Thầy Danh – Giáo viên IELTS Quận 11 http://tienganhlungdanh.edu.vn 077.4647.635 Đề bài: Some people think individuals cannot do anything to make the environment different, other think th
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Đề bài: Some people think individuals cannot do anything to make the environment different, other think they can Discuss both views and give your opinion
(16 Mar 2019)
Khía cạnh viết: individuals can help make the environment different
Bước 1: Động não tìm ý tưởng → 2 ý nhỏ
Topic sentence: Individuals can help make the environment different by changing their daily habit
- Ý nhỏ 1: reduce using plastic bags
- Ý nhỏ 2: car sharing
Bước 2: Viết 1 đoạn văn 3 câu đơn
Individuals can help make the environment different by changing their daily habit One way is to reduce using plastic bags Another way is car sharing
Bước 3: Với mỗi ý nhỏ, viết thêm 1 câu đơn bổ nghĩa cho nó
Individuals can help make the environment different by changing their daily habit One way is to reduce using plastic bags For example, shoppers can use cloth bags Another way is car sharing That way, there is a decrease in black smoke
Bước 4: Mở rộng 5 câu đơn thành 5 câu phức/ghép
It is undeniable that individuals can, to some extent, help make the environment different
by changing their daily habit One way is to reduce the use of plastics bags, which are often thrown away at sea and destroy the living environment of sea animals For example, shoppers can use cloth bags when they go to supermarket Another way is car sharing,
which means that many people can share the same car That way, the number of private
cars goes down, leading to a decrease in black smoke
Bước 5: Đổi từ vựng/ngữ pháp hay hơn
It is undeniable that individuals can, to some extent, help protect the environment by changing their daily habit One way is to reduce the use of non-biodegradable plastics such as shopping bags and drinking straws, which have normally been dumped at sea and destroyed the living habitats of marine animals For example, shoppers can be
encouraged to switch to reusable bags instead of single-use plastic bags when they go to supermarket Another way is car sharing, which means that many people who only need
to use a vehicle for a short period of time can share the same car That way, the number
of private cars may hopefully goes down, leading to a resulting decrease in greenhouse gas emissions (119 words)