UNIT 1 WRITING TASK 1

 The percentage of staff with a language qualification  The proportion of employees who held a qualification in a foreign language  The figure for employees who achieved a degree of

IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Nguyễn Đình Phúc

SIMILARITY

2 - 3 sentences

SIMILARITY

2 - 3 sentences

DIFFERENCE

2 - 3 sentences

DIFFERENCE

2 - 3 sentences

GROUP

INFORMATION

GROUP

INFORMATION

2-3 PARAGRAPHS

2-3 PARAGRAPHS

The table below shows some background information on the staff working

in a global hotel chain

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

 The percentage of staff with a language qualification

 The proportion of employees who held a qualification in a foreign

language

 The figure for employees who achieved a degree of linguistics

Relative Clause

Noun Phrase

Relative Clause + Synonym

 The percentage of staff speaking two or more languages

 The proportion of employees who could speak at least two

languages

 The figure for employees who were multilingual

Relative Clause Relative Clause Reduction

Relative Clause + Synonym

 The percentage of employees with previous work experience

 The proportion of staff who had past work experience

 The figure for staff having past work experience

Relative Clause

Relative Clause Reduction

Noun Phrase

FROM …… TO ……

TO…… FROM ……

TO……

BY……

An increase/decrease of …

 From 5% in 1975 to 20% in 2010.

 To 20% in 2010 from 5% in 1975.

 To 20% in 2010.

 By 15% from 1975 to 2010

= An increase of 15% in 25 years

PARAGRAPH 1: Language Qualification

Cơ bản: The Proportion of + Noun + made up / accounted for +

SỐ LIỆU + TIME

Between 1975 and 2000, there was a significant rise in the percentage of employees who held a qualification in a foreign language, from 5% to 22% before decreasing slightly by 2 % in

2010 (34 words)

Nâng cao: There +be + TREND + SL+ BEFORE +VING/NOUN +SL

The proportion of employees with language

qualification accounted for 5% in 1975, 22% in

2000 and 20% in 2010 (19 words)

PARAGRAPH 1: Language Qualification

Between 1975 and 2000, there was a significant rise in the percentage of employees who held a qualification in a foreign language, from 5% to 22% BEFORE decreasing

Từ năm 1975 đến năm 2000, có một sự tăng khá đáng kể về tỷ lệ nhân viên có bằng ngôn ngữ từ 5% lên 22% TRƯỚC KHI giảm nhẹ khoảng 2% vào năm 2010.

PARAGRAPH 2: Multilingual Employees

Cơ bản: The percentage of + Noun + BE + SỐ

LIỆU + TIME

Only 10% were the percentage of employees in Shore Hotel who were able to speak at least two languages / were multilingual in

1975 (22 words)

Nâng cao: Số liệu + BE + the percentage/proportion + of + Noun + Who/

Which/ That + (S) + V

The percentage of employees speaking two or

more languages was 10% in 1975 (13 words)

PARAGRAPH 2: Multilingual Employees

Cơ bản: S+ V+ adv + SL + TIME, then + V + SL +

TIME

Nâng cao: S+ V + adv + SỐ LIỆU + Time, Relative Clause, additional information

The percentage of employees speaking two or

more languages went up slightly to 23% , then

increased to 79% in 2010

In the next 15 years, this figure went up slightly to 23% , which was followed by a dramatic growth at 79% in 2010, an increase

of 56%.

Only 10% were the percentage of Shore Hotel’s employees who were able to speak at least two languages in 1975 In the next 15 years, this figure went up slightly to 23% , which was followed by a dramatic growth at 79% in 2010,

PARAGRAPH 2: Multilingual Employees

Chỉ có 10% là tỷ lệ phần trăm nhân viên của khách sạn Shore đã

có thể nói ít nhất hai ngôn ngữ năm 1975 Trong 15 năm tới, con

số này tăng lên 23%, con số được theo sau bỏi một tăng trưởng đáng kể ở mức 79% trong 2010, tăng 56%.

PARAGRAPH 3: Previous Work Experience

Cấu trúc 5 : S + accounted for + SL +

TIME

Meanwhile, staff with past working experience accounted for 75%

in 1975

Cấu trúc 6 : There was a fluctuation +

TIME, hitting a low at + SL and reaching a

peak at + SL

Meanwhile, there was a fluctuation in the first 25 years, reaching

a peak at 78% in 1985 and hitting a low at 50% in 2000

PARAGRAPH 3: Previous Work Experience

It then showed a significant decline with the proportion at 45% in

2005 before increasing minimally to 67% in 2010.

Cấu trúc 6 : S + showed/ witnessed/

experienced + Trend , BEFORE + Ving + SL

Cấu trúc 7 : There + be + (a/an) +adj+

increase(s)/ decrease(s) in something

There was a significant decrease in the proportion of past working experience at 45% in 2005 before increasing minimally to 67% in 2010.

PARAGRAPH 3: Previous Work Experience

Trong khi đó, nhân viên có kinh nghiệm làm việc chiếm 75%

trong 1975 Sau đó, nó cho thấy một sự suy giảm đáng kể với tỷ

lệ 45% trong 2005 trước khi tăng nhẹ lên 67% trong 2010.

in 2010.

The table illustrates the percentage of employees working

in three different categories in Shore Hotel between 1975 and 2010, over 35 years.

It is clear that the proportion of multilingual employees

slight decrease over 35 years It is also noticeable that degree of linguistics gained the smallest figure , compared

to the other types.

Between 1975 and 2000, there was a significant rise in the percentage of employees who held a qualification in a foreign

2010

able to speak at least two languages in 1975 In the next 15 years,