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DAY 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The bar chart below shows percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006

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Write about the following topic:

The media should include more stories which report good news To what extent do you agree or disagree

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words

The bar chart illustrates the percentage change in UK citizens using the Internet from 2003 to 2006 across five distinct age groups It provides valuable insights into how internet usage evolved over these years within different demographics The data highlights trends and shifts in online engagement among various age segments in the UK during this period.

Young UK citizens aged 16 to 24 have the highest Internet usage, while senior citizens show the lowest engagement online From 2003 to 2005, there was a consistent increase in Internet popularity across all age groups, highlighting a growing digital adoption across the population.

The proportion of people from the age group of 16 to 24 years old was highest among all age groups and years in 2003 at

80%, followed by the data of the residents in the age group of

25 to 44, 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 at 50 % respectively

In 2003, no data was provided for individuals aged 65 and above Between 2003 and 2004, the population figures for 16 to 24-year-olds remained unchanged, while all other age groups experienced steady growth This indicates a consistent increase in certain age demographics during that period, highlighting shifting population trends across different age ranges.

Internet users from 45 to 54 years old reached its peak at 60%, while the data of inhabitants at 65 years old and above surged from approximately 0 to 10%

In the period from 2004 to 2006, the number of people from 25 to 44 and 55 to 65 years old who went online rose gradually and reached 80% and 50% respectively in 2006 Similarly, the data

TỪ VỰNG figures (n): số liệu

Senior citizens are increasingly noticeable, highlighting a significant demographic trend The number of elderly individuals has increased steadily over recent years, respectively reflecting the aging population worldwide It is of note that, despite this steady growth, there has been a surge in the demand for senior care services, indicating a changing landscape in social and healthcare needs.

In 2005, internet usage among young adults aged 16 to 24 increased to 90%, while senior citizens accounted for 15%, although both groups experienced a slight decline in 2006 After a significant 10% drop from 2004 to 2005, the percentage of internet users aged 45 to 64 showed gradual growth in 2006 Notably, the 16-24 age group remained the largest demographic of internet users in 2006, highlighting their dominant presence in online activities.

The 24 demographic shows a significant narrowing of the gap between the 16 to 24 and 25 to 44 age groups This indicates that the difference in population or engagement levels among these age groups has decreased considerably, reflecting shifting demographic trends Understanding these changes is essential for targeted marketing and resource allocation.

Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm

Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng provide an insight into

The bar chart given provides an insight into … and …

Thường sử dụng trong câu Introduction, nêu thông tin về bài upward/downw ard trend

There was a general upward/downward trend for …

The overview of the chart highlights the overall trends and patterns observed The proportion of people aged 16 to 24 was the highest among all age groups, indicating a significant demographic presence in this category Following this, data shows notable figures for residents in the subsequent age groups, reflecting changing population dynamics and preferences across different age segments.

Miêu tả thông tin chi tiết: số liệu cao nhất, followed by số liệu thứ cao thứ 2

Similarly rose gradually and reached 80% and

50% respectively in 2006 Similarly, the data for increased to ,

Dùng khi có sự tương đồng (cùng tăng, cùng giảm)

After experiencing/u ndergoing a …, there + be a…

After experiencing a significant drop of , there was a slow growth

Dùng để đưa 2 sự thay đổi của cùng 1 loại thông tin (VD giảm mạnh, giảm nhẹ)

In today’s era of extensive media coverage, the media significantly influences public perception of current affairs Recognizing this crucial role, it is essential for the media to focus more on sharing positive news stories Highlighting positive content can foster a more optimistic outlook among audiences and promote a balanced view of the world.

The over-reporting of negative and sensational news across media platforms often evokes strong emotional reactions and contributes to a gloomy outlook on the world This tendency by broadcasters to focus on shocking stories can foster feelings of self-doubt, mistrust, and anxiety among viewers Constant exposure to traumatic events in the media may lead to negative emotional states, significantly impacting individuals’ mental well-being over time.

Positive news stories deserve more media coverage because they evoke encouraging emotions that can inspire positive changes in people's lives For example, stories of firefighters risking their lives to rescue seniors or underdog athletes becoming Olympic champions can ignite compassion and motivation across communities Sharing these uplifting stories helps to balance the often disproportionate focus on negative news, fostering a more hopeful and resilient society.

Unbalanced situations can be disheartening news that undermine public trust, while sensational news often amplifies emotions through exaggerated headlines The media tend to over-report certain events, sometimes driven by self-serving purposes aimed at gaining more attention or profit Recognizing these patterns is crucial for maintaining a well-informed and discerning audience.

13 persevere with their goals Were more accounts as such to make headlines, they would prompt more people to create positive changes

Incorporating more encouraging news into broadcasts can help prevent viewers from experiencing negative feelings associated with bad news, fostering a more positive outlook Highlighting commendable changes can motivate individuals and communities to pursue improvements, promoting constructive action Providing justification for positive developments can strengthen public confidence and support It is important to avoid putting the underdog in a disadvantaged position by focusing solely on negative stories, as this may contribute to morbid feelings Overall, a balanced approach that emphasizes hopeful and commendable changes can inspire viewers and encourage societal progress.

DAY 2

The chart below gives Information about the percentage of the adult population who were overweight in four different countries in 1980, 1990 and 2000

International tourism is the largest industry globally, generating significant economic benefits and cultural exchange opportunities However, it can also create tensions between different cultures, leading to misunderstandings and conflicts While tourism promotes global understanding, excessive or unmanaged tourism can harm local communities and cultural identities Therefore, it is essential to balance the economic advantages of international tourism with efforts to foster intercultural respect and sustainability Overall, international tourism has both positive and negative impacts, and promoting responsible tourism practices is key to maximizing its benefits while minimizing tensions.

The chart provides a glimpse of the proportion of overweight adults in Japan, Finland, Australia, and the USA over a two- decade period

Japan consistently had the lowest rates of overweight adults over the three-year period, while the USA exhibited the highest figures in this category Additionally, all four countries experienced a significant increase in overweight adult rates after 20 years, highlighting a global trend towards rising obesity levels.

The percentage of overweight adults in Japan and Finland increased slightly from 1980 to 1990 However, the shift in

Japan’s percentage figures remained minimal, barely noticeable, while Finland’s were around 1 percent Between 1990 and 2000, both countries experienced wider percentage gaps, with Japan’s figures never exceeding 5%, whereas Finland’s reached higher levels This indicates that Finland experienced more significant fluctuations within that decade compared to Japan’s more stable trends.

10% at the end of the period surveyed

There were more significant changes in Australia and the USA

Over the past 20 years, both Australia and the USA have seen a significant increase in the prevalence of overweight adults, with rates nearly doubling In Australia, the percentage of overweight adults rose from approximately 10% in 1980 to over 20% in 2000, while in the USA, it increased from around 15% in 1980 to more than 30% by 2000 Notably, in 1990, the percentage of overweight adults in the USA had already risen sharply, highlighting a growing public health concern regarding obesity trends in both countries. -Track obesity trends in Australia and the USA with precise data summaries—boost your health content SEO effortlessly [Learn more](https://pollinations.ai/redirect/draftalpha)

A glimpse of the proportion provides a quick overview of a particular issue A surge indicates a sudden and significant increase, while a shift refers to a noticeable change in trends The gap represents the distance between two data points or groups, often highlighting disparities When figures exceed expectations, they surpass previous estimates, emphasizing growth or change Surveys are essential tools for collecting data and understanding patterns, especially among overweight grown-ups, also known as corpulent adults in formal contexts Understanding these concepts is crucial for analyzing health trends and informing strategies to address obesity.

19 already higher than the highest figure for any other country in all three years observed notable (adj): đáng chú ý - tương đương

Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng provide a glimpse of

The chart provides a glimpse of

Thường sử dụng trong câu Introduction, nêu thông tin sơ lược về bài undergo a surge The rates in the four countries all underwent a surge

Miêu tả xu hướng tăng mạnh và đột ngột của biểu đồ experience a rise in…., with the figures for

The two countries experienced a sharp rise in corpulent adults, with the figures for both Australia and the USA almost doubling over the period of 20 years…

The recent data reveals a notable upward trend, with detailed figures illustrating significant increases Notably, there were wider percentage gaps observed in both Japan and Finland, highlighting growing disparities in these regions This trend underscores the importance of understanding the evolving landscape and its implications for future developments.

Dùng khi không muốn lặp lại cấu trúc “sự thay đổi này” nhiều hơn “sự thay đổi khác”

International tourism has become one of the leading industries worldwide, fostering cultural exchange and economic growth While some argue that increased tourism may intensify cultural tensions, I believe that responsible travel promotes mutual understanding and tolerance among diverse populations Embracing global travel opportunities can bridge cultural gaps, create intercultural dialogue, and contribute to a more harmonious international community.

Cultural clashes between international visitors and host countries are generally manageable and seldom cause lasting harm, as most misunderstandings stem from a lack of pre-departure research rather than intentional disrespect Even with some preparation, tourists may find it difficult to fully understand and adhere to deeply ingrained cultural norms, which can lead to unintentional offenses These misunderstandings are often temporary, as tourists' stays are brief, and any cultural missteps are unlikely to be taken seriously or have long-term effects Overall, cross-cultural interactions are typically resolved easily, highlighting the importance of awareness and understanding in fostering respectful international exchanges.

Cross-border tourism plays a vital role in fostering cultural harmony by allowing travelers to experience different cultures firsthand This firsthand exposure leads to a more holistic and unbiased understanding of local communities, breaking down stereotypes often perpetuated by the media For example, visiting Vietnam enables tourists to gain authentic insights into its people and traditions, promoting mutual respect and cultural appreciation.

Indisputable evidence highlights the importance of thorough pre-departure research before engaging in cross-border tourism, preventing potential cross-cultural misunderstandings and offences Leading businesses in the travel industry recognize that managing friction and cultural clashes is crucial for success, especially in a globalized market Understanding key vocabulary such as "indisputable," "friction," "offence," and "cross-cultural misunderstandings" is essential for effective communication and seamless international travel experiences.

American tourists are often amazed by the warm hospitality of local people, challenging the misconception that they harbor grudges over historical conflicts Visiting a mosque can also enlighten foreign visitors about the true teachings of Islam, dispelling stereotypes that associate the religion with extremism.

Although conflicts stemming from international tourism can occur, they are generally manageable Overall, international tourism often promotes greater understanding and appreciation of diverse cultures, contributing positively to global relations and cultural exchange.

Gaining first-hand experience provides a holistic and unbiased view of a destination, allowing travelers to understand its true essence beyond stereotypes It's important to avoid bearing a grudge or harboring negative feelings that can cloud judgment of different cultures Addressing issues like extremism requires open-minded tourism approaches that foster understanding and respect Engaging in inter-country tourism, similar to cross-border travel, promotes cultural exchange and enhances our global perspective.

DAY 3

The charts show the reasons why undergraduates and postgraduates choose to go to Parker University

Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The bar charts report on why students, both at university/tertiary level and at higher levels of education, attend Parker University

The university's reputation and tuition fees are the primary factors influencing most students’ choices, with recommendations playing a significant role in their decision-making process.

University prestige is the most important factor influencing students’ preferences, with 35% of undergraduates and 42% of postgraduates citing it as a key consideration Cost is the second most significant factor, accounting for approximately 25% of undergraduates and nearly 33% of postgraduates These two factors play a more prominent role in postgraduates’ school selections, with nearly three-quarters considering them crucial, compared to 56% of undergraduates.

University status and costs primarily influence postgraduate students' school selection, whereas factors like location and accommodation are more relevant for undergraduate applicants Notably, university students are three times more likely to choose Parker University based on a friend's recommendation, with 18% of undergraduates considering this factor compared to only 6% of postgraduates Overall, social recommendations play a significant role in undergraduate enrollment decisions, while cost and university prestige are more critical for postgraduate choices.

The university’s standing or status significantly influences its overall reputation and attractiveness Tuition fees are a primary determinant in students' decision-making process when choosing a university The university’s prestige plays a crucial role in shaping perceptions of quality and excellence Both undergraduates and postgraduates consider these factors vital, as the university’s prestige and tuition fees account for their choice.

Parker University students, regardless of their levels, at around

6% to 8% for each prevalent (adj): tràn lan reverse (n): điều trái ngược accommodation (n): nhà ở

Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng be ranked

The cost incurred is ranked second in the order of importance

Sử dụng thay cho cấu trúc

“the second highest” three times In fact, university students are three times more likely to apply for Parker University through the recommendation of a friend than their postgraduate counterparts

Sử dụng khi muốn diễn tả

“gấp ba lần” counterparts In fact, university students are three times more likely to apply for Parker University through the recommendation of a friend than their postgraduate counterparts

Sử dụng để thay thế cho đối tượng có cùng mục đích nhưng khác biệt trong một số khía cạnh Ví

While university status and costs are more prevalent among postgraduates as reasons for school selection, the reverse is true for the remaining factors

Dùng khi miêu tả sự thay đổi của 2 đại lượng trái ngược nhau

Traffic congestion and housing shortages in major cities are increasingly urgent issues, prompting suggestions that large corporations should be relocated to rural areas This strategic shift has the potential to significantly ease urban traffic and housing pressures, fostering more sustainable city living and boosting rural economic development Relocating large firms to rural regions can effectively alleviate congestion, improve quality of life, and promote balanced regional growth.

Implementing measures to geographically redistribute large companies can significantly ease traffic congestion in megacities by reducing the volume of daily commuters This approach helps alleviate the strain on urban traffic infrastructure, which often struggles to accommodate the growing number of vehicles traveling to and from workplaces By decentralizing workplaces, cities can decrease reliance on private vehicles and public transportation, leading to smoother traffic flow and improved urban mobility.

Not only would traffic congestion along with its associated issues, namely road rage and road accidents, be relieved, but

Traffic congestion remains a pressing issue in many urban areas, causing significant delays and economic losses The traffic gridlock highlights the urgent need to improve traffic infrastructure to effectively manage and reduce congestion Additionally, a housing shortage continues to be a critical problem, impacting the quality of life for residents Addressing these issues requires comprehensive strategies to mitigate their effects, ensuring smoother transportation and better housing solutions for communities.

31 the currently overloaded public transport system, which is subject to frequent delays and breakdowns, would be more adequate and reliable

The problems accompanied by housing can also be addressed

The continuous influx of migrants to major cities has driven demand for housing far beyond supply, causing a critical shortage of accommodation and a sharp rise in property prices Encouraging enterprises to relocate their headquarters and factories to satellite towns can help alleviate this pressure, as employees are more likely to settle nearby for convenience This shift can reduce urban housing demand, easing the housing affordability crisis and creating more balanced urban growth.

In conclusion, I believe that relocating large firms to rural areas offers significant benefits, and authorities should carefully consider this strategy This geographical redistribution can help alleviate overloaded public transport systems and manage the incessant flow of migrants Establishing satellite towns and relocating headquarters to the countryside can provide better shelters and reduce urban congestion Deliberate planning and decision-making are essential to ensure the success of this initiative.

DAY 4

The table below shows the change in the percentages of people joining in seven different sports in an European country from 1999 to 2009

In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly and this affects family relationships Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The table illustrates the changing popularity of seven different sports over a decade, measured in percentage terms Overall, the top three sports in popularity remained consistent throughout the period, maintaining their leading positions In contrast, the remaining four sports experienced significant shifts in their popularity rankings, with varying degrees of change over the ten years.

Football remained the most popular sport throughout the decade, with players representing around 50% of the population Swimming and tennis ranked second and third, each engaging about one-third of the population Notably, football experienced a 9% decline in participation, while swimming and tennis saw an increase in the number of participants.

In 2010, golf experienced a remarkable twofold increase in popularity, surpassing yoga with 17% of players compared to 13% Meanwhile, participation in volleyball saw a net gain of 1% over the period, despite a minor 1% decline in the latter half Conversely, the number of basketball players declined slightly, reflecting a subtle downward trend in its popularity.

"Preference (n) refers to an individual's or group's liking for something, which can significantly influence their choices Over the course of time, these preferences may shift, impacting popularity rankings that measure how favored certain items or activities are among audiences Athletic activities play a vital role in promoting a healthy lifestyle and are often ranked based on their popularity The proportion of people engaging in these activities provides insight into overall health trends within a population Sometimes, these trends exhibit an opposite trend, where interest in one activity declines as another gains popularity Notably, recent data shows a twofold growth in participation, indicating a substantial increase in engagement over a certain period."

37 respectively (adv): theo thứ tự lần lượt participants (n): người chơi, người tham gia dip (v): giảm sâu

Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng remain unchanged the three favourite sports remain unchanged in terms of popularity ranking

Miêu tả xu hướng không thay đổi của số liệu

Second and third in the list

Second and third in the list were swimming and tennis, whose figures approximately one third of the population base for both categories

Miêu tả so sánh giữa các số liệu, thay cho việc sử dụng

“the second/third highest” see a noticeable decrease

It is also noteworthy that football saw a noticeable decrease of 9%

Miêu tả xu hướng giảm rõ rệt của số liệu, thay cho cấu trúc

38 quen thuộc “decrease” respectively A remarkable twofold growth in the percentage of golf players was recorded, making it more preferred than yoga in 2010, at 17% and 13% respectively

Miêu tả lần lượt số liệu chi tiết của hai đại lượng

By contrast… By contrast, basketball players declined slightly by 1% every 5 years.

Miêu tả xu hướng ngược lại với xu hướng trước đó vừa miêu tả

Rapid changes in people's lifestyles significantly impact family life, with most effects being negative rather than positive.

The hectic lifestyles of many families are weakening familial bonds, as busy schedules leave little time for meaningful togetherness With both parents working and children spending most of their day at school, families often opt for quick meals instead of sit-down family dinners, which require time for cooking, setting the table, and cleaning This shift reduces opportunities for family members to connect and bond Even when families do find time to be together, distractions such as checking emails and staying connected online further hinder quality moments Prioritizing family time and minimizing digital distractions are essential to strengthen family relationships in today's fast-paced world.

TỪ VỰNG speedy change: sự thay đổi nhanh chóng prevail (v): chiếm ưu thế, chiếm đa số compromise (v): làm tổn hại time-consuming process: quá trình tốn thời gian

40 work progress, tasks that are no longer confined to the conventional office hours Interaction among family members diminishes accordingly, which leads to a weakened family bond in many instances

Two-income families often generate more wealth than traditional breadwinner models, allowing for better financial stability The increased income helps cover essential necessities and occasional luxuries, reducing the financial strain commonly faced by lower and middle-class households This development can improve overall economic well-being and ease the challenges of insufficient income streams.

Since financial difficulty is the cause of family quarrels in many cases, the absence of it is likely to facilitate a more harmonious relationship among family members

Domestic upheaval can impact family life if parents struggle to balance work and family responsibilities When parents fail to find this equilibrium, the potential benefits of increased household income may be overshadowed by domestic challenges, highlighting the importance of managing work-family balance effectively.

Modern lifestyles have increasingly caused more harm than good to domestic life, with changes such as conventional office hours weakening family bonds Two-income families and the breadwinner often face challenges that can overshadow the importance of maintaining harmonious relationships at home These shifts tend to alleviate some economic pressures but can also put a strain on family relationships, revealing that the negative impacts may outweigh the benefits.

DAY 5

The chart below gives Information about the percentage of the adult population who were overweight in four different countries in 1980, 1990 and 2000

The debate over university admissions centers on whether institutions should exclusively admit young students with top academic scores or accept applicants of all ages regardless of their academic performance Advocates for selective admissions argue that offering places only to high-achieving young students ensures academic excellence and maintains university standards Conversely, supporters of inclusive admissions believe that universities should open their doors to people of all ages, fostering lifelong learning and providing opportunities for those who may have faced academic difficulties in the past In my view, a balanced approach that considers both academic merit and individual circumstances can promote diversity, equal opportunity, and a more inclusive higher education system.

The line graph compares electricity consumption on a typical summer day versus a winter day, highlighting seasonal variations Meanwhile, the pie chart displays the distribution of electricity use in a standard English household, showing the percentage allocated to different daily activities Together, these visuals provide insights into how electricity usage fluctuates seasonally and across household routines.

Power demand typically peaks during winter months, surpassing summer consumption levels Throughout the year, daily power usage fluctuates in both seasons, though the extent of variation differs, with winter experiencing more significant changes Understanding seasonal and daily variations in electricity consumption is essential for effective energy management and grid stability.

The primary/principal use of domestic energy goes to heating purposes

The line graph clearly shows that power consumption on a winter’s day doubles compared to a summer’s day Despite seasonal differences, both patterns exhibit similar trends during the first half of the day, with power usage initially declining as the day progresses Specifically, they both reach their lowest point around midday, with summer consumption dropping to approximately 15,000 units.

During winter, electricity demand starts at around 30,000 units in the morning, decreases to 20,000 units, and then rises again to 30,000 units by 3:00 p.m., with consumption steadily increasing throughout the day to peak at nearly 50,000 units around 10 p.m In contrast, during hotter months, electricity usage reaches its highest levels in early afternoon and late at night, with demand stabilizing at approximately 20,000 units These seasonal variations highlight the impact of temperature on daily electricity consumption patterns.

Variations in electrical usage reflect different patterns of electricity consumption, which can be managed through effective allocation of electricity Power consumption encompasses various devices, including room heating systems and water heating appliances, both of which significantly impact energy use While some electrical tools are power-intensive, implementing energy-saving practices helps reduce overall consumption Understanding these concepts is essential for efficient energy management and optimizing electrical resource usage.

In a typical English home, room heating and water heating dominate domestic electricity use, accounting for over half (52%) of total consumption, making them the most power-intensive activities Cooking and washing follow as the second largest energy consumers, with appliances like ovens, kettles, and washing machines contributing 18% of overall electricity usage The remaining 30% is evenly split between lighting, TV, and radio, and between vacuum cleaners, food mixers, and electrical tools, highlighting the diverse range of household electrical devices contributing to power consumption.

Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng put in comparison The line graph puts in comparison the variations in electrical usage

Có nghĩa là so sánh giữa các đại lượng khác nhau Thường sử dụng ở câu Introduction, thay cho các cấu trúc

“illustrate” hay “show” quen thuộc showed some similarities

The patterns recorded in both seasons showed some similarities in the better half of the day

Miêu tả sự tương đồng trong xu hướng của một đại lượng so với các đại lượng được miêu tả trước đó undergo a fall….before

They both undergo an initial fall as the day progresses, reaching a

Dùng để đưa 2 sự thay đổi của cùng 1 loại thông tin (VD

47 low of 15,000 in the summer and 30,000 in the winter, before resuming to 20,000 and 30,000 respectively at around 3.00 p.m giảm mạnh, giảm nhẹ)

Many believe that college admissions should be based on strong academic records achieved by high school graduates, emphasizing merit and academic performance Conversely, some argue that higher education should be accessible to everyone, regardless of age or intellectual background, promoting inclusivity and lifelong learning While both perspectives have valid points, I personally believe that prioritizing qualified high-school graduates offers a more practical and merit-based approach to higher education.

Providing widespread access to tertiary education offers significant benefits, including a more educated and productive workforce that can drive national development Graduates equipped with essential skills and expertise are more likely to increase their productivity in the workplace Additionally, expanding higher education opportunities can help reduce unemployment rates, especially as automation continues to displace many traditional jobs.

Providing workers with access to higher education could significantly improve their chances of securing sustainable jobs However, this proposal faces considerable challenges, as customizing existing curricula and training programs to accommodate diverse skill levels would require substantial effort and financial investment.

I believe that access to higher education should be reserved for young individuals with exceptional academic records Age plays a significant role, as younger students tend to be less burdened with responsibilities, allowing them to focus more effectively on their studies Prioritizing academically talented youth ensures that higher education resources are utilized efficiently, fostering a more dedicated and capable student body.

College admission involves evaluating academic records and assessing an applicant's intellectual level to determine their suitability for tertiary education A strong application demonstrates necessary skill sets and expertise essential for succeeding in higher education and beyond Pursuing a quality curriculum prepares students for sustainable jobs, which offer long-term career stability Ensuring that educational programs are feasible to implement helps institutions provide effective learning experiences that meet future employment demands.

49 everyday concerns that a typical mature student is subject to It follows that these young individuals can give their undivided attention to schoolwork, which is likely to yield better results

The demanding nature of university coursework requires students to possess a strong academic background Only those with proven academic excellence, demonstrated through a spotless high school record, should be considered qualified for such intensive programs This ensures that students have the necessary skills and preparedness to succeed in challenging academic environments.

While both perspectives have validity, I believe universities should adopt a selective recruitment process because granting admission to everyone is impractical An overly inclusive approach can burden institutions with excessive demand, making it difficult to maintain quality standards Selective admissions help ensure that students who demonstrate strong academic performance and a spotless record are given opportunities, leading to a more efficient and effective educational environment.

DAY 6

The flowchart below shows how banana chips are made Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Economic growth is often seen as a vital solution to eradicate global poverty and hunger, as it can create jobs, increase incomes, and improve living standards worldwide However, critics argue that unchecked economic expansion damages the environment, leading to climate change, resource depletion, and ecological imbalance, which can undermine long-term sustainable development While economic growth has the potential to reduce poverty, it must be pursued responsibly to avoid environmental degradation In my opinion, a balanced approach that promotes sustainable economic development, emphasizing environmental conservation alongside economic progress, is essential for achieving lasting poverty alleviation without harming our planet.

The diagram gives an illustration of how banana chips are produced & packaged & distributed

The banana chip production process involves ten essential steps, beginning with peeling fresh raw bananas After peeling, the bananas are sliced, seasoned, and dried to achieve the ideal crispiness The dried banana slices are then packaged into sachets, ensuring freshness and quality Finally, the packaged banana chips are distributed to stores worldwide, making them available for consumers everywhere.

The banana processing begins with peeling using specialized machinery, followed by soaking to preserve freshness Next, the soaked bananas are uniformly sliced into thin pieces using a chipping machine The slices are then dried under a drying lamp before being fried in hot oil until crispy.

The process begins with using a special sieve to remove cooked banana chips from the fryer and drain excess oil, ensuring crispy texture Afterward, the chips undergo a cooling process before being seasoned with flavorful spices to enhance taste Once flavored, the banana chips are carefully packaged and prepared for worldwide distribution to stores, ready for consumers to enjoy.

Raw bananas are produced, peeled, and then packaged into sachets of chips for convenient distribution The process involves using a chipping machine to cut the bananas into crispy pieces, which are then placed into chocolate chip sachets A special sieve is utilized to ensure uniformity, and the chips are fried, with the oil drained thoroughly to achieve optimal crispiness and quality.

Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng gives an illustration The diagram gives an illustration

Thường dùng trong câu Introduction, mang nghĩa minh họa, đưa ra cái nhìn tổng quan về biểu đồ starting with….ending with

The banana chip production process involves ten essential steps, beginning with peeling fresh bananas and ending with packaging and distributing sachets of delicious banana chips to stores globally Throughout this process, the bananas are carefully sliced, dried to achieve the perfect crunch, and seasoned for optimal flavor, ensuring high-quality products The packaged banana chips are then sealed and prepared for distribution, reaching consumers worldwide This comprehensive manufacturing chain highlights the meticulous attention to quality and hygiene required to produce ready-to-eat banana chips for global markets.

Miêu tả bước đầu tiên và bước cuối cùng của một process

In the following step, the soaked bananas are put into a chipping machine where they are cut crosswire evenly into thin slices

Sử dụng để nối khi miêu tả các bước tiếp theo

After being…,it After being entered a drying lamp to dry, these banana slices would be fried in hot oil in a large fryer until they turn crispy

Dùng để miêu tả các hành động lần lượt trong bài process be followed by This step is followed by a cooling process, and then by flavouring

Dùng để miêu tả các hành động lần lượt trong bài process

Economic development is crucial for combating famine and improving living standards worldwide While many believe that sustained economic progress can eventually eradicate poverty and hunger, others express concerns about the environmental risks associated with rapid growth This essay explores both perspectives before reaching a conclusion on the best approach to balanced development.

Economic development plays a crucial role in eliminating famine and poverty by boosting employment rates and providing people with sufficient income to meet their basic needs A thriving economy improves living conditions over time, reducing the suffering caused by lack of essentials For example, Vietnam, an underdeveloped country, has experienced significant progress through economic growth.

In the early 2000s, Asia experienced significant economic growth, which was further accelerated after the country joined the WTO in 2007 This integration into the global trading system boosted exports of goods and services, leading to a substantial improvement in living standards As a result, millions of people were able to escape poverty and hunger, marking a major milestone in the country's development.

Economic progress alone may not be the only solution to fight poverty; alternative strategies such as investing in education systems and empowering impoverished communities to take action are also crucial.

Famine (n) refers to widespread food shortages that can severely impact living standards, the overall condition of people's lives To combat this, efforts aim to put an end to poverty, ensuring basic necessities are accessible to all In under-developed countries, addressing famine and poverty is crucial for improving living conditions and fostering economic development A wary approach is essential when implementing policies, as attention to employment rate and economic growth can help the economy thrive Promoting employment and investing in essential goods contribute to uplifting under-developed countries and improving their residents' quality of life.

Rapid economic development can have severe environmental impacts, including increased industrial waste leading to the degradation of natural habitats like rivers, seas, and air Over-exploitation of natural resources for industrial purposes poses a major threat, potentially causing irreversible damage to ecosystems and threatening species' survival To prevent environmental harm, authorities must implement stricter regulations on industrial activities While economic growth is essential, it should not compromise environmental sustainability.

A harmonious balance between the environment and economic development is essential While a strong economy can help address poverty and improve living standards, it should not come at the expense of the environment Industrial wastes contribute significantly to environmental pollution, and the degradation of natural habitats leads to the destruction of ecosystems Irreversible damage caused by unchecked industrial activities emphasizes the need to impose stricter laws to protect the environment and prevent long-term ecological harm.

DAY 7

The images illustrate the current layout and proposed future plan of the conference center Presently, the conference center features a main hall, reception area, and two small meeting rooms located on the left side The future design plans to expand the main hall significantly and reconfigure the reception area for better flow Notably, the new layout includes additional meeting rooms and a larger outdoor space, enhancing the facility's capacity and accessibility Overall, the future plan aims to increase the conference center's functionality and accommodate more visitors compared to the current layout.

In today's digital age, shopping, working, and communicating with others are seamlessly integrated into our online lives, often eliminating the need for face-to-face interactions This technological advancement offers unparalleled convenience and connects people across the globe, enhancing accessibility and efficiency However, it also raises concerns about social isolation, reduced interpersonal skills, and the decline of meaningful personal relationships While the internet provides significant benefits, such as flexibility and instant communication, it is important to balance online interactions with real-world connections to maintain social well-being.

The plans compare the present-day layout of a Conference

Center with that in the future, following some proposed changes

Most of the changes will occur in the central and right sections of the map, while the western part will largely remain unchanged in both functionality and layout.

The new Center will feature several new facilities, including a fitness center, a kitchen and a reference

The two meeting rooms located in the upper left corner of the Conference Center will retain their original functionality and room design, serving the main purpose of the facility Adjacent to these meeting rooms, a separate block of rooms runs parallel to the road, housing a toilet that remains unchanged in both exterior appearance and function The toilet continues to serve as the primary facility within this block, with its purpose preserved in the ongoing layout.

The current reception and café areas are scheduled for renovation, with the reception transforming into a reference room and the café adjoining the toilet becoming a fitness center Additionally, the central hall, which currently occupies the majority of the space, will be reduced by half to accommodate an additional café and kitchen, enhancing the functionality and amenities of the facility.

The layout of a space significantly influences its functionality, ensuring that areas are designed to efficiently serve their intended purposes For example, catering for events requires dedicated spaces that may include separate blocks of rooms running parallel to the main road, providing privacy and convenience The exterior design often features adjoining areas next to the main building, enhancing accessibility and flow Additionally, spaces can be remodeled or turned into attractive features, such as an oval-shaped garden, which adds aesthetic appeal and a unique outdoor environment.

The upcoming expansion plans include dedicating 65% of the hall area to other uses, with the right-hand section of the center being reorganized The north oval-shaped garden will be expanded while maintaining its original shape, enhancing the aesthetic appeal of the space The existing rounded car park below the garden will be reshaped into a rectangular design, improving functionality and traffic flow Additionally, the new layout will feature two separate entrances and exits from the road, facilitating easier access and better traffic management.

Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng compare the present-day layout

The plans compare the present- day layout

Sử dụng trong câu Introduction của dạng Map, mang nghĩa so sánh tổng quan chung của 2 bản đồ/sơ đồ stays the same in its function

The toilet is the only room of the three that stays the same in its function

Miêu tả sự không thay đổi trong chức năng sử dụng

…., namely The other two rooms in the chain of blocks, namely the current reception and café

Sử dụng để liệt kê chi tiết số đại lượng được nêu ra trước đó

It is expected to it is expected to have two separate enter and exit from the road

Sử dụng khi miêu tả sự thay đổi của bản đồ/sơ đồ trong tương lai

The rapid expansion of the Internet in the early 21st century has facilitated online shopping, remote work, and digital communication, leading many to believe that interpersonal interactions have become less important However, this trend has ultimately caused more harm than good, as increased digital reliance can diminish meaningful social connections and face-to-face interactions.

The rise of the Internet has significantly benefited mankind by providing a wide range of online activities that enhance convenience and efficiency Internet access allows users to save time otherwise spent commuting to physical stores or workplaces, leading to greater comfort in daily routines Additionally, the reduced demand for transportation helps alleviate traffic congestion, contributing to a smoother and more sustainable urban environment.

Shopping from home offers the convenience of making informed purchasing decisions at your own pace, thanks to the abundant information available online Consumers can compare product attributes thoroughly before choosing the best option, leading to smarter buying choices In contrast, in-store shopping often subjects customers to pressure to purchase certain products, which may hinder their ability to make fully informed decisions.

Albeit the good intentions of the Internet, its wide coverage comes with a variety of pitfalls in reality, presumably overshadowing the said benefits One of such shortcomings is

Paved the way for new opportunities, many believe remote working has done wonders for work-life balance, providing a high level of comfort and convenience However, some argue that distant working can do more harm than good, leading to potential drawbacks The concept of unprecedented flexibility in employment has transformed how we approach work, involving back and forth adjustments to workflows Overall, these developments have significantly influenced workplace dynamics, creating both benefits and challenges.

Tiêu đề	7 Ngày Bứt Phá IELTS Writing
Tác giả	Đội Ngũ Biên Soạn IZONE
Trường học	IZONE
Chuyên ngành	Tiếng Anh - IELTS
Thể loại	Sách hướng dẫn ôn thi IELTS Writing
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