Writing Strategies TOPIC SENTENCES — © In some types of composition — especially articles and discursive essays — it is a good idea to begin each paragraph of the main body with a topi
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reading for gist/specific information
What a Character! detailed understanding reading for specific information/
recognition of style & type of writing
an article describing a favourite TV
adjectives
error correction
UNIT 4 p 20 | © reading for specific information © description of senses/crowds/activity | © adjectives
From All Four © reading for gist © an article describing a town/city © relative clauses
Corners of the World
UNIT 5 p 24 | © reading for specific information ‘© description of location © the passive
Four Walls and a
Roof reading for gist reconstructing a text ° an article describing a famous
building
UNIT 6 p 28
ATime to Celebrate reading for specific information
reconstructing a text an article describing a celebration formation of adjectives adjectives with -ing/-ed
UNIT 7 p 32 | © reading for specific information/ * description of emotions * tenses: past simple, past
So the Story Goes detailed understanding ® a first-person narrative continuous, past perfect
* reconstructing a text * linking words/phrases
UNIT 8 p.36 | © reading for gist/specific information | ® description of weather/atmosphere ® adjectives/adverbs
UNIT 9 p.40 | * reading for gist/specific information | ® techniques for beginnings/endings | * linking words/phrases
Pros and Cons matching topics to paragraphs © a ‘for-and-against’ article
UNIT 10 p 44 | © reading for specific information * techniques for beginnings/endings | ® linking words/phrases
A Matter of Opinion | © reconstructing a text © an article giving the writer's opinion
UNIT 11 p 48 | © reading for gist/specific information/ | ® techniques for beginning reports © the passive
Front Page News detailed understanding
recognition of style & type of writing a news report direct/reported speech
relative clauses
UNIT 12 p.52 | © reading for detailed understanding | formal & informal style + linking words/phrases
Making a matching topics to paragraphs © an assessment report © the passive
Judgement About © formal/informal language
UNIT 13 p.56 | © reading for specific information * techniques for beginning & ending | ® tenses for past/recent/ Drop Me a Line ° matching texts to visual prompts a letter
a letter telling a friend one’s news current events, plans
formal/informal language
UNIT 14 p 60 | © reading for specific information © a letter of invitation to a friend © error correction
We'd Love It matching topics to paragraphs * a letter accepting/refusing an
If You invitation from a relative
UNIT 15 p 64 | © reading for detailed understanding | * making suggestions ® advice/suggestion —
Trouble Shared matching topics to paragraphs
UNIT 16 p 68 | © reading for specific information '® formal & informal style © linking words/phrases
Expectations © recognition of style & type of writing | © a formal letter of complaint
UNIT 17 p 72 | © reading for detailed understanding | ¢ formal & informal style © -ing form, to + infinitive
© prepositions
UNIT 18 p 76 | © reading for specific information '® formal & informal style © direct/indirect questions
With Reference matching text to notes * a formal transactional letter © error correction
Tow requesting information
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TYPES OF COMPOSITION
When you write a composition or essay, you are often
asked to write your answer in the form of an article, a
report, a letter, etc
ARTICLES are found in magazines and newspapers (e.g
school newspaper, magazine for young children, etc) All
of the following may be written in the form of an article:
© Descriptive compositions about people, places,
objects, etc
© Narrative descriptions or stories about real or
imaginary events which happened in the past
* Discursive essays, about arguments concerning
particular subjects, which include:
- opinion essays, giving your personal opinion, and
- for-and-against essays, giving the opposing
arguments for both sides (e.g pros v cons)
REPORTS are similar to articles but have a more formal,
factual style, and each kind has its own special format
and features Compositions in the form of reports include:
© News reports about recent events (e.g accidents,
earthquakes, etc), such as those found in newspapers
© Assessment reports discussing the suitability of a
person, a place, a proposed plan, etc
© Reviews discussing a film, book, restaurant, etc and
giving your opinion/recommendation
LETTERS are written to a specific person/group (e.g your
parents, the Town Council, etc) for a specific reason (e.g
to make a complaint, to apply for a job, etc) Compositions
in this form include:
© Friendly letters to people we know, usually about
personal matters, in informal style
¢ Formal letters to officials/managers/etc, about
official/business matters, in formal style
© Postcards to friends or relatives
There are several other kinds of informative writing, each
with its own format and features (You are not often asked
to write compositions in these forms.) They include:
® Instructions on how to make, use or do something
(e.g bake a cake, operate a washing machine, etc)
Leaflets giving information, advice, etc
Public notices, warnings, etc
Advertisements and announcements
Memos, notes and other short messages
O The greatest thing |
to take shelter inside /
Read extracts A-D and decide which is from:
was a cold winter night and | was sitting in the living
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and for being one of the major fashion capitals of the world - ị
[a J@ !n conclusion, |
| believe that computers |
Play a very important
eg Ole in education, They
and decide which is from:
@ Robin Hood, Prince of Thieves isa/
wonderful film The stars great
performances, the fantastic music and
the beautiful scenery will make an impress >. impression on you! definitely
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From: Mrs Janice Freud, Administrative Assistant‘
Subject: Classroom Facilities at Mereton College
The purpose of this report is to assess the class- ,
room facilities existing at present at Mereton College
New York is a Fascinating |
is from: city Ím having such a:
Wonderful time here that 1)
apostcard ass love, Emil
@ Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the position of chef
advertised in the Lambert Daily of 24th June
by ng ae At present I am employed at Joe's
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preparation of desserts ¬
@ Dear Viele Ray,
—Thave a problem and | need your advice
I've decided to stvdy music, and my parents don't
approve I've been trying to convince them, but wv know
how old-fashioned they are! They think that I'll never
make enough money as a musician
Writing Strategies
4 Read extracts K-N @®e Beat the eggs well /
is from: a little milk
-_£00k for five minutes
————
a public notice
an advertisement
@ Safety Rules for a Burglar-Free Home
© Make sure you lock all doors before you leave the house
© Check that all windows are securely closed
FLATMATE
For a two-bedroom flat
£40 a week (bills not included) Call Sue,
“You are planning to spend a few months at a language school in Britain .", etc) This may suggest who/what you are, what has happened, why you are writing, etc The instructions also suggest the imaginary reader of what you write This may be a specific person (e.g the manager of the hotel where you recently stayed), or a general type of person (e.g the readers of a fashion magazine for teenagers) A composition should be written in a style which suits the particular reader
® You will often be told to include a number of specific topics in your answer (e.g “Describe what happened and say how you felt .”, “Describe the building and its facilities, and comment on its good and bad points .”)
KEY WORDS
The key words in the instructions are those which tell you about the type of writing, the situation, the reader
| and the specific topics It is very useful to underline the
| key words, and make a list of the specific topics
| e.g A travel magazine has asked you to write an article about an unusual holiday destination, mentioning how to get there and what young people can see and do there Write your article in 120-180 words
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Writing Strategies
5 Read the rubric and underline the key words,
then answer the questions
magazine you read regularly, and you have decided
| This announcement recently appeared in “Waves”, a
to enter the competition
| Write your article for the competition in 100 - 150
words
1 What type of composition is this?
2 Which of these statements are true?
A You know the reader(s) personally
B The readers of Waves magazine are probably very similar to you in age and interests
C You should write in a very formal, impersonal style
D Your composition may include facts, description and your own feelings
E Your composition must include all of the specific topics mentioned in the instructions
F You should write about a famous person you have met in real life
3 Who should you not describe, and why?
PLANNING YOUR COMPOSITION
© List the specific topics mentioned in the composition
instructions
¢ “Brainstorm” for ideas — i.e write down any ideas,
words/phrases, etc you can think of which are related to
the general subject
® Choose which of these you will use, and group them into
main topics Check that these include all of the specific
topics you have listed — you may include more topics,
but you must not leave out any of the specific topics
© Choose suitable topics for the introduction and the
conclusion (see “Composition Layout”)
6 a) Look at the rubric in Ex 5 again Find the
specific topics mentioned in the instructions, and write them as headings below
1 Appearance
b) List these words/phrases under the correc
headings above
generous well-built casual clothes
The introduction is a short paragraph in which we
| * Instructions, notices, messages, etc do not always follow
this paragraph layout.
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7 a) Which of these topics would be most
suitable for the introduction to a descriptive
article about a famous sportsman?
the history of the sport which this person plays
who the person is and why he is famous
whether sportsmen should be paid so much
b) Which of these topics would be most suitable
for the conclusion to the same article?
the sportsman’s childhood and early career
other famous people — actors, politicians, etc
what the writer and other people feel about him
a) Read the article and label the paragraphs with these headings
writer’s/people’s feelings about him
® name, why famous ® appearance
b) Read the article again and answer the
questions
Who is the article about, and why is he famous?
2 What examples does the writer give to support the statement that Jordan “looks like a star”?
What does the writer say about Jordan’s personality?
What examples are given to support this opinion?
If you are a sports fan, you are sure to |
know the name Michael Jordan, because
he is probably the greatest basketball
player the world has ever seen Although
his career as a player is over, his fame
| will live on for many years to come
Michael Jordan certainly looks like a
star He is tall, well-built and handsome,
with friendly brown eyes and a wide grin
He always manages to look well-
dressed, whether he is wearing the
casual clothes he prefers, or smart suits
His personality, too, is as outstanding |
as his playing ability Michael is a very
determined person, which was one of
the reasons he was such a successful
basketball star He is also very generous,
and has given lots of money and support
In his free time, Michael is a man who |
prefers simple pleasures One of his
favourite pastimes is playing golf with his
friends He also likes baseball and ten-
pin bowling He enjoys cooking, too, and
he often prepares delicious meals for his
[Allin all, | admire Michael Jordan not |
only because he was a great athlete, but
also because he is such a warm, caring
Para 2
Para 5 Hero!
person Is it any wonder that so many
| just like him?
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Writing Strategies
TOPIC SENTENCES —
© In some types of composition — especially articles and
discursive essays — it is a good idea to begin each
paragraph of the main body with a topic sentence
This is a sentence which introduces or summarises the
main topic of the paragraph, to give readers an idea of
what they are going to read
® This is followed by supporting sentences which give
examples, details, etc to develop and support the topic
sentence
different things in his spare time sentence
He loves swimming and spends
hours at the pool He also likes supporting
collecting old cinema posters _— sentences and watching films on video
9 — Read the paragraph below and underline the
topic sentence What is the main topic of the paragraph? Which sentence is not relevant to the main topic?
There are so many exciting things to do here! For `
example, yesterday | took my first scuba-diving lesson
The food is delicious, too | am going water-skiing this”
afternoon, and I've been invited to a birthday party on
Saturday night! is
10 a) Read the main body of the article in Ex 8
again, and underline the topic sentence in each paragraph
b) Which sentences below could replace the topic
sentences in the article, and which are not
relevant to the main topic of the paragraph?
Paragraph 2
A Michael Jordan is a hero, not only to me but to
everyone who enjoys basketball
B Michael Jordan’s appearance is naturally part of
his image as a celebrity
Paragraph 3
A Michael has excellent personal qualities to match
his looks and sporting talents
B Michael set more records in his basketball career
than any other player in the game
Paragraph 4
A Leaving professional basketball has given him
more free time for his many other interests
B Michael is not as good at other sports as he was at
basketball
11 Read the paragraphs and choose the best topic
sentence What type of composition is each paragraph taken from?
A Public transport is the best way for people to get
to work / 1
B There are several good reasons for using public
transport rather than cars
C Public transport is not as comfortable as cars
First of all, public transport produces less pollution | than cars, so it is better for the environment Secondly, it is cheaper to use public transport than |
to buy a car and then pay for petrol, insurance and _ maintenance Public transport is also safer, as the
drivers are more experienced than most motorists
A I'll always remember my grandparents’ garden
B My grandparents had the prettiest house in the | neighbourhood
a big old tree with a swing and all around the lawn | there were beautiful rose bushes |
12 Read mẹ paragraphs and suggest a suitable
topic sentence for each What type of
composition is each paragraph taken from?
to look well-dressed, whether he is wearing an |
also offers the chance to get to know different | cultures and customs What is more, it provides an | opportunity to meet people from different backgrounds |
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| There are some writing techniques which we can use to
| make the beginning and ending of a composition more
interesting to the reader For example, to begin or end an
article, we can:
a address the reader directly — i.e we write as if we
were speaking to the reader, using the word “you”
e.g You all know how important friends are
b_ use direct speech to give somebody's exact words,
or a quotation from a famous writer, celebrity, etc In
both cases we have to use quotation marks
e.g “Always look on the bright side of life,” my friend
Maggie used to tell me
c© ask a rhetorical question — i.e a question which
does not expect an answer
e.g What would life be like without friends?
which techniques from the theory box
above have been used
1 Have you ever met someone who ch langed the ‘
[a] way you looked at the world around you? Well, |
ia ie That person was my history teacher, mr nes,
2 In conclusion, | feel very fortunate to have met
Mrs Daniels | am sure that you would also feel
3 “Don't worry - tomorrow is another day,” Sue
Oo tells me whenever I'm upset She's always there
for me, in good times and bad, because she's
a real friend After all, that’s what friends are
for, isn’t it? Sie
4 which is more important in life - money or `
Oo friendship? Would you want to be rich if this <
meant that you had no real friends? “Friends ¿
U are worth more than‘ gold,” my grandmother ‹
often used to say, and | believe that she was <
b) Read the first and last paragraphs of the
article in Ex 8 again, and say which of the
techniques above have been used
Writing Strategies
| © We do not use the same sort of writing style for every composition There is a variety of styles we can use (e.g formal or informal, personal or impersonal, descriptive or factual), and we must choose the most appropriate style for each writing task
The appropriate style for a composition depends on the type of composition, the situation suggested in the rubric, and who the imaginary reader is For instance, a letter telling a friend our news should be
‘chatty’ (i.e informal, personal and descriptive), while
a letter of application to the manager of a company
| should be formal, factual and polite
| © The two main kinds of writing style are formal and informal, which usually include other features such as impersonal, factual, etc The main characteristics are shown below (Remember that we may combine these features in slightly different ways for each situation and imaginary reader.)
- Frequent use of the passive
| - Little or no description of emotions
Factual
- Facts and statistics; ‘neutral’ description e.g The building, completed in 1871, is quite large and much taller than the other houses in the square
| - Simple linking words/phrases (and, but, so, because,
etc); shorter sentences
Personal
- First person (I/we); addressing the reader directly
| - Frequent description/discussion of emotions
+ - Variety of adjectives/adverbs/etc for vivid description
e.g This beautiful, enormous old building dates back to Victorian times Its red brick front towers over the tiny square
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an extension to Baines High School be accepted The
existing buildings are not sufficient for the number of
pupils and extra classrooms are therefore required
2 The'silent city’ of Mdina is as beautiful as it is historic
Visitors can admire the lovely ancient buildings and
enjoy wandering through the narrow, winding streets
3 Furthermore, | was extremely disappointed with the
standard of the maid service The sheets were worn
and old and the towels looked grey instead of white |
must say | had expected more from a three-star hotel
4 We had a lovely time by the lake The weather was
super and it didn’t rain once Jack enjoyed himself
fishing, of course, and | caught up on some reading
very formal, impersonal, factual informal, friendly, ‘chatty’
quite formal, descriptive formal, polite, personal
b) Now, match the short extracts above to these types of composition
a letter to a friend, telling him/her the writer's news
an article in a travel magazine
a letter of complaint to the manager of a hotel
an assessment report on a proposed plan
15 a) Read the rubric and underline the key
words, then answer the questions
Your teacher has asked you to write a composition
discussing this statement: “Borrowing and lending
can destroy friendships.” Write your composition,
giving your personal opinion (120-180 words)
1 What type of composition is this?
2 Whois the imaginary reader of the composition?
3 What style would be most suitable?
A quite formal, impersonal
B very informal, personal, ‘chatty’
4 Which of these extracts is not in the appropriate style?
What features are not appropriate?
A You shouldn't lend things to your friends, because
maybe you won't get them back | lent a friend £10 once and he took ages to pay me back That doesn't help a friendship, I'm sure you'll agree
B However, it would not be wise to lend a friend
expensive items, since if these items were lost or damaged, the friendship would also be damaged
LINKING WORDS/PHRASES
Linking words and phrases can make our writing more interesting by joining short, simple sentences into one longer sentence It can also make our writing easier
‘to understand, by showing how the ideas or events in two sentences/paragraphs are related
Some linking words can join two short sentences into
one longer sentence
e.g My dog’s name is Blackie | love him a lot
My dog’s name is Blackie and | love him a lot
He learns quickly He’s a clever dog
He learns quickly because he’s a clever dog Words/phrases of this sort include:
and, but, so, because, since, etc
© Some linking words/phrases show how the ideas or events in two sentences are related, but they don’t
join the sentences into one longer sentence
e.g The food in the new restaurant is delicious The service is quick and very friendly
The food in the new restaurant is delicious In
addition, the service is quick and very friendly Words/phrases of this sort include:
result, On the other hand, etc
® In the same way, we can use linking words/phrases
to show how two paragraphs are related.:
rooms and we've finished unpacking } been done our things We've also planted some
lovely flowers in the front garden
However, there are a few things
we still need to do We haven't put the curtains up yet, and we haven't What hasn't
Linking words/phrases can be used to:
- show time (when, whenever, before, until, while, as soon as, etc)
- list points or show sequence (First{ly], First of all,
To start with, Secondly, Next, then, Afterwards, After this/that, Finally, Last[ly], etc)
- add more points (and, also, too, Moreover, What is more, In addition, Furthermore, etc)
| | - show cause/effect (because, as, so, Therefore, etc)
- give examples (such as, especially, For example, For instance, etc)
- show contrast (although, but, However, On the other hand, etc)
- introduce a conclusion (Finally, Lastly, All in all, In conclusion, To sum up, etc)
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example
1 He called the police when/ther- he realised that a
burglar had broken into his neighbour's house
2 Travelling by train is usually cheaper than driving
However/In addition, it is more relaxing
3 Helen didn't go to the Chinese restaurant with us,
but/because she doesn't like Chinese food
4 | love the work of artists such as/for example Van
Gogh and Matisse
5 Kim never eats healthy food, but/so she always looks
fit and well
secondly, finally,
first of all,
such as, and
Exercising regularly offers many
itimproves your body's ‘ability to
, exercise reduces stress levels and makes you feel happier
1 Not everyone enjoys travelling by plane It is one of
the safest means of travel (although/As a result)
2 It was beginning to get dark We turned on the light
(so/Furthermore)
3 Cars are convenient for getting around They harm the
5 Gary likes classical music His brother likes rock
up to his own image as a sucessfull 4
star Elvis was the bigger teenage 5
years hidding from the outside world 10
in “Graceland”, his enormous home in Memphis, Tennessee
i Read the instructions and underline the key words
Identify the type of writing (e.g for-and-against article, narrative story, etc), the situation and imaginary reader
Decide which style of writing is most suitable, and list the specific topics which the rubric tells you to discuss
2 Brainstorm for any ideas, words/phrases, etc which are related to the general subject Choose which ideas you will use and group these into main topics Check that these include the specific topics given in the rubric
'3 Plan the layout of your composition and check that you
'4 Choose suitable topics for the introduction and the
| conclusion, and think of writing techniques to make
| the beginning and ending more interesting
|5 Write your composition in the style which is most
linking words/phrases to join short sentences and to show how your ideas, sentences and paragraphs are related
ls Check your composition carefully and correct any errors of spelling, punctuation, grammar, etc
1
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1 Read the rubric and underline the
key words, then answer the
questions
Your school newspaper has asked you to write an article about an interesting person you know well, describing his/her appearance, personality and hobbies/interests
Write your article for the newspaper in 120-180 words
What type of composition is this?
Who should you not describe, and why?
B afamous person D_ aclose friend
Which specific topics must be included
in your composition? Put a tick (v)
hobbies/interests job/career appearance daily routine
Which topics/points could you include in
the introduction and conclusion? Put I
(introduction), C (conclusion), or a cross
(x) for points you would probably not
use
the person's name
his/her childhood/early life
feelings/comments about him/her relationship (i.e friend, workmate, etc) when/where/how you met him/her
2 a) Read the article and label
the paragraphs with these
b) Read the topic sentences (A-D) and match them to
the gaps in the article (1-3) One of the sentences does not fit
A His personality is an interesting mixture of contrasts
B_ Max's appearance often makes people think he must be an actor or
a pop star
C_ His appearance and personality make him seem older than he is
D Inhis free time, Max loves excitement and action
c) Which of these writing techniques are used in the introduction and conclusion?
© addressing the reader directly
d) Which person in the pictures (A-C) does the article describe? Which words/phrases make you think so?
An Interesting Neighbour
| first met my friend Max Westlake two years ago]
when he knocked on my door “Hello,” he said warmly “My name is Max, and I've just moved in next door, so I’m your new neighbour.”
GL) He is a handsome, well-dressed young man_ |
in his early twenties Max is quite tall and slim, with hazel eyes and carefully-styled light brown hair He likes wearing expensive clothes such as leather jackets and silk scarves
[2]_]He has a great sense of humour, and | love |
to listen to his amusing stories What's more, he is
a very kind-hearted person who is always ready to help a friend in need On the other hand, though,
he can seem arrogant and conceited sometimes
BL] He enjoys dangerous sports such as | bungee jumping and hang gliding He’s a great dancer, too, and he often goes to clubs and discos | All in all, life is never dull when Max is around ‘|
Who wouldn't be happy to have him for a friend and neighbour?
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3 Read the article again and answer the
What does he look like?
What does he usually wear?
What kind of a person Is he?
What style does the writer use to talk about Max: personal or impersonal?
6 Which tenses does the writer use to
describe Max?
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use the expressions to talk about Max
amusing, centre, early, dangerous, hazel, humour,
kind-hearted, leather
twenties | 4 asense of eyes | 5 the jacket | 6
we normally-start-with the more general features (e.g
height, build, age) and go on to the more specific
ones (e.g eyes, nose, hair, etc)
® As part of a description of somebody’s appearance,
we often describe the clothes they wear
e.g Joe is a tall, well-built man in his twenties He has
got beautiful green eyes, dark brown hair and a
5 Circle the odd word out in each group Can
you think of more words to add?
tall, @lump> of average height, short
thin, muscular, well-built, shoulder-length,
in his/her late thirties, in his/her early teens,
small, teenager, middle-aged
brown, almond-shaped, square, large
big, upturned, hooked, tall, small, straight
blond(e), curly, wavy, short, straight, big
moustache, scar, blouse, beard, dimples,
freckles, mole, glasses
jeans, skirt, T-shirt, cardigan, raincoat,
high-heeled shoes, suit, shorts, tracksuit
Everyday People
6 Fill in the blanks with good, kind or well,
then make sentences as in the example
John is a good-looking man in his early thirties
7 a)Study the examples, then fill in the gaps
using and, who, with or as well as
e Paul has got big blue eyes He’s got dark, curly hair
Paul has got big blue eyes and dark, curly hair
Paul has got big blue eyes as well as dark, curly hair
Paul is a plump boy He has got dark, curly hair
Paul is a plump boy who has got dark, curly hair
A Nancy is a pretty girl in her late teens 1) is tall
B Tom, 1) is in his mid-thirties, is a tall, well-
built man 2) almond-shaped eyes, 3)
b) Rewrite this short description, using the
linking words/phrases above
Jerry is forty years old He is of average height He is muscular He has got big blue eyes He has got short, blond hair He has got a beard He likes wearing casual clothes
the linking words in Ex 7, to describe the
people in the pictures
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® When we describe someone's character/personality,
we should justify our opinions — i.e explain the
reason for our opinion, and/or give examples to show
what we mean
e.g Opinion: Rob is a very patient person
Justification: He is always calm and never loses
his temper
© If we want to talk about somebody's negative qualities,
we use mild language Instead of saying Sue is rude,
it is better to say Sue tends to be rude or Sue can be
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Q Match the adjectives to their justifications
Which are positive? Which are negative? Use
the adjectives to describe members of your family, students in your class etc, as in the
example
My mother is a very energetic woman She likes to
keep active by taking part in various activities, such as
On the other hand, she can be bossy sometimes,
1 cheerful [T8]is nervous about meeting
people, etc [1b] cares only about him/herself
[16] likes to be active all the time
(dl makes people laugh
sociable
hard-working,
shy
[14] is always in a good mood
ambitious —_| [T7] isn’t polite to other people
(1g] hates working hard
[1h] loves meeting people
[1] doesn't mind working long hours (14) thinks he/she is better/more
important than anybody else
10 lazy
11 bossy
12 kind-hearted | [7] tells everyone what to do
13 arrogant [in] gives a lot to other people
[10] gets angry if he/she has to wait
15 generous
for something
10 a) Fill in the gaps with the correct linking
words/phrases from the lists
and — because — For instance
i tdi
is really avery sociable woman
meeting people 3)
an optimistic person 4): : bright side in difficult situations ) a she tends to be a bit bossy sometimes, ©) - she likes telling people what to do
b) Rewrite this short description, using the
linking words/phrases given
who — In addition, — and
On the other hand, — For example, Mrs Richards is a hard-working person She doesn’t mind working long hours She is generous She loves giving her friends presents She can be rather impatient She hates it when shop assistants take a long time to serve her
11 Read the short text and correct the tense/
form of the verbs underlined
first have met Sharon last year, so e.g
| don’t knew her very long However,
we soon become best friends and we always are spending our free time together She is liking the same things
| does, such as music, sports and
books, and we both enjoyed the same
TV shows There was nothing better
than to having someone who you can
to share your interests with, and who will listen to you when you will want to 10 talk about your problems
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When we write a descriptive article about a person, we
can divide it into five paragraphs
¢ In the introduction, we give general information — e.g
who the person is, when/where we met, etc
®In the second paragraph, we describe the person's
appearance (e.g his/her physical appearance, clothes)
© In the third paragraph, we describe his/her personality,
giving examples to justify our opinion
® In the fourth paragraph, we write about the person's
hobbies/interests
® In the conclusion, we make general comments about
12 — Read the rubric, underline the key words,
then read the article and number the
paragraphs Why has the writer used past
tenses? Who is going to read your article?
Your teacher has asked you to write an article for your
class magazine, with the title “A Person I'll Never
Forget.” Write your article describing the person's
appearance, character and hobbies/interests
A Person I’ll Never Forget
[AL ] Dale was full of energy and spent every minute
of his free time outdoors He enjoyed going on long bike
rides or playing football in the streets, and he was very
good at sports Everyone wanted to be in his team, and
they were jealous of me because | was his best friend
Dale was no angel, but he was so bright and
friendly that everybody liked him Although he was often
naughty, breaking school rules and coming late to
lessons, the teachers were never really angry with him
[CL_] | can still remember how he looked that day In
fact, his appearance never changed in all the years |
knew him He was taller than me, with a cheeky grin and
untidy, curly brown hair, and he always wore jeans and
trainers, even for parties and other special occasions
[D[_ ] | met Dale on my very first day at school | was
standing in the playground, feeling afraid and lonely,
when a boy ran past me and shouted, “Hello — my
name's Dale! Come and play!” | accepted his invitation,
and we were soon the best of friends
(EL ] Dale's family moved away a few years ago and |
haven't seen him since, but I'll always remember him
How could | ever forget the boy with the friendly grin
who made my early school years so much fun?
Everyday People
words, then answer the questions to plan your composition in detail
Your favourite magazine is holding a competition for the best article entitled “Friends for Life”, and you have decided to enter Write your article for the competition, describing your best friend's appearance, personality and hobbies/interests
(100 - 150 words)
1 © What type of composition is this?
© Who is going to read your article?
What style will you use?
© What are the specific topics you must include?
2 © Who will you describe? What does he/she look like? What vocabulary can you use to describe his/her appearance?
© How would you describe his/her personality? What examples could you give to justify your description?
© What are his/her hobbies/interests?
3® How many main body paragraphs will there be?
What will each paragraph be about?
What topic sentences will you use?
4 © What topics will you use for the introduction and conclusion?
© What writing techniques will you use to make the beginning and ending more interesting?
5 © What linking words/phrases will you use?
What tenses will you use?
as well as the plan below, to write your
composition following the rubric in Ex 13
Use the texts in Exs 2 and 12 as models
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(120 - 180 words) What type of composition is this?
Who should you not describe, and why?
A acharacter from a comic strip
B the star of your favourite TV series
C a famous person you admire
D acharacter in a book you have read
Which specific topics must you include
in your composition? Put a tick (⁄)
appearance & personality
Critics’ comments about the book feelings/comments about character other books by the same author Which points will you include in the
introduction? Put a tick (V)
the character's name the title of the book & author's name description of other characters you like in the same book
why you decided to read the book background information (e.g where/
who the character is, etc)
below and underline the key words, then
a) Read the article and label the
paragraphs with these headings
° writer's feelings © appearance ® general information © personality
b) Fill in the gaps with linking words/phrases from th
list, as in the example
while - Firstly - also - because - In conclusion - For example c) Which of these writing techniques are used in th introduction and conclusion?
® using direct speech
d) Which character in the pictures (A-C) does the articl describe? Which words/phrases make you think so’
My Favourite Fictional Character
Who hasn't heard of Robinson Crusoe? The main |
character of Daniel Defoe’s novel Robinson Crusoe is a
young sailor who is shipwrecked on a desert island,
| where he spends the next twenty-eight years 4 Robinson Crusoe’s appearance after years on the island shows how difficult his life is His face is rough
and sunbumt from years in the hot sun, 1) while
his fair hair and beard are dirty His ragged clothes are
made from animal skins
Crusoe’s personal qualities help him overcome the — difficulties he faces 2) ., he is imaginative
He finds clever ways to make the things he needs
3) , Me uses coconut shells for
pots ‘and builds a house from wood and stone Crusoe is4) very determined and brave, and never
gives up the struggle to survive He shows his bravery
when he saves a prisoner, Man Friday, from being
killed by savage natives 4
F 5) St , these qualities make Robinson Crusoe my favourite fictional character You should definitely read the book, 6)
you will meet one of the most unusual and most
| popular characters in English literature 4
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questions
Who is Robinson Crusoe?
2 What does he look het why
tkindofamanishe? =
: What examples does the writer give?
4 How does the writer feel about
Robinson Crusoe?
4 Fill in the blanks with the correct word
from the list, then make sentences using the
b) Fill in the gaps in the sentences with
completed adjectives from the list above
1 Obelix is quite
gets very angry when people call him fat
For example, he forgets to go to his own wedding —
three times!
who is determined to marry the man she loves
who believes himself to be a brilliant detective
acts sensibly and doesn’t panic in difficult situations
plans to kill adorable Dalmatian puppies just to make
a fur coat!
7 Crocodile Dundee is very
so he doesn’t easily get annoyed or upset
who makes brilliant plans in a matter of seconds to
save himself from danger
Jealous, punctual, honest, protective, intelligent, naughty
hates stealing and doesn't like telling lies
As a result, he is able to solve the mystery of even the most puzzling crime
3 Snow White's stepmother is her because Snow White is younger and more beautiful than she is
Scully and takes care of her on dangerous missions
instance, he never does what he is told and is always getting into trouble
example, he eats his breakfast at the same time every morning and he is never late for an appointment
A_ Snow White's beauty affects everyone who meets her
B Phileas Fogg is a more complicated character than he initially appears to be
C Don Quixote is a character we can both sympathise with and laugh at
Ì it the
2 Her black hair and clear pale skin make prince — and the seven dwarfs — fall in love with her at
| first sight However, this same beauty is also the cause
| of her stepmother's burning jealousy ee
le is one of life’s dreamers We can understand
le aed to escape from reality at times, which he does
by creating stories in his mind and continuing to believe
in fairy tales On the other hand, we also find ap
amusing, especially when he attacks a windmill 3
believes is a giant | think there's a little of him in all of
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What a Character!
Boa description of a fictional character may
be found in various sorts of writing Read
the extracts and say which is from:
1 aletter to a friend or relative
2 anarticle describing your favourite character
3 a review ofa film you have seen recently
[A|_] Shakespeare in Love is the latest in a long line of
films based on the life and works of the great English
playwright The title role is played by a newcomer,
Joseph Fiennes, who portrays Shakespeare as young
and attractive at the beginning of his famous career
re ee ho re
Thanks so much for your birthday present Once
| started reading it | just couldn’t put it down Estelle is a
really fascinating character, isn’t she? | hated her at first,
because she is so spoilt and so rude to poor Pip, but
when | reached the end of the book | felt sorry for her
C——_
Are you a fan of action movies? | am — and John
Maclean, the main character in three very popular and
thrilling Die Hard films, is my favourite action hero
9 Read the rubric and underline the key
words, then read the topic sentences (A-E)
and the article which follows Match the
topic sentences to the gaps in the article
One of the sentences does not fit
Your teacher has asked you to write an article about
a comic strip figure you consider unique Write your
article, describing his/her appearance and
personality, as well as your feelings/comments about
the character
A Asterix also has rather an unusual personality for a
Gaul
B_ In appearance, Asterix is certainly quite distinctive
In conclusion, it is his combination of bravery and
humour which make him such a unique character
D_ One of my favourite comic strip figures is Asterix the
Goscinny and Uderzo, set in ancient times
when the Romans
ruled the world
Asterix lives in a tiny village in Gaul, as France was called then His village is the only one in Gaul which is not under the control of the Romans [zL] His most striking feature is that, unlike most other Gauls, he is extremely short and thin He has got dark, friendly eyes, a big fat nose and a huge moustache He always wears a black sleeveless shirt,
a pair of red trousers and a winged helmet, the typical costume of the Gauls
[aL] For one thing, he is extremely clever As a result, he always finds ways to trick the Romans However, he can be a very loyal friend and even puts himself in great danger to save a fellow Gaul who has been captured by the Romans What is more, he is good-tempered and usually manages to stay calm even in the most difficult situations
[aL] He sends an important message to us all that freedom is worth fighting for Personally, | hope that
he continues to fight his comic battles for many more
years to come
10 = Read the article again and answer the
questions
When and where is the comic strip set?
What is unusual about the village where Asterix lives? What is unusual about Asterix’s appearance?
According to the writer, what three personal qualities does Asterix have?
What is the result of each of these qualities?
According to the writer, what makes Asterix unique? What is the main topic of each paragraph?
What tenses are used throughout the article?
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series and correct the mistakes underlined
characters he is an ordinary-looking
man at his early forties, of medium
height and quiet slim He has brown
eyes and short brown hairs, and he
usually wears a brown suite He
hasn't got much friends, but he
doesn't seems to mind He likes to
drove his small car and he loves his
teddy bear The most people who
meet him think hes strange, but | 10
believe he’s just shy
WRITING
TIP
When we write an article describing a character from a
book/film/etc, we can divide it into four paragraphs:
® In the introduction we give general information
about the character (e.g who/where the character is,
title of the book/film/etc, his/her part in the story, etc)
Inthe second paragraph we describe the character's
appearance (i.e physical appearance, clothes)
¢ In the third paragraph we describe the character's
personality, giving examples to justify our opinion
© In the conclusion we make comments about the
character and describe our feelings about him/her
We normally use present tenses to describe a fictional
words, then answer the questions
ATV guide has asked readers to submit articles about
popular screen characters Write an article about
your favourite character from a film or TV series,
describing his/her appearance and personality, and
including your feelings/comments about the
character (100 - 150 words)
1 What type of composition is this?
2 Who will read your article?
3 Which style should you use for this reader?
A very formal, factual, impersonal
B_ semi-formal, descriptive, personal
4 What are the specific topics you must include?
5 What tenses will you use?
What a Character!
13 a) Who is this character?
Which film/TV series
does she appear in?
b) Label the notes below
with these headings, then think of appropriate topic
sentences
¢ FBI agent / trained scientist, doctor
© partner, Fox Mulder / investigate ‘paranormal’ events (e.g ghosts, UFOs)
always attractive / well-dressed
© slim / red hair / piercing blue eyes / pale skin work — smart, comfortable clothes (e.g trouser Suits, low-heeled shoes)
© very intelligent / calm, practical
© scientific outlook / find rational explanation for events
¢ intelligent / calm in a crisis / useful, reliable partner
® favourite TV character / combines beauty, brains, bravery
© admire her / determined / won't let anyone stop her
in search for truth c) Use the prompts to talk about Dana
Scully Begin like this:
Dana Scully is one of the main characters in the popular film and TV series, The X-Files
14 Use your answers from Exs 12 and 13,
as well as the picture in the Photo File
Section and the plan below, to write your article about Dana Scully Use the texts in
Exs 2 and 9 as models
3
Conclusion
19
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1 Read the rubric and underline the
key words, then answer the questions
Your teacher has asked you to write articles about the capital city of your country Write your article about the city, describing what visitors can see and do there, as well as writing about the city's restaurants and nightlife (120-180 words)
1 What type of composition is this? Who is
going to read this?
2 What style would you use for this article?
A very formal, factual and impersonal B_ semi-formal, descriptive
3 Which should you not describe, and why?
4 Which topics/points would you include in
your composition? Put a tick (/)
famous sights & tourist attractions what it is like to live in the city name of city, where it is the city’s history, population & climate complete facts about various sights the city’s trains, buses & taxis shopping areas & what to buy there restaurants and clubs
5 What tenses would you use? Why?
2 Read the article and label the
paragraphs with these headings
Anyone lucky enough to visit Lisbon will find ˆ]
plenty to see and do For a start, the magnificent Castle of Saint George is a must The castle, which is built on a hill, offers a fantastic view over the city Directly below is Alfama, the oldest part of Lisbon Visitors can walk along its narrow streets where they can see fish sellers carrying baskets
on their heads In Belém, the city’s port, tourists can visit the Mosteiro dos Jerénimos, a beautiful monastery built in the 16th century Baixa, the busy shopping area of the city, offers a great variety of handmade souvenirs and elegant
area sÍ
Lisbon is a wonderful city If you want to]
experience the beauty and fascination of a great
Mosteiro dos derónimos
3 Read the article again and answer the questions
Which city is described, and where is it situated?
What makes it an interesting city?
Which buildings does the article suggest tourists should visit? Where can visitors go shopping, and what can they buy?
What sorts of entertainment does the article mention?
What recommendation does the writer make?
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article in Ex 2, as in the example, then use
these to talk about Lisbon
Castle of Saint George,
a) Look at the towns/cities on the map and
correct the statements below
Brisbane is situated on the west coast of Australia
Brisbane isn’t situated on the west coast of Australia
It is situated on the east coast of Australia
Sydney is in the heart of Australia
Melbourne is located in the north of Australia
Perth is located in the centre of Australia
Newman is in the north-east of Australia
b) Make sentences about the location of each
town/city on the map, as in the example
Perth is on the south-west coast of Australia
Fro
m All Four Corners of the World
Fill in the blanks with adjectives from the list, then
make sentences with the phrases
handmade, colourtul, elegant, holiday, narrow, delicious, rich, traditional, trendy, fantastic
clubs
music
history
nice/good | fantastic bad
} ‘A Dear Stacey, j
/ We finally arrived in Stockholm It is a 1) nice city We are staying at a 2) big hotel which has
iq 3) nice rooms We had planned to go sightseeing
Ne 7
\ a thousand years old, is sure
today but the weather was 4) bad Hopefully, it
\ will be a better day tomorrow
See you soon,
Ỉ ị
ilL is a 1) small villag€ situated in the f
‘orest near Brownpool \
k tree, which is more than
The 3) big oa!
Rosehill is also known for and 5) nice homemade bread
a See
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Study the examples, then join the sentences
using which, where or with
Tourists should visit the Art Museum It is one of the
best in the world
Tourists should visit the Art Museum, which is one of
the best in the world
Shoppers will love the local bazaar They can find
colourful, handmade carpets there
Shoppers will love the local bazaar, where they can
find colourful, handmade carpets
Maui is a paradise for tourists It has beautiful
beaches and clear blue waters
With its beautiful beaches and clear blue waters, Maui
There are many clubs in the city centre You can
dance and listen to live music there
There are many clubs in the city centre where you can
dance and listen to live music
The city is known for its open-air food markets They
have all sorts of spices, food and cakes
There are fantastic restaurants and delicious French
cuisine in Paris It is a perfect choice for food lovers
Rome is a wonderful city to explore It has many
ancient temples and monuments
An interesting place to visit in the city is the National
Gallery You can admire famous paintings there
Visitors should not miss the small restaurants around
the square They can try delicious local specialities
there
To make a description of a place more vivid, we can
refer to our senses (i.e describe sights, sounds and
smells)
When describing a place, we may include the ‘human
scene’, with words referring to crowds (e.g crowded,
busy, empty) and activity (e.g rush, walk, carry)
e.g The streets of the city are always busy [crowd]
and noisy [sound], with people rushing about
9 a) Match the sentences (1-6) to the pictures (A-
C) What does each phrase in bold refer to:
sight, sound, smell, crowds or activity?
1 G Visitors can sit in front of one of the little cafés and
3ð uức The smell of car fumes is strong and choking
port, admiring the brightly-coloured houses 4i súc The city glows with light from offices and cars
SỈ sáo The crowded streets are full of people hurrying and cars hooting
© seo The delicious smell of grilled fish fills the air
b) Which picture is not described above? Use these prompts to write about the picture
- brightly-coloured flowers / surround / fountain
- visitors / breathe / clean mountain air
- enjoy / peace / traditional mountain village
various sorts of writing Read the extracts and say which is from:
1 an adventure story
2 aletter to a friend, written by somebody on holiday
3 an article describing an exotic holiday destination
Marrakech seems like a city that is half myt! |
found herself in a small square surrounded Ì old buildings and cafés ee
——— couldnt believe
| went to the Eiffel Tower today | the view from up there — it was breathtaking! | also went
to the Louvre and spent hours walking around, admiring
b) Read again and underline the words/
phrases referring to sights, sounds, smells, crowds or activity
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When we write a descriptive article about a place, we can
divide it into four paragraphs
® In the introduction we mention the name and location
of the place and the reason for choosing it
® In the second paragraph we write about what a visitor
can see and do (sightseeing, museums, shopping, etc)
® In the third paragraph we write about entertainment,
nightlife and eating out (clubs, restaurants, etc)
© In the conclusion we make general comments and
recommend the place to visitors
We normally use present tenses in this type of writing
11 Read the rubric, then read the article and match
the topic sentences (A-D) to the gaps (1-3) in the
article One of the sentences does not fit What
is the topic of each paragraph?
A travel magazine has asked its readers for articles
describing the perfect place for a weekend escape
Write an article about such a place, describing its
attractions and saying why it is worth visiting
A Ifyou need a weekend escape from the stress of the
city, St Lambert is just the place for you
B_ St Lambert does not have a busy nightlife
C StLambert’s crowded streets are always full of life
D_ There are many interesting things to see and do here
A Charming
Weekend Escape
St Lambert, a small town %⁄
near Montreal, Canada, is
the perfect choice for a
relaxing weekend escape
[1[ ]A visit to the Marcille museum is a wonderful
chance to see great Canadian art Visitors can cycle
along the St Lawrence River and admire the breathtaking
scenery Shoppers will enjoy a walk down Victoria Street,
where excellent boutiques sell fashionable clothes
[2]_] However, visitors can enjoy a cup of hot chocolate
in front of a roaring fire in one of the small cafés in the
town There are also many restaurants, like Capitains,
where one can taste delicious French onion soup For
those with a sweet tooth, the local pies are a must
[3[ ]The peace and quiet of the town offers tired
visitors a welcome, refreshing break from their busy lives
12 a) Read the rubric and underline the key
words, then answer the questions to plan
your composition in detail
A magazine which you enjoy reading is holding a competition for the best article entitled “A lovely place to visit” Write an article for the competition, describing your town or city, saying what a visitor can see and do there and explaining why it is a good choice for tourists (100-150 words)
1 What type of composition is this?
A descriptive article about a place B_ narrative including description of a place
2 Whowill read your article?
3 What style will you use?
A informal, personal
4 What tenses will you use?
5 Which place will you write about?
A acity in another country
B the city you live in
6 a) What information about your city will you give under these headings?
® location
b) Can you group these into paragraphs?
c) Suggest topic sentences for each main body paragraph
d) What words/phrases will you use which refer to the senses, crowds and activity?
B semi-formal, descriptive
© nightlife
b) Use your answers to the questions
above, as well as the plan below to write your composition Use the texts in
Exs 2 and 11 as models
Plan '
Introduction Paragraph 1:
4
Main Body Paragraph 2:
Paragraph 3:
1
Conclusion Paragraph 5:
name, location
sights to see, things to do nightlife, restaurants, etc comments/recommendation
23
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Four Walls
and a Roof
1 Read the rubric and underline
the key words, then answer the questions
Your favourite magazine is publishing
a series of articles about the world's
most beautiful palaces, and you have
decided to submit an article about a
palace you feel is especially beautiful
Write your article, giving some facts
about the history of the palace and
describing it both inside and outside
(120 - 180 words)
1 What sort of composition is this?
2 Which topics/points would you include
in your article? Put a tick (7)
name & location of palace your first visit to the palace ++, Who built it, when/why it was built
- why all palaces are special buildings description of the interior
description of the exterior
description of the people who live/
used to live in it esate the people who work in the palace
2 — a)Read the article and label the
paragraphs with these
b) What can visitors see inside
Which of the world’s great palaces has the most “al
[ The palace was originally built for Sultan Mehmet
leo most famous jewels are housed in the All in all, the magnificence of the palace and its |
Topkapi - Turkey’s Treasure
spectacular view? Many people would say it is
Topkapi Palace, situated on a cliftop in Istanbul,
Turkey, and famous for its amazing view over the Bosphorus Straits and the Sea of Marmara J
Il, between 1451 and 1481 It became the official
residence of the Ottoman Sultans until 1856 Many buildings have been added to the palace over the centuries Topkapi now resembles a small city
The palace is enclosed by a thick stone wall 7]
Visitors can enter it by passing through heavy iron gates set into the wall The various buildings within the grounds include a mosque and a white marble palace One of the four main courtyards contains a gorgeous garden filled with rare flowers and trees from all over the world = The interior of the palace shows the luxurious | lifestyle of the sultans Some private apartments have been left as they were when they were lived
in Many of the imperial costumes worn by the Sultan are on display in the Palace Museum, as well as priceless collections of silver, crystal and porcelain from China and Japan Some of the
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sentences as T (true) or F (false)
1 The palace was completed in 1481
2 The palace hasn't changed at all
3 There is a magnificent view of the sea
from the clifftop
4 There are beautiful gardens in the palace
5 The Sultan still lives in the palace
4 Fill in the correct word from the list, then
make sentences using the expressions
white, priceless, iron, rare, official, spectacular, stone,
When we describe a building and its location, we can use
the passive when the action is more important than the
agent (the person/thing doing the action)
e.g The palace was built in 1451
6 Look at the information, then talk about
each landmark, as in the example
Completed: AD 900 Location: Yucatan, Mexico Material: stone
Name: El Castillo
EI Castillo is located in Yucatan, Mexico It was built by
Material: limestone
Built for: defence of the city
—^~——
7 ~~ Read the extracts and match them to the
pictures, then underline the phrases which describe location Finally, choose a famous landmark in your country and describe its
location
1 Neuschwanstein Castle, often called “The Fairytale Castle” for its tall white towers, is set among the Bavarian Alps in southern Germany, about two hours from the city of Munich
2 Visitors to Rome are often disappointed to find that this
great monument, situated in the heart of the city, is used as a large traffic roundabout by modern Romans
family holiday Situated by the sea, the hotel is only 20 metres from one of the world’s most famous beaches
( {
{ Js
4 Bran Castle — once home to Prince Viad Tepes, the inspiration for Bram Stoker's Dracula — stands at the top of a wooded hill in the Carpathian Mountains
2
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8 Put the words into the correct box
pool, staircase, porch, gardens, hallway, gates,
paintings, grounds, tapestries, antique furniture,
jewels, fountain, costumes, balcony, lawn, lounge,
fireplace, driveway, curtains
in various sorts of writing Read the extracts and say which is from:
[LL] a letter to a friend or relative [2] an article describing your ideal home
to talk about each of the palaces shown
gardens - lake with swans - fountain - bottom of stairway - statue
x
The palace is set in
antique furniture - cal rved table & chairs - pai s - chandelier
embroidered curtain:
A Kevin stood outside the dark, abandoned house and
shivered He walked up to the heavy wooden door,
pushed it open and entered a large hall There was a stone fireplace at one end of the room, but there was
no fire burning and the furniture was covered in cobwebs Suddenly he felt a cold hand on his shoulder
garden full of beautiful 1g pool
e’re so excited, because we've finally moved into
a great view of the city We're planning to buy some tropical plants and a bamboo table and chairs so that we can sit outside The living room is huge, with
® In the introduction we mention what type of building
it is, its location and its special features
® In the second paragraph we give historical facts about the building (e.g who designed it, when it was built, etc)
In the third paragraph we describe the exterior of the building
¢ In the fourth paragraph we describe the interior of the building
¢ In the conclusion we write general remarks about the building and a recommendation to visitors
We use past tenses to write about the historical facts and present tenses to describe the building, its
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paragraphs in the correct order What is
the main topic of each paragraph?
There are over one hundred and thirty rooms in
the White House Many of them are ‘themed’ — for
example, in the Red Room all the furnishings are red
There is also a Green Room and a Blue Room, all filled
with valuable works of art collected over the years by the
many presidents who have lived in the White House In
addition, there is a swimming pool, a gym, a theatre and
a library to entertain the President and his family
Pic) Have you ever wondered what it’s like in the
home of the world’s most powerful man? Well, you can
find out if you visit the White House, the official home
of the President of the United States of America It is
situated on Pennsylvania Avenue, in Washington, D.C
L TB] In Conclusion, the White House is one of the
most exciting buildings in the world Visitors to the
Capital should not miss the Opportunity to see for
themselves the rooms where America’s President lives
and works
The mansion was designed by laa te
architect James Hoban and was completed ‘ vn ue
first occupant was President John Adams, ` sie
the great Theodore Roosevelt who later official ly cen
it the ‘White House’, because of its white san
brickwork
Four Walls and a Roof
12 4) Read the rubric and underline the key
words, then label the notes with the headings Finally, use the notes to talk about Windsor Castle
The editor of your school magazine has asked you to write an article about a famous historic building you have visited Write your article, describing the building (120-180 words)
® name, location, special features *® historical facts
— now fully restored enormous building, covers large area; long driveway leads to huge courtyard;
stone towers; lawns public can see State Apartments, fine collection of art (works by da Vinci, Michelangelo), beautiful furniture, porcelain
don’t miss chance to see home of Castle
England's kings & queens
b) Use the notes above and the plan below
to write your article about Windsor Castle Use the article in Ex 2 as a
Paragraph 2:
Paragraph 3:
Paragraph 4:
1 Conclusion
Paragraph 5
name, location, special features
historical facts description of exterior description of interior
recommendation
Zi
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“an annual event”?
What is the most interesting/
exciting annual event you have
attended? When/where was it?
What is the reason why the
event is held? What happens
during the event?
2 Read the rubric and underline
the key words, then answer the questions
On a recent visit to another country
you attended a fascinating annual
event Write an article about the event
for your school magazine, describing
what happened both before and
during the event, and saying how you
feel about the experience
(120-150 words)
What type of composition is this?
Which of the following do you think are
main topics in the article? Put a tick (V)
preparations for the event description of town/area where the event took place
axes the clothes people wore, the food
they ate, etc tuấy your feelings/general remarks about
the experience description of the event itself how you got there, where you stayed what the event is, when/where/why itis held
ses what you did after the event finished
3 Recd the article and label the
paragraphs with these headings, then find the topic sentences in
the main body paragraphs and suggest alternatives
© preparations
® name, place, time, reason
© feelings, general remarks
© description of event itself
The Greatest Outdoor Show on Earth
F | was recently lucky enough to attend the Calgary 4 Stampede, one of Canada’s most spectacular festivals | love the Wild West, so | was in heaven during the ten-day event , which takes place every July
to honour the Native American Indians and the
[ Final preparations for the festival started days before ˆ]
the Stampede began In order to make the modern city of Calgary look like a town from the Old West, the streets were lined with old-fashioned wooden fences and bales of hay, as they do on a Hollywood film set
People were also hard at work building fantastic, brightly-coloured floats for the parade, while marching bands kept practising their lively music The most extraordinary thing, though, was all the delicious food which talented chefs prepared for Calgary’s hundreds
During the Stampede everyone had a great time | Calgary's streets were filled with happy, noisy crowds dressed in jeans, bandanas and Western boots
Fearless cowboys rode wild horses and bulls in the rodeo events, Native Americans performed traditional dances, and spectacular firework displays lit up the sky every night It was like being at an enormous, non-
I'll never forget my visit to the Calgary Stampede It 4 was the most exciting experience of my life — no wonder they call it “the greatest outdoor show on
Para 3
4 a) Read the model again and list:
+ what happened before the event
+ what happened during the event
Use your notes to talk about the Calgary Stampede b) Underline the words/phrases in the article which express the writer’s feelings.
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make sentences using the completed phrases
brightly-coloured, wooden, marching, wild, bales,
firework, heaven, outdoor, film, talented
displays Show
Adjectives can be made by adding suffixes to nouns or
verbs: -ful (e.g beauty - beautiful), -ous (e.g fame -
famous), -al (e.g tradition - traditional), -ing (e.g
interest - interesting), -ed (e.g thrill - thrilled)
® Adjectives ending in -ing describe what somebody or
something is like e.g The fireworks were amazing
Adjectives ending in -ed describe how somebody
1 The children were very exciting/excited when the
clowns came in and the show began
2 The audience enjoyed the performance because the
ballet dancers were amazing/amazed
3 | found the art exhibits at the festival very interesting/
interested
4 My friend Jill was embarrassing/embarrassed when
the performer asked her to come on stage
5 There were plenty of different things to do at the fair,
so our children didn’t get boring/bored at all
7 Fill in the gaps with the correct form of the word
in bold, as in the example
We spent three delightful
Flower Festival We were 1)
the flower displays, and the 2)
Rose Park was fantastic There v were lots of
children, as well as 6]
games We also enjoyed 7)
local food and listened to 8)
folk music played by various groups
AMUSE TRADITION MARVEL
8 Use the prompts to write a paragraph
1 We / be / very busy / and / have / lots / do / before /
Pete's surprise party / last week
2 We / send out / invitations / all our friends / and /
make / big cake
3 We also / buy / soft drinks / snacks / and / we /
decorate / house / colourful balloons / streamers
4 Finally, we / hire / magician / entertain / guests
the phrases can be used more than once
have a romantic dinner
wear paper hats decorate the house
b) Use the phrases to talk about the last time you celebrated one of these occasions
z2
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end of their school careers Read the sentences
and say which describe preparations and which
describe the event itself
A The organising committee booked a fancy ballroom
months before the prom
B The girls wore flowers on their wrists
C Parents took pictures of their children wearing elegant
outfits
D_ Seniors hired limousines to drive them to the prom
E Everybody went shopping to find the perfect dress or
tuxedo
F Students decorated the ballroom with colourful
balloons and streamers
G _ Seniors had dinner and then danced the night away
_ STUDY TR
Description of special events we have attended will often
include writing about our feelings — i.e how we felt
during the event, as well as how we feel about it now
e.g | really enjoyed myself | was very excited
It was an amazing experience I'll never forget it
11 Read the extroes and fill in the phrases in the
list Make sentences using these phrases
| felt so happy and relaxed, will stay with me all my life,
one of the best, will have the chance, make me feel at
home
A | am truly grateful to Susan for taking me to the
festival The memory of the happy music and the
B | feel very lucky to have experienced such a wondertul,
to 3)
privileged to have been there
C | thought the party was really wonderful Meeting such
delightful and interesting people was really lovely
4) visneectsnatesesseeessstenenstenases there — the music
was brilliant and everyone looked gorgeous It was
5) Parties I've ever been to
12 Read the extract below and put the verbs in
brackets into the correct tense, then answer the
questions that follow
(have) a great time here in Sweden Right now we †) -: (be) ina small
to the town’s Midsummer Eve celebrations This big event _
(be/held) annually, when the people of |
raising of the maypole, which 7) t
(join) the others and 1 1) Ae i (ens) 4
1 What sort of writing is the extract taken from?
A an article about tourist attractions in Sweden
B a letter to a friend, written by somebody on holiday
C anarrative story What is the name of the event?
When does the event take place?
What do the people celebrate?
What did the writer do during the event?
WRITING
When we write a descriptive article about an event, a special occasion/celebration, etc we attended, we divide
it into four paragraphs
© In the introduction we mention the name of the event and the time, place and reason it is held
® In the second paragraph we describe preparations
which are made before the event
® In the third paragraph we describe what happened during the event itself
In the conclusion we mention our feelings and make general remarks about the event
We use present tenses to mention the name, time, place and reason the event is held
We use past tenses to describe the preparations before the event and what happened during the event itself
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words, then read the article and number the paragraphs in the correct order
A local magazine often has articles about celebrations
in various parts of the world Write an article for the
magazine, about a unique celebration you attended in
another country Describe preparations before the
event as well as what happened during the event itself
[Ja] During the five days of Diwali, every home and temple was decorated, inside and outside, with lovely clay lamps and colourful candles After dark, the whole neighbourhood glittered with thousands
of tiny lights, as though in
a fairy tale Excited children set off firecrackers, and at
first | was frightened by the loud bangs, but the
spectacular display was so fascinating that | soon joined
in the spirit of the celebration
[B] Last autumn | was in India during Diwali, the
“Festival of Lights” which takes place every year to
celebrate the victory of good over evil This festival lasts
for five days and is held at the end of October or in the
first week of November
Diwali is a deeply moving festival | am very
grateful | had the chance to share in this celebration of
peace and harmony | have fond memories of the
experience, and in particular | will never forget how
friendly and generous the people were
[_[D] Preparations began weeks before the event
People cleaned their homes and painted wonderful
designs called rangolis on the walls and floors They
bought beautiful new clothes and jewellery to wear
during the festival, and women made delicious sweets
which were better than any others | have ever tasted
b) Match these headings to the paragraphs
B name/time/place/reason the event itself
preparations before the event feelings and comments
€) Which title best fits the article?
d) Read the article again and list:
- the preparations before the celebration
- what happened during the celebration
A Time to Celebrate
14 a) Read the rubric and underline the key
words, then answer the questions
Your teacher has asked you to write about an interesting celebration you attended in your country Write your composition, describing preparations and saying what you did during the event itself (100 - 150 words)
1 © What type of composition is this?
Who is going to read your composition?
© What are the specific topics you must include?
2 © Which event will you write about? When/where did it take place? What did the occasion celebrate?
© What preparations were made for the event? When did these begin?
© What will you write about the event itself?
© What tenses will you use? Why?
3 > © How many main body paragraphs will there be?
What topic sentences will you use for the main body paragraphs?
b) Use your answers, and the plan below, to write your composition Use the article in
Ex 3 as a model
Introduction Paragraph 1: nơme/†ime/plœce of event,
4 reason for celebrating
Main Body Paragraph 2: preparations before the event Paragraph 3: fhe event itself
s
Conclusion Paragraph 4: — feelings/general remarks
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1 Read the rubric, underline the key
words and answer the questions
A teenage magazine has announced a
competition for the best short story
entitled “The Most Embarrassing
Moment of My Life”, and you have
decided to enter Write your story for
the competition
2 Who will your story be about?
3 What might such a story be about?
A aserious accident
B a frightening experience
C an amusing mistake you made
2 — Read the story and number the
pictures (A-D) in the correct order, then answer the questions below
1 When did the events of the story take
place? Who is the main character?
2 Why did the writer go to the phone box?
3 Why did she decide to stay there?
4 What do you suppose she thought the
young man wanted to do?
5 Why did she pretend she was speaking
to someone on the phone?
What did the man do while the writer was
in the phone box?
Why did she come out of the phone box?
What was the man waiting to do?
Why was it necessary to do this?
10 Why was the writer embarrassed?
| had gone to town to do some shopping, and as | was walking through the park on my way to the bus stop it suddenly began to rain | immediately dashed into a nearby phone box since | didn’t have an umbrella It was raining heavily, but it was one of those short autumn showers that don’t last long, so | decided to stay in the phone box until it stopped
A few moments later, | saw a young man walk up to the phone box, wearing a yellow raincoat and holding a tool box | didn’t want
to go out into the rain, so | picked up the phone and pretended | was talking to someone | thought the man would go away, but he didn’t He just waited patiently in the pouring rain, watching me wave my hands about and act as if | was deep in conversation Luckily, the rain began to stop after about ten minutes “Okay, Mum,” | said loudly into the phone, “I'll see you later, then Bye!” | put the phone down, picked up my shopping and stepped out of
|_ the phone box “I’m sorry | took so long,” | said to the man
“I've just come to repair it It’s out of order, you see.” | felt myself
go bright red in the face and | hurried away with my head down, feeling a complete fool That was certainly one of the most embarrassing moments of my life!
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3 Fill in the correct word from the list, then make
sentences using the completed phrases
box, broadly, complete, face, out of, patiently, pouring
So the Story Goes
6 a) Read the extract from a story and fill in the
gaps with linking words from the list
then, later, finally, when, first, until, after
in the past, we use past tenses These include:
Past Simple
© for an action which started and ended in the past (e.g
went to Corfu on holiday last summer.)
© for several actions which happened one after the other
in the past (e.g | opened the gate, walked down the
garden path and knocked at the door.)
Past Continuous
for an action that was in progress at a certain time in the
® to give background information at the start of a story
(e.g The wind was blowing loudly and the rain was
pouring down )
Past Perfect
® for an action which happened before another action in
the past (e.g The train had already left by the time | got
4 Read Para 2 of the story again and find
each verb which is in one of the past tenses
above Then, say which tense each verb is
in, and why this tense has been used
which happened before another past action)
5 Put the verbs in bold into the correct tense
a woman running towards me
(pour) with rain as | (leave) the house and (hurry) to the bus stop
(be) A young boy 10)
(stand) at the top of the lighthouse, waving frantically
| was in my bedroom ase | reali
‘smell smoke Looking out of the window, | saw fe tae
next door was on fire 2) | phoned the fire brigade, 3) ! ran next door and rang the doorbell | knew my neighbour, Mrs Carr, was at home, but Nobody answered, so | broke a window and went inside : 4) _
Searching for some time, | found Mrs Carr lying unconscious on the kitchen floor, so | dragged her |
{
Out of the house The fire brigade 5) arrived and put the fire out | waited with Mrs Carr 6) âf]
easels Came to take her to hospital A couple of days
went to visit her She was very grateful '
life
to me for saving her ii {
b) Number the events in the correct order
LI Mrs Carr was lying unconscious on the floor
[J I visited Mrs Carr in hospital
LL] | smelt smoke
LL] The fire brigade put the fire out
LZ] | phoned the fire brigade
(J Iran next door and rang the doorbell
We often begin and/or end a story about something that happened to us by talking about our feelings Instead of using common adjectives (e.g tired), we should use more
7 a} Complete the table of adjectives with synonyms
from the list, as in the example
glad, amazed, annoyed, cross, delighted, depressed, frightened, furious, miserable, sad, scared, shocked, stunned, terrified, thrilled
unhappy afraid
angry
surprised
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So the Story Goes
8 — Match the adjectives (1-6) to the feelings
of the speakers (A-F), then try to think of synonyms for each adjective
1 amazed[ ] 3 teriied [ ] 5 anxious [7]
2 puzled[ ] 4 depressed[_ ] 6 happy O
I can't
understand that 2
9 Read the endings and say how the writer
feels in each Which writing techniques
are used in each ending?
a address the reader directly
b use direct speech/quotation
¢ ask a rhetorical question
[b] ‘an relief Enjoy your visit to our country, sir,” said
[] ! le Tu who stamped my passport | just glared
ngrily at him, picked up my suitcase and walked
2 Three hours later | was still waiting impatiently for
Jack | looked around the filthy café and sighed in
annoyance “You don’t really mind, do you?” Jack
said when he finally arrived, and of course | forgave
him, just as | always do After all, what are friends for?
3 When we got home, my mother was waiting for us
L] How many times have | told you never to go near
that old house?” she said furiously All we could do
was hang our heads in shame
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10 a) Read the rubric and underline the key words
You recently did something which made you feel very Proud, and you have been asked to write the story of
what happened for your school magazine Write your
story, and say how the incident made you feel
b) Read the story and number the Paragraphs in the correct order
| [A[_] As | got out of the pool and began to dry myself, |
he girl dived into the water again After thirty seconds or more she still hadn’t come to the surface, so | began to
| worry | ran to the deep end of the pool, where | saw her
| struggling wildly underwater | dived in to help her, and found that her long dark hair was caught in the drain at the bottom of the pool | tried to help her get free, but she
| was trapped — and, of course, she was drowning
| What's the most important thing you've ever done
| in your life? For me, it was the occasion, a few weeks ago,
| when | was able to save someone's life by being in the
| right place at the right time
j |_| Then the lifeguard arrived on the scene, checked
| that the girl was all right and called her parents When they
| heard what had happened, they kept thanking me for
| saving their daughter's life | was relieved that she was OK,
| and | felt very proud of myself After all, wouldn't you have
| felt the same if you'd been in my place?
| [D[_] | was at the public swimming pool, and | was
' about to get dressed and go home Since it was a cool,
| cloudy afternoon, and beginning to get quite late, the pool
| was almost empty The lifeguard was nowhere to be seen,
"and the only other swimmer was an eight-year-old girl
| [E[_] | swam to the surface and shouted for help, bul
| there was no one there Then | noticed an empty Coke
| bottle on a table near the pool, so | climbed out, smashet
| the bottle and dived back into the water with a piece of the
| broken glass Using the sharp edges of the glass, | wai
| able to cut through the girl's hair and set her free
| dragged her to the surface She coughed up lots of wate
| before she finally began to breathe normally again
1 When and where did the story take place?
2 Who was there? Why weren't there more people there?
3 Why did the writer begin to feel anxious about the girl? Why was the girl ‘struggling wildly underwater’? : Why did the writer smash a bottle?
What did the lifeguard do when he arrived?
How did the writer feel at the end of the incident?
NOs
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First-person narratives are stories about real events that happened to
us in the past, or imaginary stories written in the first person (“I/we”), as
if we were the main character
When we write a first-person narrative we can divide it into five
paragraphs:
¢\n the introduction we catch the reader's attention, and give
information about when the story took place
® In the main body (paragraphs 2-4), we explain what was happening
when the story began, then develop the story by narrating the events
in the order they happened
© In the conclusion we write what happened in the end, mentioning any
consequences/results, and describe our feelings and/or reactions
Descriptions of people, places, etc can also be included in first-person
11 a) These events happened last Friday Look at the pictures
and answer the questions
1 What time is it?
2 Where is the man going?
3 What time is his flight?
f 4 What has happened?
| 5 What will he have to do?
6 What time is it?
8 What has happened?
9 What is he trying to do?
| 10 Where is he now?
11 What time is it?
12 What has happened?
13 What is he doing now?
14 What news is on the TV?
15 How do you think the man feels now?
go home - angry, upset, worried - miss meeting
later, watch TV news - amazed / see - 9:15 flight - land / sea
no serious injuries - still relieved / miss
flight
turn out / be / blessing / disguise
Read the instructions below and
underline the key words Then, use
the prompts in Ex 11, the plan below and the pictures in the Photo File Section to write your
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1 Read the rubric and underline the
key words, then answer the questions
Your favourite magazine holds an annual
short story competition, and you have
decided to enter The mules for this year's
competition state you must write a story
which ends with this sentence: “It was
certainly a hike they would never forget.”
Write your story for the competition
(120 - 180 words)
Who is going to read your story?
A people with interests/tastes that are
similar to yours B_ only people interested in hiking
Will you write this story as a first-person
narrative or not? Which words in the
rubric suggest this?
What will the last sentence of your story
be?
Which sort of story should you write for
the competition?
A_ashort story which includes a secret
agent, a time machine, a puzzling murder and aliens from outer space Ban exciting story about an imaginary
incident, including description to give the reader a clear picture of the scene
C _atrue story about an historical event,
including a lot of factual details,
explanation Which of these subjects would you not
write about, and why?
A a sailing trip which almost ended in
disaster for everyone involved
B one man’s solo attempt to walk to
the North Pole
C two women’s terrifying meeting with
a bear while walking in the forest D_ the hiking tour which some of your
friends want to go on next year
gasped, sobbed, warned, whispered,
An Unexpected Meeting [It was a bright summer morning, and a warm breeze was blowing gently through the trees Pauline and Sally stood talking
to the park ranger before they set off on a ten-mile hike to the next Ÿ camp site “Be careful in the forest,” the ranger 1)
| usually dangerous, but if you see any, don’t get too close.”
The two friends followed a hiking trail through the forest until they came to a clearing in the trees with a stream running through
it “Oh, look, Pauline!” 2) Sally “Bears!” Two tiny bear cubs were playing happily in the middle of the stream Sally immediately took a camera from her pack and began to
the cubs’ mother was Hearing a sudden noise, both women turned round and saw an enormous bear charging towards them There was nowhere to hide, and no time to run away from the angry bear, so Pauline knew their only chance was to play dead
They lay absolutely still, face down on the ground, with their eyes tightly closed in terror They heard the bear approach, felt its hot
|_ breath as it sniffed them, then finally heard it walking away
They lay there for what seemed like hours, too frightened to move or speak When they were sure the bear had gone, they got
up, crying tears of relief “I can hardly believe we had such a lucky
|_ was certainly a hike they would never forget
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1 Which paragraph ‘sets the scene’ (i.e describes the
weather, introduces the situation and characters, etc)?
2 In which section do the events develop?
3 How many paragraphs does the main body have?
4 Which paragraph describes what happened in the
end and how the characters felt?
4 Read the list of events and number them in the
order they happened, then use the list to retell
the story
(4 An enormous bear charged towards them
L] They set off on a ten-mile hike
oO The bear approached them and sniffed them
E] They saw two bear cubs playing in the stream
L] They cried when they realised they were safe
E] Both of them lay down and pretended to be dead
L] The park ranger warned Pauline and Sally that there
Were bears in the forest
5 Fill in the correct word from the list, then make
sentences with the completed phrases
cubs, lucky, park, relief, sudden, ten-mile,
unexpected, warm
breeze meeting ranger 7 tears of
* To make our writing more interesting we should use a
variety of adjectives such as wonderful, magnificent,
exciting, awful, etc instead of good, nice, bad, etc
e.g Itwas a piee end to a niee day
It was a perfect end to a wonderful day
In the same way, we can use a variety of ‘speaking’
verbs such as whispered, muttered, shouted, warned,
etc instead of said
e.g “Go away!” he said shouted
© We should also use a variety of adverbs to describe
the way somebody speaks/acts
e.g “Why don't you sit here?” Brenda cheerfully
6 Read the short extracts and replace the words
in bold with words from the list
a) awtul.2 , exhausted , extremely .,
, tiny , wonderful
Trevor was 1) very tired when he finally got home |
“What a(n) 2) very bad day!” he thought sadly He had had a(n) 3) very big argument with the Sales Manager, | who was 4) very angry about a(n) 5) very small mistake |
in one of Trevor's sales reports Anyway, he told himself, |
it was still 6) very nice to be able to sit down and relax at | the end of a(n) 7) very long, unpleasant day
i
b) completely fantastic , d@lÏCiOUs , CNOMOUS 5 magnificent
| below A(n) 5) very m full moon painted a path of silver |
| light on the dark sea
1 “We're having another test? But that’s not fair!” the
2 Anne felt a piece of paper being pushed into her hand
note and beginning to read
3 “Help me! Somebody help me!”
Pamela desperately, knowing she couldn't hold ¢ on
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8 Look at the text in Ex 2 again and underline
all of the adverbs Then, use the words you
have underlined to complete the table of synonyms below
angrily, carefully, cheerfully, rudely, suddenly
1 Ken whistled
watered the plants in his garden
way to the head of the queue and demanded to be
served
vase back on the shelf, afraid that she would break it
4 “Look what you've done!” he shouted
“Why don’t you watch where you're going?
5 Jennifer was stroking the dog when it
turned and bit her hand
© To make our writing more interesting we can use similes
— ie expressions which describe people or things by
comparing them to someone or something else
© We use like and as as to make similes
e.g He can swim like a fish
10 G)Fill in the blanks with words from the list
leaf, baby, bee, feather, ice, nails, night, ox, sugar, wind
b) Make sentences using the similes above
e.g | offered to help Jane carry her suitcase but she told
me it was as light as a feather
¢ We set the scene at the beginning of a story by describing where and when the story takes place, who the characters are and what happens first
© To give the reader a clear picture of the scene, we often describe the weather (e.g hot, cold, cloudy, chilly, etc) and/or atmosphere (e.g peaceful, quiet,
11 a) Match each of the sentences to one of the
pictures below, then use the sentences to describe the scene in each picture What
season/time of day does each picture show?
Bisa Golden autumn leaves floated on the water Bass The pure white sand sparkled in the bright sun Palm trees swayed in the cool afternoon breeze
B tới The green valley was chilly in the shade of the
late afternoon
———_——>
—_——— b) Use the prompts to write about the picture in the past tense
- cloudy sky / be / pink in / soft light / late afternoon
- first snow / winter /
cover / steep side / mountain
- freezing water /
calm lake / reflect /
white snow & dark
trees
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MT
When we write an exciting story about an imaginary incident, in the
form of a third-person narrative, we can divide our composition into
five paragraphs
® In the first paragraph, we set the scene (i.e who was involved in the
story, when and where it happened, and what happened first)
© In the main body (paragraphs 2-4) we develop the story by writing
about the rest of the events in the order they happened
® In the conclusion, we write what happened in the end and describe
the feelings of the people in the story
12 a) Look at the pictures of events from a dramatic incident,
and number them in the order they happened
What tenses will you use?
bright summer sun - fairground - Gary and sister Wendy - queue for Ferris wheel
- climb into seat - attendant locks safety bar
wheel begins to turn - higher and higher - see for miles - wheel stops at top - Wendy terrified, Gary laughs
Gary unlocks safety bar - stands up - Wendy begs: “Sit down, Gary!” - “Don’t worry, | won't fall!”
wheel suddenly starts again - Gary loses balance, falls - hanging from safety bar - Wendy grabs arm - “Hold on, Gary!”
reach ground safely - everyone relieved - attendant shouts at Gary for being so stupid - Gary ashamed
Read the rubric and underline the key words, then use the prompts
in Ex 12, the plan below and the
pictures in the Photo File Section
to write your story
Your teacher has asked you to write a story which ends with this sentence:
“He had learned his lesson, and would never do anything so stupid again.”
Write a story about someone's foolish behaviour which almost ended in tragedy (120-180 words)
9 Develop the story vents in order) Conclusion
Paragraph 5: End the story
& describe feelings
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