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How to get a higher IELTS score
Lesson #2 (ow to write a Task report that will impress your assessors
Academic Module
Lesson #3: (ow to write a Task lette r that will impress your assessors
General Training Module
Lesson #4 (ow to write a Task essay that wil l influence your assessors
Lesson #6 (ow to optimize your performance in the Listening and Reading
tests
Donna Millen co author of the Centre for English Language in the University
of South Australia s )ELTS on Track series of books ieltsontrack com talks
about what may create a positive psychological impression on assessors
who may be scoring the Writing and Speaking interview components of
your )ELTS test
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The following books are a great source of practice material across the four
test skills plus a variety of hints and strategies, and grammar and
vocabulary exercises to help with IELTS Writing
IELTS On Track Test Practice Academic (with audio CD)
Visit IELTS on Track website to view details and order:
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Imagine these IELTS test situations:
Situation 1
You are sitting outside the )ELTS interview room )t is hot the air conditioning is not orking properly the )ELTS assessor has already interviewed candidates and
ou are number You are tired of waiting the interviewer is tired too
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Situation 2
Your )ELTS Writing Test paper with your responses on it is at the bottom of a pile of thers There are in the pile The assessor has just had to spend minutes ooking for a parking space
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Situation 3
An )ELTS assessor is giving test scores to a candidate they have just interviewed The assessor is reading the assessment criteria but is still very undecided and is aving great difficulty deciding which way to jump on two of the criteria go up to
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performance that have some impact on the assessor psychologically
)n other words what can candidates do to make an assessor feel more positive towards them This may be important because if the assessor is in any serious oubt about your score the more positive they feel towards you psychologically the
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ntonation to show how you feel about what you are saying this communicates our personality your uniqueness
the assessor s co worker All these things communicate your personality and
create a positive social atmosphere This makes the assessor feel more
comfortable psychologically too.
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personality.
)n the )ELTS interview there are many opportunities to talk about your own life and culture Even if the assessor s questions seem a bit mechanical you can still try to
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To summarise
Life is essentially a social experience. Taking )ELTS is part of that social life Even
though it may not seem that way you are in brief social relationships with
assessors when you do the IELTS Writing and when you are interviewed for the IELTS Speaking test. )t is important for you to manage those relationships as ell as you can in order to influence the assessor s psychology positively even if his is not officially a component of the stated assessment criteria
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Influencing an assessor positively but genuinely and naturally may lead to better scores when an assessor is in doubt and is weighing up whether to give you a higher or a lower score )f you are viewed by your assessor as a mature professional adult with a pleasant natural and unique personality and as someone who can inform the assessor about interesting things in a careful precise way then this may leave a positive impression of you in contrast to some of the other twenty
or so candidates with whom the assessor may have interacted that day and who may have either faded quickly and anonymously away or worse left the assessor with a feeling of frustration or irritation
NEXT TIME, I’ll talk about some of the specific things that may influence IELTS assessors when they read and score your answer to the Task 1 report in the IELTS Academic Writing test.
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hour Under such conditions it is easy for candidates to see themselves
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Time is important also in this imaginary context but it is important in this case because of your colleague s schedule so you are helping someone Also an academic context is a professional context in which you would be expected to write in a mature considered clear precise and professional manner
This ‘professional and academic test persona’ is a more suitable one for you to
imagine yourself in than just being a ‘test candidate’; it establishes a much stronger ense of relationship between writer and reader, and this gives your writing a stronger ocial purpose
The reader starts to imagine what YOU are like from how you write, not just from what your language is like grammatically. This means your writing has the power to influence the impression you make in many different ways. So you need to try to ommunicate positive impressions of yourself in your writing.
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One of your prime goals is to get a better )ELTS score by building a positive impression in
the assessor s mind )n )ELTS planning time even minutes is effective because it
elps you to develop a systematic and well organised answer, and this creates a rofessional impression of YOU in the mind of the assessor.
Eng shs y you did some research and made a video recording of riting task BUT
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nd look at the material and data presented to you in Task you need to study it carefu each category or number carefully so that you report on them accurat ely
hy do it Accuracy creates a good impression of you as a professional report writer
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b) Talking about the actual graph or diagram you can see in front of you on the test paper
t is changing The number of people who sit )ELTS is increasing
the head nouns population and number control the verb agreement
The accuracy of the figures is doubtat a X – X – nadjective ‘d ‘doubt’ oubtful’n neededee ed
that
to le ectly since that time
So if you still make these basic errors you give the impression of being like an
immature schoolchild, even if your own native language causes you to make the errors
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he )ELTS test remember is based ultimately on comparing performance with a native nglish speaker equivalent
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) Writing Task you are asked to write a letter and are
sked to include in your letter different listed pieces of information
when the letter is written Ask yourself Why am )
A test persona for Task is much easier to create as the type of letter immediately creates
a clear writer reader relationship The task tells you who you are writing to and why so you can really be more or less yourself and write realistically as if really in that situation
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person try not to turn the letter into a sort of ‘joke letter’ by writing things like Dear
Mickey Mouse, … or ending your letter with something like Yours sincerely, Mr. Bean’ You
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friend you will naturally use informal styles of English in order to reflect the closeness of
the relationship )t would seem strange to write to a friend in cold formal language For xample Similarly Conversely An exception to this trend is Compared to This attern changed from to
personality and this gives a stronger impression of you the writer to your
ssessor Being over repetitive reduces the colour and texture of your letter
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Your faithfully, / Yours sincerely, formal
All the best, / Best wishes informal
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Even though these days most people write letters on their computers try to make our letter look attractive and neat so that it seems a little like the look of a
omputer generated letter This care with presentation will impress the assessor
1. After starting your letter with Dear…. plus name of person to whom you are
writing Mr Ms family name for formal letters first name only for friends
eave an empty line before starting the content of the letter Remember you don t
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5. Leave another line before signing your name Remember to just use your given ame if you are writing to a friend but use your full name if you are writing to an rganization or to someone you don t know
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esson #4: How to write a Task 2 essay that will influence our assessors positively (Academic and General)
uletter seem more real se the appropriate level of formality informal or formal consistently in your
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The second task involves writing about a social issue Again you should try to see yourself
in your professional persona as offering a formal and reasoned viewpoint on the issue for resentation to a colleague Try not to see yourself as just a person who is having to take a ifficult test
types of pet The expression pets covers many types of living creature so you shouldn t
over generalise and
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This can be achieved by offering enough detail to explain why you have that opinion
his point of view sounds as though the writer doesn t clearly know what their
oint of view is about cruelty and so it is less convincing less powerful
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The linking words in bold type show how writers direct their thoughts and express
relationships between the content as they move from sentence to sentence This also helps the assessor to connect with a point of view that is developing which builds a positive impression of sophisticated thought Test candidates who just list one point after another without any development and without any subtle linking expressions may seem less
natural and less mature in the mind of the assessor
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8 rules for appropriate language
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Keeping pets is a very hot topic Keeping pets is a significant issue P
etrol driven cars are past their sell by date ……are fast becoming obsolete
t helps to round off your answer if you can offer a short conclusion with sentence eginnings like
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For example Pet are should be Pets are or Pets is sho
Keep pets in small apartments is sometime cruelty should be Keeping pets in small apartments is sometimes cruel
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We’ll take a look at how you can ‘sing and dance’ to the music of the Speaking test and how you can become a good ‘dance partner’ who impresses the assessor and akes a good ‘cooperative connection’ as you both move through each section of that est.
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Trang 35efore writing make a plan stating your overall opinion clearly and or
paragraph headings each with a reason for your opinion examples suppo
build your paragraphs with connecting expressions between sentences to showhow your opinion is being supported and developed don t just list your points
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th room (ow does that assessor probably feel
the assessor probably feels part of a pattern of timed programmed
interaction and expects you the next candidate to follow this pattern
strict timing So the assessor can get anxious if the test rhythm is not
)f the assessor is assessing candidates tiredness is bound to occur
towards the end of the assessor s candidate list
he assessor feels keen to make it a pleasant enough time for you to do your est she or he is on your side
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ervousness and occasionally its opposite over confidence
performance and their wish to improve on known weaknesses from their previous tests or to improve previous scores They can become a little distant or
The main social task in the )ELTS speaking test is to bring both the assessor and
candidate closer together in a sense of cooperative connection’ This means that
each should try to help the other to make the situation a comfortable friendly shared experience where the candidate can feel all right and can therefore do their est and the assessor can manage the speaking test sections correctly without any dditional stress being caused by the candidate
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appropriate pausing
rrection very little hesitation or self co
neither too loud nor too soft
good rhythm and flow of sound
clear and accurate individual sounds
good grouping of chunks of meaning
trying to mirror the music of the assessor s speech a little by using a similar speaking speed similar volume and similar feeling of friendliness in the notes
of the Speaking test
)n the Speaking test you can t get a good score for what you don t say
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How to connect with the assessor at each stage of the Speaking Test
While seated look interested and connected not nervous or tired Make eye
contact and be polite when asked for your passport and when it is returned to you
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nderstand the question the assessor can t explain it to you You can ask for the
e repeated however This is much better than remaining silent
Why This makes you seem more interesting more friendly less robotic less like a
test taking machine Before the test, practice with a watch to gain a sense of what
second time interval feels like and of the rhythm of a question a second