRANSITION WORDS

Transition words show how the ideas fit together The model essay includes appro-

priate transition words

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Revision Checklist

CONTENT

Thesis Statement

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Transition words

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Sentence variety

v CHECK FOR GRAMMAR AND SPELLING

‘There are no grammar or 5 pelling errors in the model essay

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CONTENT

Thesis Statement

Topics that support the thesis

Main ideas

Supporting details

| | FLUENCY AND COHESION

‘Transition words

Grammar and Spelling

v CHECK FOR SENTENCE VARIETY

‘The model essay uses a variety of sentence structures

Pets are good companions for lonely people

“Adjective clause

He describes a study where pets had a positive effect on the health of heart patients,

‘Compound sentence After six months, the patients

with pets had lower blood pressure, and they had loạt more weight than the other patients

Noun clause

This is a case that shows how pet therapy works to improve

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Model Task 3

Summarize the main points in the reading passage and explain how the information

presented in the lecture adds to them

“The author warns that ocean pollution isa Serious problem: In the

same way, the speaker explains how plastic garbage threatens sea | write on tpic

animals,

The author explains that different things cause ocean pollution

Oil from factories and cities enters the ocean through rivers and

drains Similarly, fertilizers wash into the ocean, and they cause large

growths of algae Toxic chemicals continue to pollute the ocean, as

well There are laws against dumping these chemicals, but the chem- | reading semmary

icals still leak into the ocean Animals eat them, and when we eat

seafood, we eat these chemicals, too There is also a lot of garbage in

the ocean Plastic is the worst kind because it does not break down

quickly Animals think it is food They eat it and choke on it

‘While the author gives an overview of ocean pollution, the

speaker specifically describes the problem of plastic garbage People

produce billions of pounds of plastic a year, and a lot of this ends up

in the ocean The water and wind break large pieces of plastic into

smaller pieces Then animals try to eat these pieces An animal may | /etwre summary

choke on plastic It may starve because it does not feel hungry after

eating plastic Animals are often caught in floating plastic They are

also strangled by it There are many types of pollution in the ocean

Plastic garbage is one of the worst examples

(based on Reading 7, page 58, and Lecture 7, page 60)

Content

VY | Thesis Statement

v CHECK FOR THESIS STATEMENT

‘The model essay has a thesis statement that shows understanding of the task The task

asks the writer to summarize points and explain how one adds to the other, that is, to

compare them The first two sentences are the thesis statement They summarize the

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main idea of the reading and of the lecture The transition words Jn the same way let the reader know that these ideas are similar to each other

Task: Summarize points and explain how one adds to the other Compare words: Jn the same way

‘Thesis Statement

“Topics that support the thesis | Main ideas

‘Transition words

Sentence variety

v CHECK FOR TOPICS THAT SUPPORT THE THESIS

‘The supporting topics are the main idea of the reading and the main idea of the lecture They are presented in the thesis statement The model essay summarizes the main points of the reading and of the lecture and explains how the author's ideas are supported by the speaker's ideas

Main idea of the reading and lecture Reading Ocean pollution is a serious problem

Lecture Plastic garbage threatens sea animals

Revision Checklist INTENT (oer trent

‘Thesis Statement Topics that support the thesis

W | Main ideas Supporting details FLUENCY AND COHESION

‘Transition words

Sentence variety

v CHECK FOR MAIN IDEAS

‘The second paragraph in the model essay supports the reading main idea by summarizing the main points of the reading The third paragraph in the model essay supports the lecture main idea by summarizing the main points of the lecture

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