Exploring concession and contrast In this post we look at the difference between concession and simple contrast, and at the various words and expressions we can use to express concession
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In this post we look at the difference between concession and simple contrast, and at the various words and expressions we can use to express concession and contrast As well as information about these, there are ten exercises to give you plenty of practice
Getting more advanced
while, whilst, whereas
nevertheless, however, even so, all the same
much as
no matter how / what etc
however, whatever, whoever etc
adjective + as / though
but still, but even so, but all the same
(and) yet
Even more exotic
when, if, albeit
may but
Contrastive emphasis with auxiliaries
We'll also look briefly at 'reducing' concession clauses, at fronting concession clauses and at something called Yes, But arguing
Introduction - the difference between contrast and concession
Look at these two sentences
Mary prefers coffee, but Peter prefers tea
Although Mary usually prefers coffee, today she's drinking tea
The second sentence is an example of concession, when something unexpected
happens - Mary's drinking tea today - even though we have conceded something else - that is to admit that something else is true - that Mary usually prefers coffee
Note - with simple contrast, we are usually comparing a similar aspect of two different
people, things or situations With concession, we are often contrasting two different aspects of the same person, thing or situation
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Whether something expresses concession or contrast is open to interpretation, so the answers in this first exercise reflect my ideas, not necessarily some golden rule
Simple Contrast
Concession
1 Sally is blonde, but her sister is brunette
2 Although Sally originally wanted to become a lawyer,
she finally decided on a career in medicine
3 This plan is fraught with problems Nevertheless, I think
we should go ahead with it
4 Mark's idea would be quite expensive Sandy's,
however, sounds relatively cheap
5 In spite of the crisis, this sector of the economy has
been doing quite well
6 The South of England is relatively flat The North, on the
other hand, is much hillier
7 He's not the greatest conversationalist Mind you, he is
rather good-looking
8 In Geneva, most people speak French, whereas in Zurich
they mainly speak German
9 Recent sales have been disappointing However, this
month is looking rather better
10 Much as I trust your judgement, this time In think we'll
do it my way
Contrast clause or concession clause (aka Concessive clause)? A short note
Look at these two example sentences adapted from a grammar book:
Although everyone was tired, they kept going until it got dark
(= concession - their action is slightly surprising given their tiredness)
Although they accepted some of his recommendations, they rejected others (= contrast - between accepting some recommendation and rejecting others)
Some books for learners would call the first clause in both of these sentences
concession clauses Others would call them both contrast clauses This particular book calls the first one a concession clause and the second a contrast clause, but not many books make that distinction
There is not a big difference between contrast and concession, and a lot of the
examples we'll be looking at express both concession and contrast to varying degrees It's an area where even linguists have problems: in one academic paper, the writer calls concession a 'fuzzy' (not clear, confused) concept, so it's not worth getting too worried about the difference
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1a Expressing concession with although, though, even though
The usual way of talking about concession is to have a clause starting with although,
though and even though, which are are (subordinating) conjunctions (sometimes called
subordinators) The concession clause can come before or after the main clause
Although Mary usually prefers coffee, today she's drinking tea
Mary's drinking tea today although she usually prefers coffee
Although and though are synonymous, but although is probably more common in
writing while though is thought to be more informal
Although/though it had started to rain, we decided to go for a walk
He said he'd be on time although/though I doubt it, knowing him
Even though is stronger and more emphatic than though and although, and is usually
stressed when speaking
Even though I knew I shouldn't, I had another of her delicious cakes
They were late even though they had taken a taxi
Sometimes it only makes sense to use although etc with only one part of the sentence
It must make sense for the main clause to logically follow on from the concession clause:
Although I was rather tired, I decided to stay up to see the late movie
I was rather tired, although I decided to stay up to see the late movie
But sometimes you have a choice, depending on your point of view:
Although the film was a bit long, it was quite enjoyable
Although the film was quite enjoyable, it was a bit long
Though as an adverb
Note that we can also use though (but not although and even though) as an adverb, to
mean 'however' In this use it can also come at the end of the sentence
That's what she says, but what she really thinks, though, I have no idea
We'd better be going - We've still got plenty of time, though
Exercise 1a Complete the sentences
Use although + a sentence from the box, as in the example
we don't know them very well we'd never met before
there was a light on upstairs I really like her
we live in the country she never went to university
we took a taxi
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1 , he sounds really interesting
2
, life is never dull
3 Nobody seemed to be at home
, she can be a bit distant sometimes
1b Expressing concession with despite, in spite of
These have a similar meaning to although and also express concession But they are prepositions, so they can be only be followed by:
a noun or noun phrase
In spite of the bad weather, we had a great time
a pronoun
Everything seemed to go wrong, but we had a really good time in spite of it all
an -ing form (gerund) or gerund phrase -
Despite telling him three times, he still forgot
If we want to follow them with a full clause (that's to say, subject + verb), we need to add 'the fact that',
the fact that + clause
In spite of the fact that she was pregnant, she kept working till the last
moment
Despite the fact that it was raining, we went for a walk anyway
But this is rather formal and long-winded, and it's usually better to
use although instead:
Although she was pregnant, she kept working till the last moment
Although it was raining, we went for a walk anyway
There is no difference in meaning between despite and in spite of, but some people prefer to usedespite in writing, probably because it is shorter This Ngram graph shows how the use of despite is increasing in popularity in books, both British and American:
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Click on your preferred option to underline it
1 Although / Despite the rain, it was a great afternoon
2 We had a great time though / in spite of it rained a bit
3 She passed her test easily although / despite not doing much revision
4 Although / Despite the salary wasn't great, she took the job
5 Although / Despite coming first, she felt she could have done better
6 Although / In spite of coming first isn't everything, it sure helps
7 I managed to get tickets although / despite the queue was rather long
8 I didn't manage to get very good seats although / , though
Exercise 1c - Convert from although to despite
Rewrite the sections in italics using despite and an -ing form
, he didn't play a strong role in the company
2 She always seemed to be short of cash, although she had plenty of money in the
bank
She always seemed to be short of cash,
, he didn't often come up with any useful ideas
Rewrite the sections in italics using despite and his/her/its + noun
, she was quite shy
5 We're going to buy this anyway, although it is expensive
We're going to buy this anyway,
, he never did
Section 2 - more advanced
2a While, (whilst) and whereas
The conjunction while is not only used to talk about time
As a conjunction, while is usually used to talk about a time relationship between two events:
He washed up the dishes while she put the children to bed
While he was washing up the dishes, the front doorbell rang
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1 It can be used to express a contrast, especially when comparing the same aspect
of two different people, things or situations, etc The while-clause can come first
or second, but most commonly seems to appear second
Italy is in the south of Europe, while Sweden is in the north
While Sally has blue eyes, her sister has brown ones
2 We can also use while to express concession, when it can usually be replaced
by although In this meaning the while-clause always comes first (See note at end)
While I understand your point of view, I'm afraid I have to disagree with you
While results have been pretty good so far, we shouldn't get too complacent
Note - We need to make sure when using while for contrast or concession that there isn't any confusion with the time meaning:
While Peterson scored the first two goals, the third was headed in by
Whereas
To some extent whereas has a similar meaning to while, but is a bit more formal and
is more common in written texts However, its use is more restricted than that
of while, in that it must always express a direct contrast between two situations Although we can put the whereas / while-clause first or second in this meaning, in the vast majority of examples I've found it comes second (see note at end), when it means something like but or 'when on the other hand'
I believe in the Loch Ness monster, whereas / while my brother doesn't
Whereas / While she likes jazz, I prefer opera
He is quite tall, while / whereas his brother is rather short
Although whereas is always used to express a direct contrast between two
situations, sometimes this contrast can be surprising or unexpected in the context, in which case whereas can also be said to have a concessive function In these cases the whereas-clause usually comes first
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Whereas (While) more than ninety percent of British children go to state
schools, a recent study has shown that as many as 50% of the top jobs in the country are held by people who were educated at elite 'independent' (i.e private) schools
Whereas (While) most of the party's MPs support the government on this
issue, a small handful are determined to vote against the party line
Whereas (While) sales have been excellent for most of the summer, for some
reason we're not sure about, they declined in August
Whereas (While) most patients recover from this illness fairly quickly, a few
develop complications, which can cause the illness to linger
Comparing although, while and whereas
On the other, it can refer to simple contrast with very little idea of concession:
Although I get on well with Peter, I don't like his brother very much
2 While
Although while is usually used for simple contrast, we can often also use it in a very similar way toalthough When used with a concessive meaning like this, it should express some sort of contrast, but that contrast can be very soft, and not necessarily comparing two similar things
While/Although we've only known each other a short time, we get on really well
Brian Garner, in Garner's Modern American Usage, calls while 'a more relaxed and conversational term than although or whereas'
3 Whereas
Whereas is the most restricted of the three, used to express a strong contrast
between two people, things or situations It can only be used to express concession when this strong contrast also exists:
Whereas / While I've only known Mark for a short time, I've known his
brother for much longer
In this sentence, we are directly comparing two similar situations (how long I've known Mark compared with how long I've known his brother), so whereas is
possible There is a slight element of concession in that you might possibly expect me
to have known his brother for much the same time as I've known him
While / Whereas we've only known each other a short time, we get on really well
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4 Summary
although - mainly used for concession, with some overlap into contrast
whereas - mainly for strong contrast, with some overlap into concession
while - can usually be used for both concession and contrast
although
whereas while
There isn't a lot of information available about the exact differences in the use
of although, while andwhereas, so the answers in this exercise reflects my own interpretation of the differences between them You can read my comments after you've done the exercise
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answers are possible, so try and decide which the sentence expresses more strongly - concession (although / while), or contrast (whereas / while)
1 I see what you're getting at, I don't necessarily agree with you
8 in the past this type of information was only available to a few, now it is
available to anyone with an internet connection
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Tip
Both while and whereas would be good words to work into your written work (whereas is in the Academic Word List, for example) But until you get really familiar with it, I'd reserve whereas for pure contrast, and put the whereas-clause second
3 Even though and even if
As we've seen, even though is a stronger version of although and means despite the
fact that Even if, however, introduces a condition, and is more like whether or not
Even though he's busy, I think you should ask him
= Despite the fact that he's busy,
I know that he's busy - we know that the information in the concessive clause is true
Even if he's busy, I think you should ask him
= Whether or not he's busy,
I don't know for sure whether he's busy or not - the information in the concessive clause may be true, but we don't know for certain
Click on your preferred option to underline it
1 She stayed out late even though / even if I told her to be back early
2 Even though / Even if they win, they can't get through the next round
3 He agreed to meet them even though / even if he knew that it was pointless
4 I really enjoyed the film, even though / even if I don't usually like Westerns
5 It's worth going for the interview, even though / even if they turn you down
6 We're going for a walk later even though / even if it doesn't clear up
7 Even though / Even if we've met a few times, I don't know him very well
8 Even though / Even if we did turn up a bit late, it wouldn't really matter
4 Other ways of introducing an unexpected contrast
4a Conjunctive adverbs and adverbials
We can also express contrast and concession with adverbs and adverbial
expressions In writing, these adverbs and adverbial expressions usually start a new sentence, or follow a semicolon or dash ( - ), and are themselves followed by a comma
Contrast
My wife likes the mornings best I, however, prefer the evenings
on the other hand
The West coast is quite wet On the other hand, it is also quite warm
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The West coast is quite wet In contrast, the east coast is much drier
In contrast to the east coast, the west coast in quite wet
Concession
nevertheless, nonetheless (more formal)
We'd seen the film before Nevertheless, my wife wanted to watch it again
I'd rather have watched the football - however, I agreed to watch the film
even so
It was a quite good film Even so, I'd have preferred to watch the football
all the same
I quite enjoyed it; all the same, I prefer something a bit more lively
We can also put however and nevertheless at the end of the second sentence or clause
My wife likes the mornings best I prefer the evenings, however
We'd seen the film before My wife wanted to watch it again, nevertheless
Tip
Advanced foreign learners no doubt already use however and on the other hand, but
if you don't already do so, now would be a good time to add nevertheless and in
contrast to your armoury They are especially useful in academic writing
4b Much as + subj + verb
We can use much as, to mean even though, with verbs like love, hate etc
Much as I like her, this is going too far
(even though I like her)
OK, I'll do the washing up, much as I detest it!
(even though I detest it)
See also the section on as as
4c It doesn't matter / no matter how /what etc
We can use it doesn't matter how/what etc, or no matter how/what etc, instead
of even though
It didn't matter how hard he tried, he just couldn't do it
No matter how hard he tried, he just couldn't do it
(Even though he tried very hard)
4d however, whatever, whichever
We can also use however, whatever etc in a similar way to no matter how/what etc
however + adjective
However tired she was, she always managed to cook a meal
however + adverb
He just couldn't manage, however hard he tried
however much / many
I'm not changing my mind, however much you ask me
However many times you ask me, the answer will still be no!