A screenplay, or script, is the backbone of any movie well, except for Jean-Luc Godard movies.. Although there have been flukes over the years, like Shane Black hitting the jackpot with
Trang 1Here's something people often forget: it takes a person to write movies Screenwriting involves writing down ideas so that they'll be easily translated into visual art
A screenplay, or script, is the backbone of any movie (well, except for Jean-Luc Godard movies) It's the first step in the moviemaking process
Almost everybody on the movie set has a copy of the script because it reveals what they should be doing It tells the actors how to act and what to say, the production designer how to build the set, and the director how to shoot the scene
Of course, a film is a collaborative effort, but it all starts with the screenwriter A good script has many facets (fame, fortune, love, marriage, affairs, divorce, despair, and so on); choose the ones you want However, screenplays have their own language, their own slang, if you will What I offer here are the basics you need to turn your burgeoning idea into a summer blockbuster Before You Start
At the outset, you must realize that screenwriting is a competitive sport The Writers Guild of America registers over 10,000 scripts a year, and less than 1% of them are made into motion pictures Everyone in Los Angeles and every second person elsewhere has a script they're trying to sell, so your chances as a beginner are slim to none
Although there have been flukes over the years, like Shane Black hitting the jackpot with movies like Lethal Weapon ($250,000), The Last Boy Scout ($1.5 million) and The Long Kiss
Goodnight, few people get rich writing movie scripts In fact, the average working screenwriter earns about $50,000 US a year
And fame shouldn't be a factor in your decision either Not only does the public at large never bother to find out who wrote a film, but the major studios often show the same lack of respect toward screenwriters
But if you are passionate about writing, about movies, and about making your dreams come true, then you should seriously consider writing for the movies When you think about it, screenwriting
is the toughest job in Hollywood The screenwriter is the only person on a film crew who starts with absolutely nothing That said, let's write this baby
Get a story
First of all, you need to find a story that interests you Wipe those illusions away, it's all been done before; the trick is to develop your story in a new and original way
Start with a concept you can describe in a sentence such as: All the ghosts in America form an alliance to combat an evil corporation that's determined to eliminate them Not the greatest story, but you get the idea
Considering a screenplay is between 90 and 120 pages long (one page averages one minute of screen time), you must have enough material so your story can be interesting for the duration You must ask yourself questions while developing your story What happens then? Who does it happen to? Why? As you answer these questions, you will discover new twists to your story and, before long, you'll be ready to write it
Write an outline
Before you actually start writing the script, you need to know where the story is going Few writers start writing unprepared; it's like navigating with a blindfold It's a risk since you might hit upon a fundamental story flaw or simply discover there's nowhere for your characters to go The solution is to have an outline Some writers prefer to go scene by scene and include as much detail as possible, while others choose to reveal only the bare minimum of a sequence so that they won't lose interest when it's time to write the actual script
Trang 2A good method of outlining is to use 3x5 index cards Write a scene on each card The beauty of this technique is that your story is a lot more mobile; you can switch around scenes so that the story will be more fluid
Use the right structure
Scripts have their own structure, which is meant to systematize the drama and conflicts in an organized fashion There are three acts and each has its purpose We'll use the example of the Bruce Willis movie Die Hard to illustrate the concepts But these elements are not only for action movies; they work for every genre
Act 1: (pages 1-30)
This is where you establish your characters and situation It must begin with a bang to grab the attention of the readers Often called the first reel, the first 10 pages are absolutely decisive There's a mini crisis at mid-act that leads us to a dilemma
In Die Hard, John McClane (Bruce Willis) escapes from the terrorists and knows he has to alert the authorities By the end of this act, all the pieces are set and the story as you have imagined it begins Takagi (James Shigeta) is dead, the terrorists want to open the vault, and McClane is on his own
Act 2: (pages 30-90)
The second act is where the story develops For the first half, the hero accumulates exploits, reacting to the established dilemma, and it seems like nothing can stop him
McClane successfully alerts the police and kills the first terrorist Now the bad guys are on to him What's more, McClane inadvertently comes into possession of the crucial detonators, which makes him very valuable for the terrorists
In the middle of the second act, which is also the midpoint of the movie, the story changes gear Passive characters become active
The police show up, Sergeant Al Powell (Reginald VelJohnson) becomes McClane's ally, and McClane takes it upon himself to save the day
During the second half of this act, the hero is faced with problem after problem, which reaffirms the dilemma of Act 1
McClane is distrusted by the police, the reporters snoop around, the FBI shows up, and Ellis (Hart Bochner) is killed He's definitely on his own
Act 3: (pages 90-120)
The third act is where all the conflicts are resolved and characters are changed forever by the events they have just been through Here the stakes are higher and the dilemma is at long last dealt with The hero must rise to the occasion when all seems to be lost
McClane meets head terrorist Hans Gruber (Alan Rickman) and soon, he's wounded The bad guys are about to blow up the roof of the building, the FBI guys are pulling a stunt that endangers the hostages, and finally, McClane's wife Holly (Bonnie Bedelia) is kidnapped In the end, McClane makes up with his estranged wife and Sgt Powell regains his nerves by killing a
terrorist
Create your characters
Although entire books have been written about how to build interesting characters, there are certain fundamental elements you must keep in mind when creating a hero
First of all, realize that the main character represents the audience The readers or moviegoers, if it gets to that, will live the events through the eyes of the hero So this main character must be empathetic, someone the audience can relate to
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The best characters have flaws they are vulnerable They may be good at something but these flaws could be their downfall
The antagonist, the bad guy, should be the opposite of the hero but at the same time, share some skills or character traits Make him evil the audience must despise him and root for the other guy But still, make him human and not a caricature; the reason behind his evildoing has to make sense in the end
To create great characters, prepare biographies on them:
What are their desires or dislikes? Where are they from? What was their childhood like? How well did they relate to their parents? Are they happy, in general? Any chip on their shoulder? What accent and dialect do they have?
The more thorough you are, the more interesting the character will be They will practically write themselves into the story!
Story Tips
With this knowledge you can now focus on the story's details
Show, don't tell: Instead of having characters talk about what they do or how something works, show these events
Create conflicts: Every scene should have a mini conflict, even if it's just people arguing about what kind of pizza to order
Research: Even though people are encouraged to write about what they know, if you choose to explore something unfamiliar, you should research it thoroughly
Explanations must be believable: There's nothing more irritating than when a character explains his actions and the audience realizes it makes absolutely no sense This is especially true in science-fiction movies At the same time, never let the audience get ahead of the story Your characters must be smarter than the readers and make the inevitable conclusions before they do Avoid on-the-nose dialogue: You want to avoid characters who say things the other characters already know They should never say what they mean so that there is constant subtext to the dialogue Finally, questions should never be answered with straight "yes" or "no" answers Know the Format
As aforementioned, scripts have a language of their own There are strict rules and guidelines that must be followed and this is often too harsh for novice screenwriters Aside from trying to
conform to Hollywood standards, the importance of mastering format has to do with readers Readers are people paid by production companies to read the screenplays that have been
submitted to them These people must sort through hundreds of manuscripts and determine which ones are worthy of the company's attention When they come upon works whose formatting is deficient, it triggers the amateur alarm and they'll often dismiss this script for that very reason So
if you can master the format, your script will at least get read
There is a variety of expensive software on the market, Final Draft and Movie Magic being the most popular, that basically do all the formatting for you But if you're still learning and doing it for fun, your existing word processor will do just fine You can even set up macro commands to make things easier
Script Elements
Screenplays are not like novels There are a number of elements, each with their own specific purpose Let's take a detailed look at them:
Trang 4Slugline: Also called scene heading, this is the section in which you specify the location of the scene Identify whether the scene is indoors or outdoors, the exact location, and what time of day
it is This line should always be written in uppercase
Action: Use this section to describe who the characters are and what's happening in the scene, like you would in any other story However, always use the present tense, and the first time you introduce a character, display their name in uppercase letters
Character cue: This is the character's name, which you must write above their dialogue This line
is always in uppercase
Parenthetical: Used less and less because actors despise them, the parenthetical is a short
descriptive line between the character cue and the dialogue that either calls for an emotion or a short action Use it sparingly
Dialogue: Obviously, these are your characters' spoken words
Transitions: These are short expressions, such as "DISSOLVE TO:" or "SMASH CUT TO:", that indicate how you want the editor to end the scene But since your work is not about to be
produced, you should not use transitions in your script The only ones you're allowed to use are
"FADE IN:" when beginning the screenplay and "FADE OUT." at the very end
As for the layout, here are the distances you should follow from the left side of the page:
Proper Presentation
As important as format is, the way you present your screenplay is paramount as well Amateurs can be spotted a mile away because they think they can make it look better But Hollywood insiders don't want creativity; they want the standard, run-of-the-mill presentation they're already familiar with
Your paper should be standard, smooth 8.5x11 inches letter-size It must be white and unless a producer tells you otherwise, print only on one side of the page The font you use must be
12-point Courier It's not the most attractive but it's a consistently-sized type, which means that each letter occupies the same space on the page This is helpful for producers when doing the page count and therefore evaluating if it's producible
This font is also important because screenplays must look like they were written on old-fashioned typewriters Accordingly, never boldface words or italicize them If you must put emphasis on a particular word, which you should do sparsely, underline it Page numbers go in the upper right corner, making sure to skip the first page
The title page, or fly page, must contain the script's title, with the author's name underneath and the contact information in the lower left or right corner At both ends of your script you should put
a cover of lightweight card stock Opt for a pale color such as white or beige
When all this is assembled, it should be three-hole punched and bound together using brass paper fasteners called "brads." Even if this method looks flimsy, don't put screws or bind it any other way; professionals use ¼" to 1" long, size #5 brads What's even weirder is that although you've punched three holes, you must only use two brads, leaving the middle hole empty No one really knows why
Be Careful
Before you can call it quits on your first screenplay, there are some things you must look out for Typos: Readers won't have a problem if they only run across a couple of typos in the entire script But if there are dozens per page, it will be an indication to them that you're sloppy and didn't put much effort into it It's often enough for them to stop reading altogether Proofread meticulously
No camera directions: As a neophyte, the type of screenplay you're writing is called a "spec"; it's meant as a calling card, a proof of your talents Spec scripts by beginners are rarely produced, so lay off camera directions
Trang 5Respect conventions: As arbitrary as some of the format and presentation rules may appear, it's absolutely fundamental that you comply with those guidelines with minimal deviation Follow these principles and instead focus your imagination on crafting a terrific story
Fade Out
Screenwriting is a creative job You must not be stubborn in trying to develop a story in only one way Explore different avenues and see if you can make your characters come to life and dictate where your storyline should go
Your first screenplay will likely be terrible but don't worry, the more you try, the better you'll get at it