Bài giảng điện tử - Writing Skill 3

In conclusion, various measures can be taken to mitigate the problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older. MODEL ANSWER ANALYSIS[r]

IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Types of Essay Questions

1 MAIN FEATURES

 Problems and solutions

 Causes and solutions

 Causes and effects

 Others (two-part questions)

Problems and Solutions

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing

What problems will this cause for individuals and society? 

Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing 

populations.

1 MAIN FEATURES

Causes and Solutions

Crime rate in teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries in recent years

Give  some  possible reasons for  this  increase  and  suggest solutions to 

overcome youth crimes.”

1 MAIN FEATURES

Causes and Effects

In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin

Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they 

have in terms of health and society.

1 MAIN FEATURES

1 MAIN FEATURES

Introduction

Body 1: CausesBody 2: EffectsConclusion

Handout “ Language for showing Causes-Effects-Solutions ”

2 USEFUL LANGUAGE

Question – Problem & Solution Essay Type

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

Write about the following topic:

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing

What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing

populations.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own

experience or knowledge

Write at least 250 words

3 MODEL ANSWER ANALYSIS

Increasing life expectancy has become a matter of great concern in the recent years, and this phenomenon proves to be more serious in the

developed countries Although serious problems have arisen as a result of this, steps can definitely be

taken to tackle the problem.

3 MODEL ANSWER ANALYSIS

Paraphrase the

question

Thesis statement –

mentioning main areas

covered in the essay

Body Paragraph 1 – “Problems”

As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several related problems

can be anticipated The main issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who

will be eligible to receive a pension The government will have to spend a large amount of money to pay

these senior citizens who no longer contribute to the development of the economy Moreover, the

proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money

in taxes in relation to the size of the population In other words, an ageing population will mean a

greater tax burden for working adults Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare

This is due to the fact that elderly people are often subject to many diseases, which is detrimental to their health In this way, the government will have to spend more investing on healthcare and young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives, which can be bad for their work

3 MODEL ANSWER ANALYSIS

1st problem

2nd problem

3rd problem

Body Paragraph 2 – “Solutions”

There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems

described above Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age

for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70 Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life A second measure would be for

governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working

adults who pay taxes Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken

from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport

facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens

3 MODEL ANSWER ANALYSIS

1st solution

2nd solution

3rd solution

In conclusion, various measures can be taken

to mitigate the problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.

3 MODEL ANSWER ANALYSIS

Paraphrasing the

thesis statement

It is true that the behavior of school pupils in some

parts of the world has been getting worse in recent

years There are a variety of possible reasons for

this, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem

Body 1

In my opinion, three main factors are to blame for the way young people behave at

school nowadays Firstly, modern parents tend to be too lenient or permissive Many

children become accustomed to getting whatever they want, and they find it difficult

to accept the demands of teachers or the limits imposed on them by school rules

Secondly, if teachers cannot control their students, there must be an issue with the

quality of classroom management training or support within schools Finally, children

are influenced by the behavior of celebrities, many of whom set the example that

success can be achieved without finishing school

Body 2

Student behavior can certainly be improved I believe that the change must start with parents, who need to be persuaded that it is important to set firm rules for their

children When children misbehave or break the rules, parents should use reasonable

punishments to demonstrate that actions have consequences Also, schools could

play an important role in training both teachers and parents to use effective

disciplinary techniques, and in improving the communication between both groups

At the same time, famous people, such as musicians and football players, need to

understand the responsibility that they have to act as role models to children.!

In conclusion, schools will continue to face discipline

problems unless parents, teachers and public figures set clear rules and demonstrate the right behavior

themselves.

TIME TO REWRITE!

PRACTICE 2

Intro

Body 1

Conclusion

TIME TO REWRITE!