7608 descriptive essay writing packet

BEGINNING Subject and Feeling: My closet – I keep favourite things in there MIDDLE I keep my closet neat Describe it: I put my stuff on hooks or on a shelf to keep it tidy 2.. Idea abou

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Weekly Writing Packet 1

_Elementary School

Name: _

Class: _

This week’s assignment:

Step 1: Choose a room

Ideas: bedroom, bathroom, closet, kitchen, living room

Step 2: Prewriting (organize your ideas)

Describe (tell about)

I am going to write about the

_

in my apartment / house

BEGINNING

Subject and Feeling:

My closet – I keep favourite things in there

MIDDLE

I keep my closet neat

Describe it:

I put my stuff on hooks or

on a shelf to keep it tidy

2 Idea about room:

My sports equipment

smells bad (glove, shorts)

Describe it:

Baseball glove smells like grass or dirt

3 Idea about room:

light is bright

Describe it:

My room looks like a sports store because the light is bright

END

Interesting Idea:

I don’t spend time in there

Your turn: Write down your ideas about the room you are describing

What is the room? Write the main idea

MIDDLE

END

Interesting Idea:

Step 3: Write the 1st draft of your essay EXAMPLE:

Step 3: Write the 1st draft of your essay

Title

My Closet

Beginning

My closet is full of sports objects I keep

my favourite things in there.

Middle

I keep my closet neat Everything is on a hook or shelf My sports gear makes my closet smell But it smells like grass and dirt, not sweat My closet light is very bright It makes the closet look like a sports store

Ending

I don’t spend much time in my closet I like to grab something and go

Beginning:

Middle:

End:

****WRITE AT LEAST 10-15 SENTENCES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Step 4: After your teacher marks the first draft, rewrite your essay and correct the mistakes

Teacher Comments: