Bài 16 - Writing concise sentences pptx

all things considered All things considered, Connecticut's woodlands are in better shape now than ever before.. Connecticut's woodlands are in better shape now than ever... as a matter o

Bài 16 - Writing concise sentences

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4 LƯỢC BỎ NHỮNG CỤM TỪ KHÔNG CẦN THIẾT

Các bạn hãy lưu ý đến những cụm từ không làm tăng thêm ngữ

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all things

considered

All things considered,

Connecticut's woodlands are in

better shape now than ever

before

Connecticut's woodlands are in

better shape now than ever

before

as a matter of

fact

As a matter of fact, there are

more woodlands in Connecticut

now than there were in 1898

There are more woodlands in

Connecticut now than there were

in 1898

as far as I'm

concerned

As far as I'm concerned, there is

no need for further protection of

woodlands

Further protection of woodlands

is not needed

at the present

time

This is because there are fewer

farmers at the present time

This is because there are fewer

farmers now

because of the

fact that

Woodlands have grown in area

because of the fact that farmers

have abandoned their fields

Woodlands have grown in area

because farmers have

abandoned their fields

back by means of natural

processes

Major forest areas are coming

back through natural processes

(hoặc naturally)

by virtue of the

fact that

Our woodlands are coming back

by virtue of the fact that our

economy has shifted its

emphasis

Our woodlands are coming back

because our economy has

shifted its emphasis

due to the fact

that

Due to the fact that their habitats

are being restored, forest

creatures are also

re-establishing their population

bases

Because their habitats are being

restored, forest creatures are

also re-establishing their

population bases

people that we are losing our

woodlands is uncalled for

The fear among many people

that we are losing our woodlands

is uncalled for

for all intents and

purposes

The era in which we must

aggressively defend our

woodlands has, for all intents

and purposes, passed

The era in which we must

aggressively defend our

woodlands has passed

for the most part For the most part, people's

suspicions are based on a

misunderstanding of the facts

People's suspicions are based

on a misunderstanding of the

facts

for the purpose

of

Many woodlands, in fact, have

been purchased for the purpose

of creating public parks

Many woodlands, in fact, have

been purchased as public parks

have a tendency

to

This policy has a tendency to

isolate some communities

This policy tends to isolate some

communities

in a manner of

speaking

The policy has, in a manner of

speaking, begun to Balkanize

the more rural parts of our state

The policy has begun to

Balkanize the more rural parts of

our state

in a very real

sense

In a very real sense, this policy

works to the detriment of those it

is supposed to help

This policy works to the

detriment of those it is supposed

to help

policy ought to be revoked

This wasteful policy ought to be

revoked

policy, citizens of northeast

Connecticut became very upset

Citizens of northeast

Connecticut became very upset

about his policy

in the final

analysis

In the final analysis, the state

would have been better off

without such a policy

The state would have been

better off without such a policy

in the event that In the event that enough people

protest, it will probably be

revoked

If enough people protest, it will

probably be revoked

repeal may soon take place

Something like a repeal may

soon take place

in the process of Legislators are already in the

process of reviewing the

statutes

Legislators are already reviewing

the statutes

get rid of this one

They can't wait to get rid of this

one

activities of conservationists in a

cautious manner

They have cautiously monitored

the activities of conservationists

the point I am

trying to make

The point I am trying to make is

that sometimes public policy

doesn't accomplish what it set

out to achieve

Sometimes public policy doesn't

accomplish what it set out to

achieve

careful of the type of policy they

propose

Legislators need to be more

careful of the policy they

propose

what I mean to

say is

What I mean to say is that well

intentioned lawmakers

sometimes make fools of

themselves

Well intentioned lawmakers

sometimes make fools of

themselves