HA TRUNG EDUCATION AND TRAINING DEPARTMENTCAM THUY EDUCATION AND TRAINING DEPARTMENT HA THANH SECONDARY SCHOOLCAM QUY SECONDARY SCHOOL EXPERIENCED INITIATIVEEXPERIENCED INITIATIVE TOPIC:
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CAM THUY EDUCATION AND TRAINING DEPARTMENT
HA THANH SECONDARY SCHOOLCAM QUY SECONDARY SCHOOL
EXPERIENCED INITIATIVEEXPERIENCED INITIATIVE
TOPIC:
INTEGRATION OF SUBJECTS TO TEACH ENGLISH 8 – RECYCLING (GETTING STARTED + LISTEN AND
READ)Integrations of subjects to teach English 8- Recycling (Getting started+ Listen and read)
Author: Tran Thi Hien Position: Teacher
Working place: Cam Quy Secondary School Experienced initiative belongs to: English Subject
Author: LE THI THUY Position: Teacher
Working place: Ha Thanh Secondary School Experienced initiative belongs to: English Subject
THANH HOA, YEAR 2018
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2.3 CONTENTS OF EXPERIENCE INITIATIVE 6
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2.4 EFFECTIVENESS OF EXPERIENCE INITIATIVE FOR 18
EDUCATIONAL ACTIVITY, TO MYSELF, COLLEAGUES
AND SCHOOLS
2.4.1 The results after applying innovative experience 18
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1.1 REASONS FOR CHOOSING THE TOPICS
The world we live in is a flat world with rapid growth, a recent surveyshows that English is the official language of over 53 countries and territories, isthe official language the EU (European Union) and the 3rd is the language usedmost widely known only after China and Spain International events, globalorganizations are considered English as the common language ofcommunication Also, English is more than 400 million people worldwide used
as a mother tongue, more than a billion people use English as a second language(according to Wikipedia), the countries with the highest income in the world areproficient in English, or they use English in common Therefore, if we have adream to be in contact with the most advanced civilization today, if we want toreach the huge knowledge base of humanity, if we want to study, to bediscovered our world, the most important thing we need is English
Being an English teacher at a secondary school, I have many concerns inteaching English to achieve the high efficiency and teaching goals Specifically,
I want to find how the students can listen, speak, read and write English well sothat they can apply it to their work and life later, contribute to build our VietNam stronger and more prosperous, democratic and civilized
In the four communication skills: listening, speaking, reading andwriting, each skill has its traits and nuances require the teachers to have goodskills to teach the best knowledge for their students Writing is one of the mostimportant skills in learning language Writing skill demonstrates the results ofcomprehension, perception In other words, it is the ability to express theiropinions, their views on a problem in their life, in poetry or in the society To thereader to receive information correctly, the writer must have good writing skills;they must master the vocabulary, grammar and express clearly, simply, easily tounderstand
Writing is a fundamental step in the process of teaching and learningEnglish For the excellent student exams, especially, there is at least a questionasking students to write a paragraph about a specific topic Sometimes ourstudents feel confused because they do not know how to write, how to present aparagraph I found myself writing skills are vitally important, so I boldly choose
the theme " Intergration of subjects to teach English 8: Recycling (Getting started+Listen and read)" to help the students understand how to write some
kinds of paragraph Moreover, it also helps to improve the efficiency ofteaching, especially the quality of excellent English students at Cam Quysecondary school
1.2 RESEARCH PURPOSES
Writing in English is an interesting skill that anyone who learns Englishwants to conquer However, the skills of students in our rural areas are limitedbecause they do not have convenient communication environment to use English
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1.4 METHODS OF STUDY
1.4.1 The method of Research Methodology:
Research the documents related to the field of writing skill, on this basis,analyze, synthesize the useful and suitable knowledge to my students
1.4.2 The method of observation: Refer my colleagues’s ideals and teaching
methods, observe, estimate students’ language receiving in English lessons,especially with the article questions to assess students’ progress or not
1.4.3 The method of chatting:
Discuss directly with students about the advantages they gain, whileremoving obstacles they are facing Thereby, it also helps them confidentlydiscuss their problems encountered
1.4.4 The method of researching active products:
Estimate, review and comment students’ writing regularly, give thestrengths and weaknesses of the children so that they overcome and progress
2 THE CONTENTS OF EXPERIENCE INITIATIVE
2.1 BASIS FOR ARGUMENT
Today, when English has affirmed its role and position at school,improving the quality of teaching is an issue of primary concern LearningEnglish is merely a language school Want to become proficient in thatlanguage, the students need to practice the four basic skills: listening, speaking,reading and writing And writing skill is an important skill that students firstneed to master if they truly want to be successful in communication
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as well Being a student, they have to be facing many articles to form completetheir learning process However, in the learning process so that they can write acoherent fluent and suggestive article in English is the issues that many teachersconcern longer So how we help students to develop writting skill? Through theprocess of teaching in secondary schools, with my little experience, I would give
the topic " Intergration of subjets to teach English 8: Recycling (Getting start+Listen and read)" with a desire to help my colleagues and loved students
have the best results in teaching and learning writing skills
2.2 REALITY OF RESEARCH ISSUES
2.2.1 Situation:
There are many reference books as well as professional training curriculapositive auxiliary teaching innovation method of foreign language teachers.Besides, every year there are also professional training classes for teachers,organized the professional stage cluster activities, organized sports instructors,the thematic reports going into the issue of specialized goal to help foreignlanguages teachers to access and use the most effective methods However,teachers at the school can not use stereotypes to actual conditions of teaching,which requires teachers to know selected to perform in line with the level of thestudents, the student ages, school facilities
Cam Quy is a mountainous Secondary School, is located in difficulteconomic conditions and exchange learning of students is limited pretty much toaffect the quality of education, especially English is a difficult subject, whichrequires students to work hard, diligently, invest a lot of time Furthermore,writing is a general skill, requires the high precision Therefore, to achievepositive results, both teachers and students should have tried the combination ofeffective teaching and learning
2.2.2 The results of the study situation
2.2.2.1 To the teacher
In the group meetings, and my colleagues and I often discuss problems ofexchanging teaching experience, exchange difficuties in the lessons in each skill.Therefore, I found some difficulties that teachers often face when teachingwriting skills such as:
- There is no uniformity in capacity, level among students in a class, between classes with other classes
- Teachers often feel guilty for not being able to control and correct all students’ errors or not help all students in the writing process
2.2.2.2 To the students
When talking to students about writing skill, most children have common problems:
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- Tends to use speaking English instead of writing English
- Understanding of social knowledge is limited
- Tends to translate from Vietnamese into English when they write
- Use of the purpose and requirements of different writing uncorrectly
- Express opinions, information in the same sentence or the same long
paragraph
- There is insufficient documentation, information and insights on topics certain
to write, so they can not write the truth
- Students are often bored with writing lessons
From the status of this issue, the beginning of school year 2016 -2017 I
have examined students' writing skills class 6 and 7 with the theme "Write a paragraph to describe your house (about 80-100 words) "within 20 minutes,
and the results obtained are not good
* The results of written tests before applying:
2.3 CONTENTS OF EXPERIENCE INITIATIVE
PART 1: LEARNING ABOUT AN ENGLISH PARAGRAPH
1.1 Definition of a paragraph in English:
For example: “I live in a house in the city with my family My house is small
but it is very beautiful It has four bed rooms, one for my grandparents, one for
my parents, one for my sister and one for me The living room is a TV set,a stereo, a table, some armchairs and a picture.The kitchen is very convenient
My house also has a small garden with some flowers that my father planted
My house isn't large but it is very beautiful, and I enjoy it very much.”
What is a paragraph?
A paragraph is a group of sentences that fleshes out a single idea In order for a paragraph to be effective, it must begin with a topic sentence, have
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An effective paragraph needs the following features:
+ Presents a single idea
+ Begins with a topic sentence that makes this single idea evident
+ Contains support in form of sentences that convey this single idea
+ Be strategically organized to maintain flow
+ Maintains your essay’s objective
+ Informs and entertains your reader about your paper’s overall
1.2 Steps for an English paragraph:
1.2.1 Choose the topic:
- If the topic was given, you do not have to choose the topic
- If the topic was not given, you can choose a big subject and then narrow down
to make your own topic For example, "Education" is a subject, "What makes agood teacher?" is a topic You work on the topic, not the subject
Note: You should make your topic neither too large nor too narrow.
1.2.2 Brainstorm to find out the ideas of your writing:
- You can make a list of what comes to your mind when you think about the topic, then group them in 2-3 big ideas
- You can also use Mind-map to develop your ideas
1.2.3 Make an outline:
- Put the main ideas first
- Each main idea should have 2-3 supporting ideas
1.2.4 Write your paragrah/ essay:
* There are also some tips that you can make use of to make a good writing:
- Introduction: The topic sentence should include both the topic and denote the
way you want to organize your ideas
For example: Students should not do part-time jobs for 2 reasons.
The topic is "students should not do part time jobs" The organization of your writing is two paragraphs (2 reasons)
- Try to make use of conjunctions to make your writing coherent
- Include 2-3 main ideas in your writing only
PART 2: HOW TO WRITE A PARAGRAPH
2.1 Topic Sentence:
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of the paragraph is going to be It should contain the most important andrelevant point you wish to make regarding your topic, thus summarizing theparagraph as a whole
Link each sentence with transition words which form a bridgebetween one sentence and the next Transition words can help you compare andcontrast, show sequence, show cause and effect, highlight important ideas, andprogress smoothly from one idea to the next Such transition words include
"furthermore", "in fact" and "in addition to" You can also use chronological transitions, such as "firstly", "secondly" and "thirdly"
In terms of length, three to five sentences will usually be enough tocover your main points and adequately support your topic sentence, but this willvary greatly depending on the topic and the length of the paper you are writing.There is no set length for a paragraph It should be as long as it needs to be toadequately cover the main idea
Example: First, Singapore has an excellent health care system All
Singaporean have access to medical services at a reasonable price Second, Singapore has a high standard of education Students are taught by well- trained teachers Finally, Singapore's cities are clean with have many trees and efficiently managed Singapore cities have many parks and lots of
space
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Singapore
2.3 Closing Sentence
The concluding sentence of your paragraph should tie everythingtogether A good concluding sentence will reinforce the idea outlined in yourtopic sentence, but now it has all the weight of the evidence or argumentscontained in your supporting sentences behind it After reading the concludingsentence, the reader should have no doubt as to the accuracy or relevance of theparagraph as a whole
Don’t just reword the topic sentence Your concluding sentenceshould acknowledge the discussion that has come before it and remind yourreader of the relevance of this discussion
Example: As a result, Singapore is a desirable place to live.
Here is a simple diagram summed up 5 steps to write the text:
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PART 3: REVIEWING THE PARAGRAPH
3.1 Check your paragraph for spelling and grammar.
Once you have finished writing, it is essential that you re-read yourparagraph two or three times to check it for misspelled words and poorgrammar Spelling mistakes and bad grammar can significantly impact theperceived quality of your paragraph, even if the ideas and arguments it containsare of a high quality It is very easy to overlook small mistakes when writing, sodon't skip this step, even if you're in a rush
Check your paragraph for the proper use of punctuation, making surethat you use marks such as commas, colons, semicolons and ellipses in thecorrect context
3.2 Check your paragraph for coherency and style.
Not only should the technical aspects of your writing be spot on, but youshould also try to achieve clarity in your writing, as well as stylistic flow Youcan do this by varying the length and format of your sentences and by usingtransitional words and a varied vocabulary
The point of view of your writing should remain consistent throughoutthe paragraph, and indeed, the entire paper For example, if you are writing inthe first person (e.g., "I believe that ") you should not switch to a passive voice("it is believed that") halfway through
3.3 Decide if your paragraph is complete.
Once you have re-read the paragraph and fixed any grammatical orstylistic errors, you should have one more glance over it to determine whether it
is complete Try to look at the paragraph objectively and decide whether itsufficiently supports and develops your topic sentence, or whether it needs a fewmore details or additional evidence to back up your claims
PART 4: KINDS OF USUAL PARAGRAPH IN SECONDARY SCHOOL’S PROGRAMS
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There are four types of paragraphs that we need to know about: descriptive,narrative, expository, and persuasive
The Descriptive paragraph: This type of paragraph describes something and
shows the reader what a thing or a person is like The words chosen in thedescription often appeal to the five senses of touch, smell, sight, sound, andtaste Descriptive paragraphs can be artistic and may deviate from grammaticalnorms
The Narrative paragraph: This type of paragraph tells a story There's a
sequence of action or there's a clear beginning, middle, and end to the paragraph
The Comparison/ Contrast paragraph: This type of paragraph, you write
about the similarities and differences between two or more people, places,things, or ideas
The Argumentative paragraph: This type of paragraph tries to get the reader
to accept a particular point of view or understand the writer's position This isthe type of paragraph that many teachers focus on because it's useful whenbuilding an argument It often requires the collection of facts and research
4.1 Descriptive paragraph
* What do you want to describe?
As you get started on your descriptive Paragraph, it's important for you toidentify exactly what you want to describe Often, a descriptive Paragraph willfocus on portraying one of the following:
* Drafting your descriptive paragraph:
+ What sights, sounds, smells, tastes, and textures are important for developing your description?
+ Which details can you include to ensure that your readers gain a vivid
impression imbued with your emotion or perspective?
* Why are you writing your descriptive paragraph?
It's a great creative exercise to sit down and simply describe what you observe.However, when writing a descriptive Paragraph, we often have a particular
reason for writing your description Getting in touch with this reason can help
you focus your description and imbue your language with a particularperspective or emotion
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your grandmother You've chosen to write about your grandmother's physical appearance and the way that he interacts with people However, rather than providing a general description of these aspects, you want to convey your admiration for her strength and kindness This is your reason for writing the descriptive essay To achieve this, you might focus one of your paragraphs on describing the roughness of her hands, roughness resulting from the labor of her work throughout her life, but you might also describe how she would hold your hands so gently with her rough hands when having a conversation with you or when taking a walk.
* Planning your descriptive paragraph:
What or who do you want to describe?
What is your reason for writing your description?
What are the particular qualities that you want to focus on?
- Who this person is / his or her relationship to you
- Your impression / opinion about the person
4.1.2 Supporting sentences:
- Describe his / her physical appearance
- Describe his / her character, habit, hobby
4.1.3 Conclusion:
- What you feel about this person or say what you like about her / him
The writing sample 1: Write a paragraph about your close friends
I am lucky enough to have a lot of friends.Of all my friends, Hanh my best friend We are at the same class at the primary school and secondary school.
We are also neighbors, so we spend most of our time studying and talking together Hanh is a beautiful girl with an oval face, a long black hair and eyes speak.What particularly struck me about her was the smile, she looks so cute when she smiles She always believed and helped me in every situation She is friendly and generous She is also an intelligent student who is always at the top
of the class She likes reading and going to the library whenever she has free time We have a lot in common with each other, has become good friends over the past 6 years Although time has passed long in any case, I’m and Hanh also
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* Deccribing a celebration’s activities
* Outline
+ Topic sentence:
- What is the name of the festival?
- Where / when / why is it celebrated?
When you describe annual events (a celebration/festival which takes place
every year), Present tenses are used and the style is formal However, when
giving a personal account of an event which you witnessed or took part in, pasttenses are used and the style may be less formal The passive is frequently used
to describe preparations/ activities which take place
The writing sample 2: Write about a festival in your country
Lunar New Year
Although there are many celebrations the year,Tet or the Lunar New Year