examined analized ] Body1 Đưa ra luồng quan điểm 1 * To begin with, there are several reasons/ advantages of…... * The most serious/ important reason/ advantage is……… * It is a well
Trang 1DISCUSSION: FOR & AGAINST ESSAYS Introduction continuing debate
* In recent decades/ nowadays
In our rapid changing the world There has been a
In this modern time discussion
over………
*There is a view that……… (hold/ agree/ point out/ claim) that Many
= most People/ experts/ scientists are of opinion that…
Some support the view that
* However opposites of this (problem) are that …
(= However others oppose this… that…………
* Both sides of this complex issue will be discussed in this essay
examined
analized ]
Body1 (Đưa ra luồng quan điểm 1)
* To begin with, there are several ( reasons/ advantages) of…
* The most ( serious/ important) reason/ advantage is………
* It is a well documented fact that………= It is true to say that…
(=This is ( clearly) illustrated/ shown by the fact that…
(phát triển tiếp theo dùng in addition/ Futhur more/ apart from/ what is more)
Body2 (Đưa ra luồng quan điem 2 đối lập với 1)
* On the other hand, there is a wide range of evidences for supporters to
Defend their idea of…
* there is no doubt that …/ It is obvious that…
( Tiếp tục phát triển đoạn dùng từ như moreover/ besides/ in addition…)
Conclusion To sum up/ All things consisdered/ all in all/ taking everything into
acount ( consisderation) This complicated issue has not only… but also
Có thể thêm vào phần kết đoạn sau nếu vấn đề đó mang tính xã hội
The government/ the authority should be consult with experts in this area in order to devise an effective programme for ( reducing/ decreasing) the (advantages/ disadvantages ) of this The implication of that might be better/
NHỮNG LƯU Ý KHI VIẾT ESSAY
Should do shouldn’t do
Trang 2- Use passive voice It is argued that
It is a common belief that
- Nen dung tu vung đa dạng, mức độ cao
(advanced voc, verbs, adj )
- su dung linking words/ phrases Eg:
further more/however/nonetheless
- Dung complex sentences (although
- Dung đảo ngu (were it true, we
would /never has this been more
obvious )
- Đồng hóa, chung hóa:
In most developed coutries
- Thể hiện trình tự/ liên từ
-Qui chiếu từ nguồn khác
(Eg: experts have proved that )
-Dùng short form can’t/don’t/isn’t -Tránh đưa ra các vd cá nhân : in my school
-Dùng cụm từ, tục ngữ, thành ngữ đưa ra những thành ngữ/ câu xáo rỗng
-sử dụng từ đơn giản quá/ câu đơn giản Eg
:I think ta dùng to my way of thinking
- Tránh lien từ quá đơn giản Eg: and, but,
so thay vao đó dùng câu phức hay cấu trúc both and/ not only but also/ those who
-Tránh bày tỏ quan điểm cá nhân hay cảm
xúc một cách mạnh mẽ Eg: I absolutely detest people who
- ko nên khái quát, chung chung quá VD:
all politicans are
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