• The graph illustrates passenger numbers using the London Underground during the course of the day... MAKING A GENERAL STATEMENT ABOUT THE DATA• The graph shows/illustrates how passeng
Trang 1HOW TO DESCRIBE A CHART,GRAPH OR TABLE
Trang 2OUTLINE PLAN
• INTRODUCTION:
• Topic sentence describing what the data (displayed as a table, graph or
chart) is about
• GENERAL STATEMENT(S) ABOUT THE DATA:
• What overall trends can you see?
• DETAILED STATEMENTS ABOUT THE DATA :
• Focus on the details that are relevant for your essay.
• CONCLUSION:
• one sentence which sums up what this data tells us or why it is
important to you argument
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Trang 4PUTTING TOGETHER YOUR
TOPIC SENTENCE
• HERE ARE SOME EXAMPLES:
The graph shows the fluctuation in the number of
people at a London Underground station over the course of a day.
This graph shows the number of passengers travelling
on the London Underground during the day.
• The graph illustrates passenger numbers using the
London Underground during the course of the day
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Trang 6MAKING A GENERAL STATEMENT ABOUT THE DATA
• The graph shows/illustrates how passenger
numbers grow/increase/climb/rise during rush hour.
• The graph shows/illustrates how passenger numbers
fall/decrease/drop/decline/dip when rush hour has ended.
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• GOING INTO DETAIL—You need to describe in detail
particular aspects of the data that prove the point that you are trying to make in the essay
• To do this you can use a verb and an adverb e.g Sales
rose sharply.
• Or an adjective and a noun This is normally used with
There is/are ……
• There was/were…
• There has been / have been…
• e.g There was a sharp rise in sales.
• (Using an adjective and a noun is slightly more formal.)
Trang 8DESCRIBING UP TRENDS USING NOUNS
rise increase recovery growth
The graph/chart shows a (adjective + noun)…in passenger numbers during……
There is/was a (adjective+noun)…in passenger numbers during………
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rapidly quickly swiftly slowly steadily immediately
Trang 10WHICH TENSE SHOULD I USE?
has/have risen has/have
increased has/have recovered has/have gone up has/have grown
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Passenger numbers rose considerably between 6am and 8 am with a rise of travellers from 100 to 400
The number of underground travellers increases significantly between the hours
of 6 and 8 am peaking at 400 passengers
Remember to be consistent with your use of tenses!
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NOUNS AND ADJECTIVES
fall decrease decline dropping off
The graph/chart shows a (adjective + noun)…in passenger numbers during……
There is/was a (adjective+noun)…in passenger numbers during………
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rapidly quickly swiftly slowly steadily immediately
Trang 14WHICH TENSE SHOULD I USE?
level off/levels off
drop off/drops off
fell decreased declined went down levelled off dropped off
has/have fallen has/have decreased has/have declined has/have gone down
has/have levelled off has/have dropped off
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The number of passengers decreased consistently after 8 am from 400
passengers down to 200 by 10 am
Passenger numbers drop off steadily after 8 am to reach 200 by 10 am
Remember to be consistent with your use of tenses!
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Trang 17MORE VERBS AND NOUNS
Trang 18WHICH TENSE SHOULD I USE
fluctuated peaked
have/has flattened out have/has stabilised have/has levelled off have/has held steady have/has remained stable
have/has not changed have/has continued to
be stable have/has fluctuated have/has peaked
Trang 19DESCRIBING OTHER TRENDS
Passenger numbers peak at 8 am reaching 400 and again later in the
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Passenger numbers flatten out between the hours of 12 and 2 pm where they remain at 300
Passenger numbers stabilised from 12pm to 2 pm where they remained at 300
Remember to be consistent with your use of tenses!
Trang 21DESCRIBING OTHER TRENDS
Passenger numbers fluctuate considerably throughout the day recording the biggest fluctuations between rush hour
Passenger numbers fluctuated significantly during the day peaking at 400 and dropping off to 100
Remember to be consistent with your use of tenses!
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SUMMING UP/CONCLUDING
· In summary we can see that
· To sum up
· In conclusion it can be seen that….
· It can be concluded from the data/information that…
· Overall the data shows/indicates/suggests…
· Summarising the findings it can be seen that
· Overall it appears that
Trang 23YOUR CONCLUSION
In summary we can see that the busiest times on the London Underground are at 8 am and at 6 pm The quietest times are 6 am, 4 pm and after 8 pm Passenger numbers remain quite steady during the day
Remember to be consistent with your use of tenses!
Trang 24Making Comparisons
Trang 25In IELTS task 1, you must also compare the data as
you are asked to do in the rubric.
If you just write about what happened to ActiveX,
what happened to Java, and what happened to Net,
without showing any relationship between them, this won’t be enough.
Here are some examples of where comparisons are
made between the products in the IELTS task 1 graph, and the language of comparison is highlighted in
bold / red:
Trang 27Grouping the Data
It is a good idea to divide your answer into
paragraphs so it is well organized To do this, you