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Đinh Thắng IELTS
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BÀI TẬP 01
Some people believe that students should take a gap year after finishing school and work or travel during this period To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
A – MỞ BÀI
Many students are choosing to take a gap year after finishing school 2.I accept that there are good reasons for this, but I believe that they should go to university right after high school instead
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1 There is an increasing tendency amongst smb to do smth (Mục 2.2 tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS writing)
2 It would be better (for smb) to do smth (Mục 1.3 tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS writing)
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1.There is an increasing tendency amongst many to opt for a gap year between high school and university studies
2.While there are several reasons for this, my belief is that it would be better to attend higher education immediately after high school
B – BODY PARAGRAPH SỐ 01
3- Certainly, it is reasonable to study when they are older for some reasons 4- It is true that a gap year is a great time for students to become more aware of themselves 5-
Therefore, a part-time job at this time might be helpful later when a person needs to choose
a course that is suitable for them 6- In addition, a person can gain a lot of experiences and knowledge during a gap year 7- My friend decided to go to many places in Vietnam before going to university 8-This helps him to learn more about the cultures, which is helpful for his career
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3 – when they are older later in life (mục 2.1 tài liệu Hướng dẫn viết câu trong IELTS writing)
5 - to be suitable for to best suit their abilities and interests
6- a person can gain a lot of experiences and knowledge the invaluable experiences and knowledge (that) one can gain from a gap year (Lối nói nhấn mạnh: đưa thông tin quan trọng lên trước - mục 3.2.2 Children gain effective communication skills at school The effective communication skills at school they gain
7&8 – Cả 2 câu được gộp lại thành 1 câu bằng cách sử dụng từ WHICH (Mục 1.13)
his future career as a cultural expert Sử dụng hiệu quả từ AS - Mục 7.7.1
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3- Obviously, the option to acquire an education later in life is reasonable in certain cases 4- It is indeed the case that a gap year might provide valuable time for one to discover their potential
5- A part-time job during this stage, therefore, might be helpful later when a person needs
to decide on an academic pathway that best suits their abilities and interests
6- Apart from this, the invaluable experiences and knowledge one can gain from a gap year are other feasible reasons
7- A friend of mine decided to travel to different parts of Vietnam before entering university, thus helping him to develop the knowledge relevant to his future career as a cultural expert
C – BODY PARAGRAPH SỐ 02
9- However, I believe the drawbacks of taking a gap year are greater than the benefits 10- Firstly, students might want to leave school but then do not want to go back 11- Many people get into the habit of spending money when they have a job; as a result, they find studying is less attractive than working 13- Secondly, some students tend to spend a gap year relaxing rather than learning something useful because they usually do not know how
to manage their time effectively 14- In fact, some of these people spend a lot of time doing healthy things such as video games instead of taking part in useful activities such as playing sport or attending social clubs
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3 – when they are older later in life (mục 2.1)
5 - to be suitable for to best suit their abilities and interests
6- a person can gain a lot of experiences and knowledge the invaluable experiences and knowledge (that) one can gain from a gap year (Lối nói nhấn mạnh: đưa thông tin quan trọng lên trước - mục 3.2.2 Children gain effective communication skills at school The effective communication skills at school they gain
7&8 – Cả 2 câu được gộp lại thành 1 câu bằng cách sử dụng từ WHICH (Mục 1.13)
his future career as a cultural expert Sử dụng hiệu quả từ AS - Mục 7.7.1
9- involved in – Mục 7.3
10 – the case – mục 7.7.4
This is the case ~ This is true
11- Thay vì cấu trúc câu gốc là SVO; as a result, SVO Sử dụng từ FOR đứng đầu câu và sử dụng từ LIFE – mục 7.8.2
12 – SVO, particularly when SVO
Do not know how to manage time effectively Đưa thành noun-phrase là have little
experience in time management
13- a lot of time a good part of their time
Phân biệt: spend time doing smth & spend time ON smth
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9- Despite these reasons, in my view, the drawbacks involved in taking a gap year surpass its benefits
10- Firstly, it can be easy to leave school, but this is not the case for going back
11- For the vast majority of people who have already got into the habit of spending money earned from their jobs throughout the gap year, university life could become less attractive than working life
12- Secondly, a year out might be spent as a year off, particularly when high school leavers have little experience in time management
13- As a matter of fact, some of these people tend to spend a good part of their time on unhealthy hobbies such as video games instead of useful activities such as taking part in sport or attending social clubs
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BÀI TẬP 02
In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work Some people consider it valuable work experience, important for learning and taking
responsibility To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
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A – MỞ BÀI
1 In many countries, the governments encourage children to do jobs such as washing cars and doing the gardening 2 Although this can help children to develop, I think children
should not be encouraged to work
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1 Sử dụng câu bị động
Cố gắng paraphrase cụm từ developing countries
2 Thay Although SVO, SVO bằng While SVO, SVO
Đưa develop thành danh từ
Sử dụng từ work như một danh từ - Mục 1.5
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1.In many parts of the world children are encouraged to do jobs such as washing cars or doing the gardening
2.While this can be helpful for their development in some ways, my opinion is that children should not be encouraged to find work
B – BODY PARAGRAPH SỐ 01
3- Clearly, if children do paid work, they could gain several benefits
4- Indeed, this might help them to learn more about how valuable money is
5 –In fact, they might face challenges while working, which could help them understand that earning money is not easy and therefore helps them learn to use money effectively 6- Also, children might gain experience and knowledge, both of which are useful if they learn to link these to lessons at school and their careers in the future
7- For example, a boy who is ten years old living near my house chose to work for a local bookstore, and this job gave him the most basic skills that are necessary for him to become
a book seller in the future
8 This example shows that working is important for children
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Gợi ý (Nếu bạn thấy cần thiết)
3 – Sử dụng V-ing ở đầu câu – Mục 3.4
Hoặc: Sử dụng cụm associated with – Mục 7.3
4- Sử dụng từ appreciate
5- Sử dụng cách nói nhấn mạnh: Đưa challenges lên làm chủ ngữ
Đưa understand thành danh từ understanding
Sử dụng cụm both … and…
6- Sử dụng từ gained như trong Mục 3.2.1
Đưa lessons at school và their careers in the future thành các cụm danh từ ngắn gọn hơn 7- Sử dụng mục 2.1: thay từ đồng nghĩa với choose
Sử dụng mục 7.7.1: sử dụng từ as để nói về nghề nghiệp
8 Sử dụng cấu trúc How như trong mục 3.2.2
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3 Clearly, doing paid work could provide school-age children with several benefits
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There are several benefits associated with children doing paid work
4 Indeed, this might help them to appreciate the value of money
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Coping with challenges at work can help them both gain a better understanding of how hard earning money is and develop early time management skills
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This is because the challenges they face at work may help them both understand that earning money has never been easy and begin to form good financial habits
6 In addition, all the hands-on experience and knowledge gained from a job may be helpful
if children learn to link these to school lessons and their future careers
7 For example, a 10-year-old boy in my neighbourhood opted for a part-time job at a local bookstore, thus giving him the most basic skills needed to pursue his dream career as a book seller at a later stage of life
8 Such an example shows how important early experience in the workplace is for
schoolchildren
c – BODY PARAGRAPH SỐ 02
9 However, I think if a child starts work, the drawbacks are greater than the benefits
10 In developing countries like Vietnam, many young children spend a lot of time working under bad conditions to help their families
11 While their peers can go to school, these children often lose the chance to do so and could also not have good health and even get injuries
12 Another problem is that some children may think money is more important than other things in life such as family and health
13 Although earning money can help one to live comfortably in the future, children should not think that it is more important than their parents and siblings
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9 Đưa children starts work thành cụm danh từ
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Dùng từ formal hơn a lot of time
11 Dùng từ unlike
Để diễn đạt về sức khỏe, có thể nhớ đến từ ‘suffer’
12 Things là từ không formal nên cần dùng từ khác thay thế
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So sánh với câu trả lời gợi ý
9 In my view, however, the drawbacks to children’s engagement in paid work are often greater than the benefits
10 In developing countries, such as Vietnam, many young children spend hours working in poor conditions in order to support their families
11 Unlike their peers, very often these children lose educational opportunities and could also suffer from health problems and even injuries
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They might struggle to allocate time for their school studies, and their health could suffer as
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12 Another potential drawback is that some children may value money over other aspects
of life such as family and health
13 Although earning money can contribute to a decent standard of living later in life, it should not be thought of as more important than our loved ones
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