Imagine that you’re inserting this list into a sentence: ⻬ Peter McKinney, the mayor ⻬ Agnes Hutton ⻬ Jeannie Battle, magic expert In a sentence using only commas, the reader wouldn’t kn
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items Imagine that you’re inserting this list into a sentence:
⻬ Peter McKinney, the mayor
⻬ Agnes Hutton
⻬ Jeannie Battle, magic expert
In a sentence using only commas, the reader wouldn’t know that Peter McKinney is the mayor and may instead think that Peter and the mayor are two separate people Here’s the properly punctuated sentence:
Because he has only one extra ticket to the magic expo, Daniel will invite Peter McKinney, the mayor; Agnes Hutton; or Jeannie Battle, magic expert
Get to work! Insert the list from each question into a sentence (I supply the begin-ning), and punctuate it properly
Q.List of things to buy at the pharmacy:
industrial-strength toenail clippers green shoe polish
earwax remover Getting ready for his big date, Rob went to the pharmacy to purchase
A.Getting ready for his big date, Rob went to the pharmacy to purchase industrial-strength toenail clippers, green shoe polish, and earwax remover You have three
items and two commas; no comma is needed before the first item on the list
1 Supermarket shopping list:
pitted dates chocolate-covered mushrooms anchovies
pickles Rob planned to serve a tasteful selection of _
2 Guests:
Helen Ogilbee, supermodel Natasha Nakovee, swimsuit model Blair Berry, automotive salesperson Hannah Umbridge, former Miss Autoclave Rob’s guest list is heavily tilted toward women he would like to date, such as _
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bobbing for cabbages pinning the tail on the landlord playing double solitaire After everyone arrives, Rob plans an evening of _
4 Goals:
get three phone numbers arrange at least one future date avoid police interference Rob will consider his party a success if he can
5 Results:
the police arrived at 10:00, 11:00, and 11:30 p.m
no one gave out any phone numbers everyone thought his name was Bob Rob didn’t meet his goals because _
You Talkin’ to Me? Direct Address
If the name or title of the person to whom you’re talking or writing is inserted into the sentence, you’re in a direct-address situation Direct-address expressions are set off
from everything else by commas In these examples, Wilfred is being addressed:
Wilfred, you can have the squash court at 10 a.m
I expect you to remove all the seeds from the squash, Wilfred
When you hit a zucchini, Wilfred, avoid using too much force
The most common direct-address mistake is to send one comma to do a two-comma
job In the last of the three preceding examples, two commas must set off Wilfred.
Can you insert commas to highlight the direct-address name in these sentences?
Q.Listen Champ I think you need to get a new pair of boxing gloves
A.Listen, Champ, I think you need to get a new pair of boxing gloves In this example,
you’re talking to Champ, a title that’s substituting for the actual name Direct-address
expressions don’t have to be proper names, though they frequently are
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7 I know Mort that you are an undefeated Elbox competitor Would you tell our audience
about the sport?
8 Elboxing is about 5,000 years old Chester It originated in ancient Egypt.
9 Really? Man I can’t believe you knew that!
10 Yes, the sport grew out of the natural movement of the elbow when someone tried to
interfere with a diner’s portion by “elbowing” Chester
11 Excuse me a moment The reigning champion has decided to pay us a visit Miss William
could you tell us how you feel about the upcoming match?
12 Certainly Sir I am confident that my new training routine will pay off.
13 What type of exercises did you do Placida? I may call you “Placida,” right?
14 Sure! I arm-wrestled for eight hours a day Mort and then swam a mile or so for the aerobic
benefit
15 We wish her the best of luck, don’t we folks?
Dating and Addressing
No, this section doesn’t tell you what to wear when taking a comma to dinner and a movie Nor does this section deal with what sort of speech you need to make when you first meet a comma Instead, this section enables you to practice placing commas
in dates (as in July 20, 2009) and addresses (as in Boise, Idaho)
The date rules are fairly simple:
⻬ For a date that includes (in order) the month, day, and year, place a comma
after the day If this kind of date is in a sentence that continues beyond the year, place a comma after the year (“I plan to blow up the rutabaga patch on August 4,
2006, unless I find a more enticing vegetable.”)
⻬ For a date that includes (in order) the day, month, and year, open-style
punctu-ation, which drops commas faster than Superman drops Kryptonite, favors no commas anywhere — before, after, inside, over, or under You get the idea; no commas (“The last rutabaga will be harvested on 4 August 2006 and sold at auc-tion.”) Some very traditional English teachers (I’m one) always place a comma after the month and after the year, unless the year ends the sentence, in which case the endmark follows the year (“The last cabbage will be picked on 30 September, 2008, and made into a doll.”) If you’re writing for a particular person (a professor or a boss), you should check his or her preference As always, what-ever style you choose should be consistent throughout
⻬ For a date that includes (in order) only the month and day, you don’t need any
commas (“In honor of farmer Bill, I will send a contribution to Save the Rutabaga
on September 12.”)
⻬ For a date that includes (in order) the month and year, no commas are
required (“Bill bought the farm in January 2006 and sold it five years later.”)
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if the sentence continues Which style should you follow? Your call, unless the Authority Figure for whom you’re writing has a preference No matter what you
do, be consistent
As far as addresses are concerned, the following rules apply:
⻬ If you’re writing an address in block form (not in a sentence), use a comma to
separate only the city from the state
⻬ If the address is inserted into a sentence, use a comma to show where one line
of the address ends and the next begins and between the city and state, which is standard practice If the sentence continues after the address, insert a comma after the last bit of the address (“I sent the rutabagas to Evelyn O’Hara, 1322
Wilson Street, Corville, Iowa 70202, but she never replied.”) Note: No comma is
placed between the state and the ZIP code
Punctuation party time! Place commas where you need them in these sentences
Q.On December 12 2007 I received a letter from Evelyn O’Hara, who now resides at 722 Park Avenue New York City New York 10027 in the heart of Manhattan’s Upper East Side
A.On December 12, 2007, I received a letter from Evelyn O’Hara, who now resides at 722 Park Avenue, New York City, New York 10027, in the heart of Manhattan’s Upper East Side Commas separate the day from the year, the whole date from the rest of the
sen-tence, and each part of the address (the house number and street, city, and state) A comma also follows the address Notice that no comma ever comes between the state and the ZIP code (They’ve been going steady for years and allow nothing to come between them Ah, love.)
16 An article in The New York Times of 12 November 2006 reports that rutabagas have very
few calories
17 Evelyn is partial to the rutabagas sold by Clearview Nurseries 17 Fort Benn Parkway
Kalama Florida 05789 although they are quite expensive and its rates are going up in September 2007
18 Her last will and testament is dated April 8 1990 and specifies that rutabaga roses be
placed on her grave
19 Her attorney, Hubert Wilberforce, may be contacted at 78 Crescent Square London
Connecticut 86689 for more information
20 Instead of flowers, Evelyn wrote that friends and loved ones should contribute to the
United Rutabaga Society 990 Pacific Street Northwest Agonis Oregon 98989
Introducing (and Interrupting) with the Comma
Do you want to start your sentences off with a bang, or at least a small pop? Fine
Just don’t forget to set off the introductory expression with a comma Grammatically,
introductory expressions are a mixed bag of verbals, prepositional phrases, adverbial
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as short as yes, no, or well; or it may be much longer Check out the italicized portion
of each of these sentences for examples of introductory expressions:
Snaking through the dark tunnel, Brad Jones thought about the book deal he’d get
for his memoirs
To get out in one piece, Brad planned a diversion.
While he was crossing the lighted area, an order of takeout pizza would be
delivered
Interrupters vary in length A direct-address element (see the “You Talkin’ to Me? Direct Address” section earlier in this chapter) may be considered a type of interrupter and so may some of the introductory expressions in the preceding samples, even when you move the introducers to the middle of the sentence The same principle that applies to
direct-address elements applies to interrupters: They comment on or otherwise inter-rupt the main idea of the sentence and thus are set off by commas In these sentences,
the interrupters are italicized:
Cindy Jones, snaking through the dark tunnel, didn’t think about the book deal
she’d get for her memoirs
There was no guarantee, of course, that Cindy would even be asked to write about
herself
Some short introductory expressions or interrupters don’t require commas For
example, in the sentence “In the morning Brad drank 12 cups of coffee,” in the morn-ing isn’t set off by a comma If the expression doesn’t have a verb in it and is tied
strongly to the main idea of the sentence, you can sometimes get away without commas This test may help: Say the sentence aloud (or in your head, if you’re afraid
of attracting the wrong sort of attention) If you hear a natural pause, plop in a comma If everything runs together nicely, don’t plop
Up for some practice? Insert commas where needed and resist the temptation to insert them where they’re not wanted in these sentences
Q.Disgruntled after a long day delivering pizza Elsie was in no mood for fireworks
A.Disgruntled after a long day delivering pizza, Elsie was in no mood for fireworks The
comma sets off the introductory expression, Disgruntled after a long day delivering pizza Notice how all that applies to Elsie? She’s the subject of the sentence.
21 In desperate need of a pizza fix Brad turned to his cellphone.
22 Cindy on the other hand checked the phone number in the pizza directory she had
thoughtfully stashed in her purse
23 Yes pizza was an excellent idea.
24 The toppings unfortunately proved to be a problem.
25 Restlessly Brad pondered pepperoni as the robbers searched for him.
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27 Frozen with indecision Brad decided to call the supermarket to request the cheapest
brand
28 Cindy of course wanted to redeem her coupons.
29 To ensure fast delivery was crucial.
30 Lighting a match and holding it near his trembling hand Brad realized that time was
almost up
31 Worrying about toppings had used up too many minutes.
32 Well the robbers would have a good story to tell.
33 With renewed determination Cindy speed-dialed the market and offered “a really big tip”
for ten-minute service
34 As the robbers chomped on pepperoni and argued about payment Brad slipped away.
35 Cindy let’s just say was left to clean up the mess.
Setting Off Descriptions
Life would be much simpler for the comma-inserter if nobody ever described any-thing No descriptions would mean no comma problems However, solving your punc-tuation problems in that way leads to writing that resembles a pay-by-the-word text message — limited in scope, expensive, and not a good idea!
A better plan is to find out more about these basic principles behind punctuating descriptive expressions:
⻬ If the description follows the word being described, decide whether it’s extra
information or essential, identifying material If the description falls into the
“nice to know but I didn’t really need it” (extra) category, surround it with commas If the description is in the “gotta have it” bin, omit the commas For
example, in the sentence, “The dictionary on the table is dusty,” the description
in italics is necessary because it tells which dictionary is dusty However, in the sentence, “Charlie’s dictionary, which is on the table, is dusty,” the description in italics is set off by commas, because you already know Charlie’s dictionary is the
one being discussed The part about the table is extra information
⻬ For descriptions that precede the word described, place commas only when
you have a list of two or more descriptions of the same type and importance.
You can you tell when two or more descriptions are equally important; they can
be written in different order without changing the meaning of the sentence For
example, in the sentence, “The tan, dusty dictionary has never been opened,” the two descriptions — tan and dusty — can be reversed without changing the mean-ing, so you need a comma However, in the sentence, “Two dusty dictionaries
need some cleaning power now!” the two descriptions aren’t the same type —
one is a number, and one is a condition You can’t say, Dusty two, so you don’t
insert commas