• Body - supports the controlling idea in the thesis statement with a supporting point stated in the topic sentence.. • Conclusion - summarizes the controlling idea in the thesis stateme
Trang 1Unit 1: Paragraph to
Short Essay
How a paragraph is developed to a short essay.
The organization of a short essay.
Trang 2• Introduction
- states the topic
- thesis statement states the controlling idea.
• Body
- supports the controlling idea in the thesis statement with a supporting point stated in the topic sentence.
• Conclusion
- summarizes the controlling idea in the thesis statement
PARAGRAPH
Topic sentence
- states the topic
- states the controlling
idea
Supporting sentences
- support the controlling
idea with supporting
points and details
Concluding sentence
- summarizes the
controlling idea in the
topic sentence
Trang 3Topic: Reasons for Going to University
PARAGRAPH
Topic sentence
(1 sentence)
After graduating
from high school,
many students go
on to university,
but their
reasons for
entering higher
education vary.
(From Chin et al., 2012)
ESSAY
Introduction (more than 1 sentence)
At one point or another in their high school lives, students are faced with one big question: should they go to university? Some students decide not to go, and the others determine to stay another four years in classroom Although they think that it is worth going to university, the reasons why they think so might be
different Students go to university for a
variety of reasons: academic interest and future career.
(From Chin et al., 2012)
Trang 4ESSAY Introduction
• Hook: At one point or another in their high school lives, students are faced with one big question: should they go to university?
• Background information:
- some decide not to go
- others determine to go
• Thesis statement: Students go to university for a
variety of reasons: academic interest and future career.
- Topic: Students go to university
- Controlling idea: variety of reasons
- Plan : academic interest and future career
PARAGRAPH
Topic: their
reasons for
entering higher
education
Controlling idea:
vary
Trang 5PARAGRAPH:
Supporting point 1
First, many students attend
to study a particular subject
in depth Unlike high
schools, which require
students to take a wide
range of classes, university
curriculums allow students
to choose a major In each
major, a number of
specialized courses are
offered, and they are taught
by experts in the fields
Moreover, universities have
various research facilities
that help students learn
ESSAY Body paragraph 1
First, many students attend to study a particular subject in depth University curriculums allow students to choose a major This is significant different from high schools, which require students to take a wide range of classes regardless
of their interests Moreover, universities offer a number of specialized courses in one discipline, and these courses are taught by experts in the fields Thus, for example, students who are interested in politics can major in political science and take courses about political system, political philosophy, comparative politics, and other specific topics related to
politics In addition, universities have various research facilities that help students learn, such as libraries, laboratories, and computer rooms Such curriculums, courses, and facilities enable students to pursue their academic goals in the field of their choice, and this is one of the reasons why they go to university.
Trang 6Outline ESSAY
• Topic sentence: First, many students attend to study a particular subject in depth
• Sup Point 1: university curriculums allow students to choose a major
+ Sup details: - different from high schools
• Sup Point 2: a number of specialized courses are offered + taught by experts in the fields
+ Sup details: - Example: major in political science -> subjects: political system, political philosophy,
comparative politics, and other specific topics related to politic
• Sup Point 3: have various research facilities that help students learn
+ Sup details: giving example: libraries, laboratories, and computer rooms
• Concluding sentence:
- summarizing: Such curriculums, courses, and facilities
enable students to pursue their academic goals in the field of their choice,
- emphasizing the main idea of the essay: and this is one
of the reason why they go to university
PARAGRAPH
Supporting point 1:
First, many students
attend to study a
particular subject in depth
Supporting details:
-1 university curriculums
allow students to choose a
major
-2 a number of
specialized courses are
offered + taught by
experts in the fields
-3 have various research
facilities that help students
learn.
Trang 7PARAGRAPH: Supporting point 2
Another common reason for going to
university is that a college education
often leads to a better career in the
future In many countries, people
with university degree tend to find
better-paying jobs than those without
them In addition, some universities
provide students with opportunities
to acquire practical skills that can be
useful in the real world, such as
accounting, using computer, and
speaking foreign languages
ESSAY: Body paragraph 2
Another common reason for going to university is that a college education often leads to a better career in the future In many countries, companies tend to look for university graduates to fill positions that have greater responsibility and higher pay, such as managers and supervisors Furthermore, for certain professions including doctors, lawyers and school teachers, a university degree
is a requirement In addition, some universities provide students with opportunities to acquire practical skills that can be useful in the real world For example, they offer courses in accounting, data processing, and foreign languages as well as internship program in which students can experience working in a company and learning business skills In short, some students attend university because university degree and the practical skills they can acquire will bring them better employment opportunity in the future.
Trang 8• Topic sentence: Another common reason for going to university is that a college education often leads to a better career in the future
• Sup Point 1: people with university degree tend to find better-paying jobs
+ Sup details:
- 1 to fill positions that have greater responsibility and higher pay, such as managers and supervisors
-2 for certain professions including doctors, lawyers and school teachers
• Sup Point 2: universities provide students with opportunities to acquire practical skills
+ Sup Details:
- giving example: courses in accounting, data processing, and foreign languages as well as internship program
• Concluding sentence:
- emphasizing the main idea of the essay : some
students attend university because
- summarizing : university degree and the practical
skills they can acquire will bring them better employment opportunity in the future
Supporting point 2
Another common reason for
going to university is that a
college education often leads to
a better career in the future.
Supporting details:
- 1 people with university
degree tend to find
better-paying jobs
-2 universities provide students
with opportunities to acquire
practical skills
Trang 9ESSAY Conclusion
In conclusion, students may have different reasons for going to
university For many of them, the main reason is to explore the
academic field they are interested
in However, some students attend university to gain an advantage in the job market in the future
Regardless of the reasons, it is important for students to remember why they are in university and do
their best to achieve their goals.
PARAGRAPH
Concluding
sentence
To sum up,
students go to
university for a
variety of
reasons: to study
a particular field
and to find a
good job.
Trang 10ESSAY Conclusion
- restated thesis: students may have different reasons for going to
university
- summary of main ideas:
+ the main reason is to explore the academic field they are interested in
+ to gain an advantage in the job market in the future
- final comment:
It is important for students to remember why they are in university and do their best to achieve their
goals
PARAGRAPH
Concluding sentence
Emphasizing:
- students go to
university for a
variety of reasons:
Summarizing:
- to study a
particular field and
to find a good job.
Trang 11Comparison of the two organizations
• Essay organization
1 Introduction: tells the reader the essay’s topic, purpose and main idea
+ Hook: get the reader’s interest + Background inf.: helps the readers understand more about the topic
+ Thesis statement: topic of the essay, writer’s
position/opinion to the topic, the main idea that will be used
to support the writer’s position (plan – optional)
2 Body: is to explain, illustrate, discuss or prove the thesis statement
- Body paragraph 1: main idea 1
- Supporting point 1 + Sup Details
- Supporting point 2 + Sup Details
- Concluding sentence
- Body paragraph 2: main idea 2
- Supporting point 1 + Sup Details
- Supporting point 2 + Sup Details
- Concluding sentence
3 Conclusion: to reinforce the ideas in the essay
- restated thesis, - summary of the main ideas, - final comment
Paragraph organization
1 Topic sentence:
presents the topic and
the controlling idea of
the paragraph.
2 Supporting sentences:
- Supporting point 1
+ Sup Details
- Supporting point 2
+ Sup Details
3 Concluding sentence:
- restates the
controlling idea
- summarizes the
supporting points
Trang 12The organization of an essay
• 1 Introduction: tells the reader the essay’s topic, purpose and main idea
+ Hook: get the reader’s interest
+ Background inf.: helps the readers understand more about the topic
+ Thesis statement: topic of the essay, writer’s position/opinion to the topic, the main
idea that will be used to support the writer’s position (plan – optional)
2 Body: is to explain, illustrate, discuss or prove the thesis statement
- Body paragraph 1:
Topic sentence
Supporting sentences
- Supporting point 1
+ Sup Details
- Supporting point 2
+ Sup Details
Concluding sentence
- Body paragraph 2:
Topic sentence
Supporting sentences
- Supporting point 1
+ Sup Details
- Supporting point 2
+ Sup Details
Concluding sentence
3 Conclusion: to reinforce the ideas in the essay
- restated thesis,
- summary of the main ideas,
- final comment/final thought
Trang 13Introductory Paragraph
- informs the essay’s topic, purpose of the essay, and main ideas to be presented in the body paragraphs
- consists of three parts: a hook, background information, and a thesis statement
A HOOK
readers to keep reading
- a quotation/ a question
- a surprising statistic
- a general truth
What is the
introductory
paragraph?
What is a
hook?
What are
some
common
types of
hooks?
Trang 14- What kinds of
information
about the
topic should
be included in
the
background
information?
- What are the
ways to
organize the
background
information?
BACKGROUND INFORMATION
- history of the topic
- the current situation regarding the topic
- relevant statistics
- attitudes/ opinion towards the topic
- from general information to specific information,
- from older information to new information
Trang 15THESIS STATEMENT
- topic of the essay,
- writer’s position/opinion /approach to the topic,
- the main ideas that will be used to support the writer’s position (plan)
- at the end of the introductory paragraph
- in one sentence
- What should a
thesis statement
contain?
- Where is the thesis
statement usually
located?
- How long is a
thesis statement?
Trang 16Body paragraphs
- How many body
paragraphs are there
in an essay?
- What is the purpose of
the body paragraph?
- - How many ideas
should each body
paragraph focus on?
- - What techniques
should the supporting
sentences use?
- at least 1 paragraph
- providing evidence and explanation to support the controlling idea in the thesis statement.
- one main idea that support the thesis statement(usually stated in
the plan)
- stating a reason
- providing evidence
- providing an explanation
Trang 17Concluding paragraph
- What is the function of
the concluding
paragraph?
- Why is it important?
- What should it
include?
- Should it include new
ideas?
- reinforcing the ideas in the essay
- making an impact on the readers
- restating the thesis statement,
- summarizing the main ideas,
- giving final thought
- definitely no
Trang 18Thank you for participating in the
lesson!