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(A) These good conversations make the time at work go by faster
(B) J realize that | will not always be able to have conversations with the nicest of employees, but | believe that companies can help
make a place where employees can easily interact
_ (C) First, i think that companies need to create a tendy work environment
for their employees
(D) This interaction between my coworkers and me is s something that | value very much at a job
(E) | need this friendly work environment because | am the kind of person that enjoys having a good conversation with a person while
working
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In my case, | enjoy going on short vacations on the weekends
This typically requires that | have three cays off of work
Without this flexibility, | have a tendency to become unhappy with ajob
(D) -A flexible schedule allows employees to make unexpected changes
to their plans without having to worry about formally taking time off from work
(©) Inaddition, | find that having a flexiole schedule at my job is an essential part of enjoying the job
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(A) These two elements are a fundamental part of me enjoying any job
()_ In conclusion, | know that my ideal job would be in a place with a friendly environment and a flexible schedule
(C) | hope to find both these benefits in the job that | choose as a
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Should the government enforce a limited number of hours per week that each citizen can
work? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer ‘
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- limit corrupt business practices - nfringe on peopleS rights
~ monitor companies more closely - create unemployment
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Read the sample response Think about the role of the sentences in each part of the essay Look
for any transitions that link the ideas and underline them Then put the sentences in the right
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behavior (A) | strongly believe that it is not right for the government to regulate Hi a objec
the number of hours a person can work, infringe:
(B)_ In support of this view, | think it is important to recognize the rights to break a rule or agreement
(C) Additionally, | do not believe that we should give the government : :
so much control over something that will not succeed
(D) It is important to recognize the boundaries of where the government
should and should not be involved
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~ (A) Moreover, people should not be limited in the number of hours
they work because of a law : (B) First of all, allowing the government to contro! how much time an
employee could work would infringe on the rights of both business owners and workers,
(C) ‘Given the nature of the employee/employer relationship, | don’t
believe there is need for government regulation
{D) If workers are not satisfied with the hours they are asked to work,
they can always look for another job
(B) Inmy opinion, only business owners understand how much labor
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(A) Unemployment rates in these countries are high, which seems to ' indicate that goverriment intervention in this business practice | is
3 (B)- They did this in an attempt to help the workers, but this arrangement
«ig achieving the opposite effect / (C) In addition, government regulation in this area is not beneficial to society
“{D) For example,.some European governments have already passed
restrictions on how many hours each citizen can work, (©) Therefore, it seems reasonable to limit the government's power in this area
Conclusion:
(A) As a result, | am not in favor of the government passing such a law
() The law gives the government too much conitrol
@ In conclusion, | see very few reasons for a law controlling hours
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What are some important qualities of a good friend? How have these qualities changed as you
ave gotten older? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Read the sample introduction below Then, in the space provided, write body paragraphs for
two of the ideas above Try to write three to five sentences for each body paragraph Then
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Good friends should have many qualities which show that they are trustworthy and true, They
‘should be loyal, interesting, and enjoyable to be around Yet | have realized that as | have gotten older,
the qualities that | believe a good friend should have come down to two important features | find that
the friends who | value the most are those who are willing to listen to me and those who have something
to teach me
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Overall, these two features are what find most important in my friends They might not have been
i ~ ag important to me when | was younger However, they are now the foundation of nearly every friendship
i that | have
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Write your own response to the prompt in Step 1 First, think of two or three ideas for body
paragraphs Then write a response using your ideas
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