293773133 IELTS writing academic task 1 ver2

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Write at least 150 words

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The graph shows the estimated maximum population of elephants in a range of Asian countries in both 1997 and 2004

In most of the countries included in the graph, the population fell This was most noticeable in Malaysia and Thailand, where the number of elephants was thought to be less than half the figure in 1997 In the former, the number of elephants dropped as low as 1000 India remained the country with by far the largest elephant population, but experienced a dramatic fall in numbers so that in 2004 there may have been as few as 7500 Despite its size, China had

a very small population of at most 500 elephants by 2004

Although the trend was downwards overall, elephant populations were thought to have remained stable in Laos and Vietnam at approximately 1200 The only country where elephants showed signs of recovering was Cambodia, where numbers may have risen by up to 200

(155 words)

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The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Brick manufacturing

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The process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry can be outlined in seven consecutive steps

First the raw material, clay, which was just below the surface of soil in certain clay-rich areas has to be dug up by a digger

Then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break up the big chunks of clay into much smaller areas, which fall through the metal grid onto

a roller, whose motion further segregates the bits of clay Sand and water are added to make a homogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds

or cut into brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter

Those fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours, several dozen if not hundreds of bricks at a time The dried bricks are then transferred to a so-called kiln, another type of high temperature oven First they are kept at a moderate temperature of 200C – 1300C This process is followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber

Once the bricks have cooled down and have become hard, they get packaged and delivered to their final destination, be it a building site or storage.(217 words)

Band 9

This response fully satisfies the requirements of the task All key features of each stage of the process are appropriately and accurately presented An excellent overview is given at the beginning of the response and this skilfully incorporates part of the rubric, changing the grammatical function, to give a

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brief summary of the whole process The message is very easy to read with seamless cohesion that attracts no attention Paragraphing, linking and referencing are all skilfully managed The language used is very fluent and sophisticated A wide range of vocabulary and structures are used with full flexibility and accuracy Only rare minor

‘slips’ can be found and these do not detract from the high rating

This script is a good example of a Band 9 performance

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The bar chart below shows the production of the world’s oil in OPEC and non-OPEC countries.

Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

Although forecasters predict that oil production is likely stabilise between 2010 and 2020, a lot more of this oil is expected to come from the Middle Eastern OPEC countries, and under 5 million barrels per day from other areas

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The bar charts below show the Marriage and Divorce Statistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994.

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As we can see from the information, there was a general trend for the number of marriage to decrease over 13 years in most of the countries In 1981, the USA had the most marriages (10.6 per thousand) but by 1994 this had fallen to 9.1 per thousands The number of marriages also fell substantially in Finlandand France The only country where there was an increase in the number of marriage was Denmark.

By comparison the rate of divorce increased in most countries over the same period The only exceptions to this trend were Germany, where there was no change, and the USA and Denmark, where the figure fell The country with the fewest divorce in both 1981 and 1994 was Italy

(123 words)

The table below gives statistics about the size of US households over a number of years (Household = all the people living together in one house.) Study the information and answer the question.

US household by size 1790-1990

Year

Per cent distribution of number of households Average population per household

1 person 2 person 3 person 4 person 5 person 6 person 7 person

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The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

On the other hand, the total wealth of people in China, India, Africa, Latin America and Caribbean, and the other poor (lower income) countries in Pacific is far less than their shares of the world population This is most striking in India, where 16% of the world’s population own only 1% of the world’s wealth and in China, which has the highest percentage of global population (24%) but only 3% of the world’s wealth

Asia-(170words)

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The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006.

Worldwide Mobile phone Sales in 2005 & 2006 (% share of market)

Company 2005 % Market share 2006 % Market share

The table gives information on the market share of mobile phone manufactures for two consecutive years, 2005 and 2006

In both years, Nokia was clearly the market leader, selling 32.5% of all mobile phones in 2005, and slightly more (35%) in 2006 This is a greater market share than its two closest competitors, Motorola and Samsung, added together

Motorola increased its market share from 17.7% in 2005 to 21.1% in 2006 In contrast, Samsung saw its share of the market decline slightly from 12.7% to 11.8%

The other companies listed each had a much smaller share of the market Sony Ericsson’s share increased from 6.3% in 2005 to 7.4% in 2006 whereas L.Gdecreased slightly from 6.7% to 6.3% BenQ Mobile’s share more than halved from 2005 to 2006; from 4.9% of the market to only 2.4%

Other mobile phone manufactures accounted for 19.2% of the market in 2005- more than all the companies mentioned except Nokia However, in 2006 the other companies only made 16.2% of mobile phone sales- less than both Nokia and Motorola

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The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007.

Country

Number of People using rail

transport (not including metro)

Passenger kilometres per head

of population

Cargo carried (billions

The two countries which are most similar are the Malaysia and UAE Both have between 5 and 6% of people who use trains, they travel between 770 and

780 kilometres and the amount of freight is approximately the same (22.2 and 21.9 billion tons respectively)

In general it can be seen that while citizens of the Canada use rail transport the least, they transport the most amount of cargo by rail

(184 words)

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The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The diagram shows how apple is canned

Once the cans have been filled they are sealed and cooked over heat to ensure that the cans are sterilized When the cans are cool, a label is attached and they are placed into storage The canned apple is now ready to be despatched to supermarkets and sold

(158 words)

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The bar chart shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities; Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur and Amman Summarize the information

by describing the main features of the chart and making comparisons where appropriate.

No cities disposed of more than 25% of its waste by recycling and in the case of Toronto, it was less than 10% Composting was the least common method

of waste disposal No cities disposed of more than 10% of its waste by compositing and Amman hardly did any composting

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The table below gives information on internet use in six categories by age group.

Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.

Internet activities by age group

Age group Activity% Teens 20s 30s 40s 50s 60s 70+

Downloads activity display a similar trend to internet games, but they are less popular in general and decline markedly with people over age 40 Only 6% of people over age 70 download

Online Product research is made by over seventy percent of all people except for teenagers who do not research product Product research peak in the forties age group, when almost three-quarters of people research for product in this way

Buying a product online is equally popular with all internet users except those at either end of the age scale: teens and internet users age 70 or older Searching for people online is done by between one-quarter and one-third of people depending on age, except for teenagers who make only five searches out of every 100

(198 words)

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The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007 Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

Housing owned and rented in the UK

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The pie charts compare home ownership and renting for 1991 and 2007 in percentage terms In 1991, home owner were the most popular type of housing, accounting for 60%, or more than over half of all homes The next largest sector was social rented homes, amounting to 23% or nearly one-third of homes The remaining homes were mostly privately rented (11%) with a tiny fraction being social housing (6%)

Sixteen years later, in 2007, the number of home owners had risen to 70%, or almost three quarters of all homes This was an increase of 10% compared with 1991 Much of the increase in home ownership can be explained by the decrease in social rented homes, which had dropped from 23% to 17%.The percentage of privately rented homes had remained unchanged at 11% However, there were 5 million more homes in 2007 compared with 1991 so the number of rented homes had increased despite the same percentage Social housing has decreased three-fold from 6% in 1991 to 2% in 2007, and it remains the least popular type of housing

(180 words)

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The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart shows information about people’s drinking behavior by age group in the US Several trends are evident

The highest proportion of those who never drink (nearly two-thirds) was in the 16 to 24 years group The proportion tended to decrease with age Only 40 per cent of people aged 65 to 74 had never drink

On the other hand, the percentage of those who had quit drinking tended to increase with age Only 5 per cent of those in the youngest age group (16 to 24)were ex-drinkers, as opposed to roughly 40 per cent of those aged 65 to 75

The percentage of those classed as heavy drinkers also showed a distinct pattern People in middle age (35 to 54) tended to be the heaviest drinkers – approximately 13 per cent of the total A relatively small proportion of those in the youngest age group, and an even smaller percentage of those in the oldest group (roughly 3 per cent) drink heavily

Overall, age appears to be a significant factor in patterns of drinking behavior

(177 words)

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The table shows the average length of YouTube video advertisements and average length of time viewers spend watching them Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Average YouTube Video ad length and time viewed

Type of YoTube ad

Average length of YoTube

ad (seconds)

Average time viewed(seconds)

to have longer advertisements Entertainments, financial services and travel advertisements, for example, were all twenty eight seconds on average or longer Less expensive products, on the other hand, such as consumer electronics, clothing and medicines, tended to have shorter advertisements.Adverts for more expensive products or services also tended to be watched for longer than adverts for less expensive items Viewers on average watched more than 50 per cent of advertisements for entertainment, travel, business and finance In contrast, viewers tended to watch less of government

advertisements and advertisements for cheaper goods such as consumer electronics, clothing and medicines

Overall, length of YouTube video advertisements and length of time spent viewing such advertisements appears to be associated with the perceived cost of the product or service being advertised

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The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries, The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

in Germany, where nearly one in five journeys was made by public transport

The bar chart provides information that may help explain why car use in the Canada The most frequently cited reason was lack of any other alternative (38%) Although a sizeable percentage said it was more convenient (12%), the other factors listed appeared to relate more to need than preference, e.g working night shift

Overall, the figures show considerable variation in modes of transport used, though the car continues to dominate in most contexts

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The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart shows the gender distribution of students doing computer scientific research across a range of disciplines at a US university in 2011

In five of the six disciplines, males outnumbered females Male students made up a particularly large proportion of the student group in subjects related to the study of programming objects: mathematics, programming, and engineering The gender gap was particularly large in the field of mathematics, where there were five times as many male students as female students

Men and women were more equally represented in subjects related to the study of computer science: natural sciences, psychology, and linguistics In natural science, there were nearly as many women [approximately 200] as men [approximately 240] This was also true of psychology Linguistics was the only discipline in which women outnumbered men [roughly 110 women vs 90 men]

Overall, the chart shows that at this university, computer science subjects continue to be male-dominated; however, women have a significant presence in fields related to psychology and the computer sciences

(169 words)

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The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India.

Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

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The graphs illustrate the consumption of 4 types of food used in the word in 2008 The figures are compared to the amounts of food used in china and India

in the same year

As an overall trend, the two countries showed different food consumption from the world average, while processed food consumption still had the largest percentages in all the three charts

In particular, processed food consumption was the highest in the in the world, accounting for 41%, which was followed by vegetables and fruits at 29% and animal food at a quarter Only 4% consisted of nut and seeds consumption

Likewise, China used processed food in the largest proportion of 39% Animal food showed the same figure as the world’s average, 25% Vegetable and fruits was used at 23% while nuts and seeds showed less than a half figure

In India, both vegetable and processed food were used the most in the year 2008 with percentages of 34% and 32% respectively, nuts and seeds used in this country showed the largest proportion among the three charts given, making up 19% at this time

(185 words)

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The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates.

Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information.

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The flowchart illustrates the various steps that a high school student must follow to enter university

Once the high school has been obtained, students need to complete an application for university entrance This can be downloaded from the university website The completed application should then be sent to the administration

Applicants receive a reply two weeks later which is provisional acceptance, a rejection or an acceptance If a rejection is received, students can either cancel their application altogether or complete an application for an alternative course and send to the administration office

A provisional acceptance means that more documentation is required Applicants in this situation should complete the additional documentation and submit them to the office When an acceptance is received, the applicant should complete the enrolment form and select which subjects he or she wishes to undertake and register with the dean When all this is complete, the applicant may enter university

(194 words)

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The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in UK between 1971 and 2001.

Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

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The pie charts show changes in UK spending patterns between 1971 and 30 years later, 2001

As an overall trend, increased amounts of money spent on cars, computers and eating out were made up for by drops in expenditure on food and books

In detail, food and car made up the two biggest item of expenditure in both years Together they comprised over half of household spending in the UK Food accounted for 44% of spending in 1971, but this dropped by two thirds to 14% in 2001 However, the outlay on cars doubled, rising from 22% in 1971 to 43%

in 2001

Other areas changed significantly Spending on eating out doubled, climbing from 7% to 14% The proportion of salary spent on computers increased dramatically, up from 2% in 1971 to 12% in 2001 However, as computer expenditure rose, the percentage of outlay on books plunged from 6% to 1%.(151 words)

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The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in UK in 2002.

Proportion of people from each household type living in poverty

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The pie chart examines the different type of families who were living in poor conditions in UK in the year 2002

As an overall trend, 14% of the entire households in UK at that time were in conditions of poverty In general, single people struggled more than couples

In particular, as far as people with children are concerned, sole parents showed the highest percentage of 26% among all the given categories while coupleswith children accounted for a relatively smaller percentage of 15%

When it comes to people with no children, single people made up a large percentage of 24%, which is almost the same figure for single people with children

On the other hand, only 9% of the couples without any children suffered from poverty in

2002 In terms of aged people, singles had a slightly higher percentage than couples Only 7% and 5% of the aged population had hardships in their living circumstances

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The bar charts below give information about the railway system in six cities in Europe.

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