Essays TOEFL - Past 4

The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns.. a Some people may think that money is the most important aspect of a job.. b I disagree with the statement that 'The mos

53) Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances Others believe that success results from careful planning In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

(a) Success is the sweetest fruit a person desires in life But the path to success is often so very confusing In fact every successful person have his or her own recipe for this dish

Careful planning is no doubt the most rational way to achieve success in life Unless and until we plan our steps ahead of time our work doesn't remain well organized and until our effort is organized properly we may not achieve success However, human beings being mortal and their powers being limited, no one can predict the future with a very high

degree of accuracy Thus arises the necessity of making predictions and taking risks There may be times when we are faced with multiple alternatives none of which are perfectly favorable - we have to make a guess and perhaps hope for the best

In our country, we are required to qualify in a competitive examination in order to get admitted into an Engineering College The first time I sat for this examination, I failed miserably I had to get admitted into a General college with Physics as my major I then decided to go for the technical colleges a second time I did it and did it well In my

Physics course, however, I barely managed to pass through into the second year It was a great risk I could have failed in the competitive examination the second time too I could have fell sick on the day of the examination I could have got into a big trouble In fact, some of my friends who took the same examination with me failed the second time too and are now passing through hard times

So, there cannot be any golden rule to success It's a recipe with a bowl of planning and perhaps one or two spoonful of risks The exact proportions depend largely on the

individual concerned and the situation Those who can identify the correct proportions come out with flying colors; others fade into the millions God has not given us the power

to predict the future, but he has surely equipped all of us to be able to measure the pros and cons We are all capable of taking calculated risks and that's what is required How much calculation and how much risk Well, no golden rule!

(b) Some people believe that success comes from taking risks or chances Others believe that success results from careful planning In my opinion success comes from careful

planning because it organizes, prepares and provides guidelines to finally accomplish he purpose

In my view, a person learns well if he plans ahead of time before venturing any task This not only makes him more organized and thoughtful of how to approach a given task but also allows him to keep pace with time This would ultimately result in the proper

finishing at correct time The very example is when we appear for exams, it should be planned well before rather than sitting at the end moment and at last leaving it unfinished

Careful planning allows the learner to know his weakness and strength in a particular work This would enable him to work well on areas of weakness and thus would help him

to improve his final performance This kind is seen among many sports people who

practice well before the final match, to improve where they seem to lack It gives them more confidence to finally approach the test with the positive attitude

Last but not least careful planning further grooms the personality of an individual, as

planning ahead gives him the sense of responsibility and creativity to organize his work and finally the competitiveness to reach the goal

Thus overall careful planning makes a person more organized, responsible, competitive,

and puctual All these qualities finally help him to achieve his purpose

54) What change would make your hometown more appealing to people your age? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

55) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect

of a job is the money a person earns Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

(a) Some people may think that money is the most important aspect of a job Of course, this factor cannot be ignored But in my opinion, I disapprove this kind of idea As I see it, there are many other important aspects a job, rather than money

One of them is the satisfaction of the worker No matter what other people say, if the

person is satisfied with his/her work, that's it For example, my father was a good student

in high school His parents and teachers told him to go to law school because it was the best career a person could have at that time and was an honor for the family But my father disagreed and went to the army because he wanted to And until now, he is very satisfied with his job He didn't choose a job that was conspicuous to other people, but a job he liked

Another factor is how well the job suits the person We can't get a clumsy person to be a doctor that requires great awareness on the work, such as surgery A single mistake, even the slightest failure can kill a person So people should also consider on how well he/she can do the job, and if it's suiting the person

In closing, I disagree with the idea of money being the most important aspect of a job Of course, we can't totally ignore money Usually many people just work, whether they like it

or not, just to earn money But we must keep in mind that money should be considered as a second, after we decide things such as the satisfaction or how well the job suits the person Money isn't everything in life, remember that

(b) I disagree with the statement that 'The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns' because money is one of the important aspects of a job, but it is not the most one All of aspects of a job such as money, achievement, and new experience are equally important by following reasons

First of all, nowadays, the world is developed Everyone have to work hard to survive in this busy world Who works hard has more chance to get high rate of salary Everything in this world has higher price Who has no money cannot be in this big world Generally, the clever man who have more chance to get better job has to choose to work in the company that give more money to him because money is one of the important aspect of a job

Secondly, not only do worker want money, but also success Promotion, and good result of

a job are the example of successful Promotion is another thing that worker want

Everyone works hard because they want to be promoted to the higher position Commonly, most people want to be boss and work without ordering By the way, if people work well, the result of a job will be good, so their boss or client will give the compliment to them

Last but not least, the more time people work, the more experience people have, so another important aspect of a job is experience No one can get new experience, if he does not work It is notice that people who have worked for a long time have more experience than people who just start working People who have many experiences can solve the problem that suddenly face them because they used to face with that problem and try to solve it Therefore experience is the important aspect so a job

In conclusion, I cannot point out that which aspect among money, accomplishment, and experience is the most important because all of these have it own beneficial Thus, I

disagree that the money a person earns is the most important aspect of a job

56) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances Use specific reasons and details to support your

answer

(a) I strongly believe that people should never judge a person by external appearances The way we look not always reflects the way we are We can make huge mistakes if we let the external appearances tell us everything about someone

I consider that outward qualities are related in some ways to the manner we are and the way we feel inside Sometimes the clothes we chose express our mood, how we are feeling

at that moment Also, the hairstyle, make up and many other aspects of our look

sometimes give an idea of our attitude towards life

Even though, not all aspects or, for some people, any aspect of the personality is shown in external appearances The look is not evident enough to communicate deep feelings,

beliefs, thoughts and behaviors There is so much more inside of a person that can only be noticed after knowing him very well

I have met people who give an erroneous first impression At first sight one could describe them in a completely different way from what they turn to be when you get to know them well Before making premature conclusions we should pay attention at many other

features, such as the way the person talks, the words he uses, the look in his eyes that help

us to recognize how is that person like People’s values, educational background, skills and virtues lie in the inside, not in the outside

There is a great risk of missing good friends if we allow us to judge by appearances We always should give a second chance to people to show us how they really are, without masquerades We have to be smart to not mistake what we see on the surface, because the main part of almost everything is hidden and not easily seen

(b) One should never judge a person by external experience I agree with the above

statement because in my opinion external appearances are deceptive and how a person seems from outward appearance may not actually reveal his real identity

It is true that outward appearance do give a faint understanding of a person- the taste and manner of dressing reveals his neatness or probably the country he belongs to and

sometimes even his status, as high class tends to show off much compared to mediocres But by all this we can only assume his nature and in my opinion it should not be taken as criteria for judging the person's personality, character or strength

The person who may look ugly might be a person with a golden heart whereas the one looking gorgeous may be the one with a stubborn heart We should form conclusion only after mingling with the person, this provides an opportunity to analyze the person's

thought, study his character and behavior in the most proper manner One instance in my life made this more evident- my hostel roommate was very good looking and everyone seemed to admire looking at her outward attraction But only later when we started living together I did come to know that she was a drug addict, flirt and often bunked her classes

to go out with boys After knowing her real identity all my friends started disliking her

External appearance can give false identity of one's position or rank I say this taking

Gandhi, a famous Indian freedom fighter as example He was a renowned person well known among ministers and common people, but if we were to see his external appearance

he looked very weak and lowly person He used to travel to foreign countries in the same appearance, thus unless you know him, none could make out that he was a great person in Indian history

Last but not least external appearance cannot indicate the strength of an individual, a

person looking fat may actually have less strength than a person looking thin and weak from outside For example, boxing competition in television reveals such examples where

a weak looking competitor will finally win the game beating his over fat opponent

Thus with external appearance we cannot deduce the real identity of a person - his

character or position or his strength and in my opinion unless we know the person we

should not judge the person

57) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make

an important decision alone Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

(a) Someone says that a person should make an important decision alone, but in my

opinion, I think that it is not true because everything can be looked in various aspects, and everyone has different skill and experiences Consequently, consulting other persons is the best way for making a decision

In my point of view, anyone in this world thinks differently from any other persons

because there are many aspects for thinking about something The more the number of people who help think, the more idea, so a person should not make an important decision alone For example, in prominent company, it is very famous to work with team because the more the number of co-workers, the more a number of good ideas Everyone has a chance to propose his opinion, and all of these opinions will be merged to be the

conclusion decision

In addition, making a decision alone can make people waste many things such as money, friends, or life because no one have a good skill in every fields For example, in the

business, if owner want to increase budget to develop a company, but he decides to do so

by himself without consulting with accountancies that are good at calculating budget, the business may be turn down So, the owner has to waste a lot of money because he makes

an importance decision alone

Moreover, it is sure that everyone cannot used to face with the same situation in his whole life, so no one has the same experiences, as do any other persons Doing something that we used to do is easy and has less chance to do wrong, so If a person has to decide to do

something that he used not to do so, but he consult with someone who used to do so, he can do so too For example, last 6 years ago, I had to decide in which faculty that I should study In that time, I had not many experiences, so I asked about the characteristic of any

faculties from my parents, my teachers, and my parent’s friends who work in various

careers Those advices that everyone gave me were very useful for me to make a decision, and right now I am sure that I do not make a wrong decision that I choose to learn in the

faculty of Electrical Engineering If that time I decided to choose it by myself, I might be a doctor who was not happy at all

To conclude, making an important decision is the important thing in people’s life because

it can point out our life such as being the rich or the poor, working as an engineer or a

doctor, or being happy or sad The best way for making a decision is consulting with other person Therefore I agree that a person should never make an important decision alone

(b) In our life there are a lot of important decisions that we have to make For example: a

choice of a profession, marriage, the place where to live These are only a fewest part of

them I think that in such problems we need to consult other people, parents or relatives,

because they may think in different way that we do

It is important to know many possible advantages and disadvantages of your selection

You ask friends to know their thought, and than you make your own decision Friends can understand your opinion and agree with you That is why people have friends

Secondly, if you make an important decision alone, you are going to forget that the others could not accept this decision They can also make their decisions alone, without you, and you will be in a complicated situation Another fact in favor of my opinion is that there are people more experienced than you For example your parents, I’m sure that they had in

their lives many problems that may be close to your problem I think

That to ask them for an advice is the right way to be sure for your decision

In conclusion, the important decisions are also a good experience for us We try to decide how to behave in these decisions I’m sure that each of us will make a right decision after a

consultation with close friends because that is why people have friends

58) A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the

environment Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

(a) There are many ways that a company can help the society as a whole For example, it

can support the arts or it can take some action to protect the environment I believe that the protection of the environment should be a priority to all businesses

First of all nowadays we live in several times more polluted environment than our

ancestors And life conditions are getting worse every day I think that companies can do a lot of things about that They can even raise their profits helping the society Recently, I

read in a newspaper about a complaint of McDonalds to plant trees in order to prevent further destruction of the ozone layer They received approval from the society and

increased their profits So that companies can follow them and help to save our

environment

Secondly, I think that protecting the environment, the company helps every single

member of the society I have in mind all the deceases that have occurred during the last sentury These, so called "new era" deceases, like all allergies, are due to the polluted air Many companies can make an effort and use special equipment in their product ional

process in order to restrict the air pollution

In conclusion, I think that the company is better to give some money to protect the

environment, because in this way it will benefit the whole society It will contribute to people's health and less polluted environment

(b) If a company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment, I will argue in favor of the second option Of course, money should be given for both art and environment, but I believe that in our fast going world, with all the

pollution, to protect the nature is more important than to support arts

First, the air will be fresher than it is today Nowadays we have a lot of cars, factories and plants, which make the air almost impossible to breathe If a company gives enough

money so that we could clean the air, the life especially in the big cities will not be so unhealthy Many people are dying from respiratory diseases Is it not a good idea to

change that situation?

Second, the water will be cleaner Water is the most important recourse of the Earth While the human body is about sixty percents water, it is essential for people lives No one can live without water, so it must be protected and if it is possible it must be cleaned, so that the humans and animals could continue their existence on the Earth

Third and equally important, there will be more green places such as forests and parks In that way, there will be places where people will enjoy being hand in hand with the Mother Nature Trees, bushes and grass make a person to feel better, full of energy and ready to take the challenges of life

To summarize, I believe that arts are a great tool for expressing oneself and for showing the beauty of nature, but they worth nothing if mankind dies and this is exactly what will happen if people stop protecting the environment

59) Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think Other movies are

designed primarily to amuse and entertain Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

(a) One of the ways of entertainment for the people in this time that we live in is going to the theatre and watching a movie Some movies are serious, designed to make audience think the others are designed primarily to entertain and amuse I 'm fan of the movies and watch both types of movies but to tell you the truth I enjoy more those with that entertain Why? I explain it

Our lives are very dynamic; we compete with others about our jobs and other stuff we are always in the run That's why, when I sit down to enjoy a movie, I want to be relaxed Especially, for me are good the comedies in which I can laugh until I get tears in my eyes Laughter is good for us and we all need that And that can get it in a good movie

[comedy0) like "Liar, Liar"

On the other hand, movies that are more serious and make us think, we have to be very concentrated to follow the happenings, and sometimes can make us sad or have bad

influence on us When I was watching the movie "a shot through the heart " which theme was the war in Bosnia, it make me sad and I felt anger in the same time against enemy

All in all, I conclude that I prefer more the movies, which are destined to entertain,

because all I need is to relax and have fun that we all need

60) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do

anything they can to make a profit Use specific reasons and examples to support your position

(a) Some people think that businesses should do anything they can to make a profit In my opinion, these people are thinking a little bit selfish, because there are other things that a business should do, for example considering the workers, costumers Beside all these a business should serve the community

The most important thing to realize is that, a person who is serving the costumers and the community should always be honest In my opinion honesty is the most important quality a business should have in order to deserve the profit it makes Earning money by playing trick on consumers or getting more money than it deserves is so bad that I don’t think a business which makes profit out of dishonesty can carry on with success In a

business all the workers must consider the other workers, the costumers and the

community they live in Colleagues are also very important; they should respect each other and should never forget that business is teamwork If a business is making large profits, it should share it with the people who made that profit possible

If a worker cannot get what he deserves either economically or mentally he may not be able to work effectively in the future

The other important thing is that some of the profits one’s business earns from the

community should be returned to the community For example if big company is earning a lot of money, it should never forget that the money comes from community so it should return some of the profit back to community There are various ways to do it For example

a company can built a park for the children or crèche just like public nursery for the

children of the workers, get the trust of the workers

The last very important point is to get customers’ trust A small company may grow into

a large company after sometime but if it wants to be long lasting, it should always try to produce high-quality products, and give good service to its costumers

Generally, it can be said that the most important thing for a business is to make a profit;

a business should never do anything to make a large profit There are more important things such as serving the costumers, workers and community A business must make profits, but we all - workers, customers, community- must profit from a successful

business

61) Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

(a) I think I would prefer to hurry to get things done than to take my time and live life at a slower pace because it allows me to do things over a short period of time, make my self available for opportunities and it makes one to be efficient in life

Firstly, life on earth is short and I would advise anyone who cares to listen that it is

advisable to do things on time knowing fully well that you cannot live forever and that people around you should feel your impact Imagine if everyone takes their time to do every thing that they should do, things wouldn't be done on time, there would be chaos, anarchy and total disorder For example, the police would fight crime when they feel like

or the president of a country would address urgent humanitarian needs at his own time or children would go to school when they feel like Such a situation would lead to the total breakdown of a society

If I have to do things at my time, then I would miss a lot of opportunities in life For

example, if an unemployed graduate like myself spends the whole day doing chores in the house, when I could do the house chores quickly and attend seminars related to my field that could keep me updated on recent developments in my field and in the long run

enhance my job prospects

Imagine if workers in a company take their time to do things at a slower pace, then such an organization is bound to fail because things wouldn't be done on time and such a company would lag behind its competitors

No matter what some people feel I think is better for people to do things in a hurry to

prevent disaster, promote efficiency and make one available for opportunities?

62) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children Use specific reasons and examples to support your

answer

(a) Playing games has always been thought to be important to the development of balanced and creative children; however, what part, if any, they should play in the lives of adults has never been researched that deeply I believe that playing games is every bit as important for adults as for children Not only is taking time out to play games with our children and other adults valuable to building interpersonal relationships but is also a

well-wonderful way to release built up tension

There's nothing my husband enjoys more after a hard day of work than to come home and play a game of Chess with someone This enables him to unwind from the day's activities and to discuss the highs and lows of the day in a non-threatening, kick back environment

A close friend received one of my most memorable wedding gifts, a Backgammon set I asked him why in the world he had given us such a gift He replied that he felt that an important aspect of marriage was for a couple to never quit playing games together Over the years, as I have come to purchase and play, with other couples & coworkers, many games like: Monopoly, Chutes & Ladders, Mastermind, Dweebs, Geeks, & Weirdoes, etc

I can reflect on the integral part they have played in our weekends and our "shut-off the T.V and do something more stimulating" weeks They have enriched my life and made it more interesting Sadly, many adults forget that games even exist and have put them away

in the cupboards, forgotten until the grandchildren come over

All too often, adults get so caught up in working to pay the bills and keeping up with the

"Joneses'" that they neglect to harness the fun in life; the fun that can be the reward of enjoying a relaxing game with another person It has been said that "man is that he might have joy" but all too often we skate through life without much of it Playing games allows

us to: relax, learn something new and stimulating, interact with people on a different more comfortable level, and to enjoy non-threatening competition For these reasons, adults should place a higher priority on playing games in their lives

(b) Some people assert that playing games is important for adults In my opinion the

importance of playing games depends on the types of games considered While some

games may benefit to health, mental abilities, working capacity, or help to relax, others may harm the person playing in different ways

I think the games that are important for adults to play include those requiring action,

intensive thinking and teamwork It has been medically proven that physical training is extremely important for adults It helps not only to maintain fitness, but also enhances the capacity of thinking and working Therefore participating in sports games, such as

basketball, football, tennis and other action games is essential Games that require

intensive thinking develop logic, attention and unconventional approach Among this type

of games are puzzles, crosswords, and strategy games And last, but not least, games that involve team work are important to develop further communicability, ability to make

correct decisions with consideration of opinions of different people and other skills,

because these skills are often used in everyday situations

Still there are other types of games that may be harmful These are major computer games, which cause severe eyestrain and exposure to radiation Moreover, computer games not only harm health, but also have a negative impact on the working capacity Many

companies have stringent rules against their employees playing games during work-hours

There is also one category of games, which I believe can be both harmful and beneficial These are games played for money On one hand, winning such a game the player feels positive emotions, which have an overall positive influence on the player’s health and financial situation On the other hand, loosing the game can drive the person playing into disappointment and even into depression, thus harming his health, not to mention the loss

of money

Thus, in my opinion, the importance of adults playing games can be evaluated depending

on the level of positive or negative influences that those game may have on the person involved

63) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or other adult

relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

(a) Parents and adult relatives play a significant role in shaping a child's life They teach them how to live, and struggle for the right things However when children grow up, often they fail to realize the contributions of their parents and adult relatives in their lives

Teenage children think that being a teenager they are able to make all the decisions of their lives In my opinion, parents and adult relatives should make important decisions for their teenage children because teenagers are inexperienced, overconfident and many times they

do not realize the consequences that the important decisions can have on their lives