Qua quá trình chọn lọc các bài essay theo chủ đề được điểm cao mình tìm được các bài viết đạt điểm từ 8,5 trở lên .Mỗi chủ đề mình có 3 đến 5 bài mẫu chia làm phần. Mong nó sẽ giúp bạn đọc cải thiện kĩ năng viết trong tiếng anh. Hãy tải tài liệu và ủng hộ mình nhé để mình có động lực làm các bài essay hay hơn, chất lượng hơn.
Trang 1Tuyển tập các bài luận theo chủ đề đạt điểm cao (có nhận xét của giáo viên)
1 Write an essay (150 - 300 words) about this topic:
Genetic engineering is an important issue in modern society Some people think that it will improve people's lives in many ways Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth Discuss
both opinions and give your opinion?
Bài làm:
Nowadays, genetic engineering is one of the most important fields of science Someone thinks that it will improve people's lives in many ways Other feel that it will be a threat to life on earth In my opinion, I agree with the two opinions and the following essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of genetic engineering
In one hand, genetic engineering can create an extended life Genetics can help combat the normal ways
of cell death Animals can have their genetic modifications to minimize the risk of common lethal agents that can affect the species After successful animal experiments, genetic engineering can be applied to the human body This can help to prolong human life Besides, new products can be created through genetic engineering With genetic engineering, we can create new products by adding or merging
different profiles together For example, we can create new varieties of tomatoes with more nutritional value by applying genetic engineering That will help us reduce the risk of food shortages globally Moreover, when applying genetic engineering, the risks of water resources will be minimized Farmers willnot have to use pesticides for their crops This will help protect the water supply and avoid environmental pollution
On the other hand, genetic engineering can pose major risks to human survival If human beings can extend their life more, it leads to the adequate supply of food in the future We do not have enough food for a living Besides, when the animals grow fast, the nutritional value may be reduced For example, genetic engineering can increase the amount of fat in chickens by two times, but the amount of protein is reduced
In conclusion, genetic engineering is a scientific advance of humanity It has many advantages, especially
to increase the longevity of human beings However, there is the risk of human survival if uncontrolled
We need to study it more in the future to better serve the society
Nhận xét của giáo viên :
Nowadays, genetic engineering is one of the most important fields of science Someone thinks that it will improve people's lives in many ways Other feel that it will be a threat to life on earth In my opinion, I agree with the two opinions and the following essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of genetic engineering
In one hand, genetic engineering can create an extended life Genetics can help combat the normal ways
of cell death Animals can have their genetic modifications to minimize the risk of common lethal agents that can affect the species After successful animal experiments, genetic engineering can be applied to the human body This can help to us prolong human life Besides, new products can be created through genetic engineering With genetic engineering, we can create new products by adding or merging
different profiles together For example, we can create new varieties of tomatoes with more nutritional value by applying genetic engineering That will help us reduce the risk of food shortages globally Moreover, when applying genetic engineering, the risks of water resources will be minimized Farmers willnot have to use pesticides for their crops This will help protect the water supply and avoid environmental pollution
On the other hand, genetic engineering can pose major risks to human survival If human beings can extend their life more, it leads to the adequate supply of food in the future We do not have enough food for a living Besides, when the animals grow fast, the nutritional value may be reduced For example, genetic engineering can increase the amount of fat in chickens by twice two times, but the amount of protein is reduced
Trang 2In conclusion, genetic engineering is a scientific advance of humanity It has many advantages, especially
to increase the longevity of human beings However, there is the risk of human survival if uncontrolled
We need to study it more in the future to better serve the society
Điểm: 8.75
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Trang 3It is clear that genetic engineering has a relatively rapid development in recent years, when compared with other branches of bio-technology However, there are many arguments between people about its applications An important question to be considered is whether the applications of genetic engineering will bring a miracle to people’s lives or a tradegy to life on earth.
Genetic engineering has been applied in a great number of different fields to improve the living standard From the earliest use of genetic engineering to mass-produce insulin via Ecoli bacteria, nowadays, we can also produce vaccines, hormones and drugs with the help of microorganism which is genetically modified This lows down the price of the products and make more people can afford to them Moreover, genetic engineering is expected to be a cure for genetic disorder such as Down syndrome
Apart from a cure for many dieases, genetic engineering is also used in the food we eat or in the clothes
we wear In agriculture, many plants which are genetically modified can be tolerant of insects,
environmental conditions and produce better harvest than ordinary ones It is used also in cotton, a main ingredient to make most kinds of clothes An estimated 55% of cotton used to make clothes has been genetically modified and this number will be 71% by 2040, which shows that the use of GM (genetically modified) in the fashion industry is becoming more common
Although genetic engineering has been used a lot to make our life better, there are still concerns about the harmful effect it may cause to the health of people and the entire ecosystem Some scientists expressstrong reservations about the safety of GM foods when there are cases about allergic reactions caused
by eating these foods Moreover, there are concerns about the impact of genetic engineering in soil microbe and non-targer organisms (which is not genetically modified)
In conclusion, with regard to the advantages and disadvantages of genetic engineering, I would argue that we should continue to develop this technology in order to improve our life and I also recommend that scientists take actions to minimise the potential problem of genetic engineering to the environment
Nhận xét của giáo viên :
It is clear that genetic engineering has a relatively rapid development in recent years, when compared with other branches of bio-technology However, there are many arguments between among
people about its applications An important question to be considered is whether the applications of genetic engineering will bring a miracle to people’s lives or a tradegy to life on earth
Genetic engineering has been applied in a great number of different fields to improve the living standard From the earliest use of genetic engineering to mass-produce insulin via Ecoli bacteria, nowadays, we can also produce vaccines, hormones and drugs with the help of microorganism which is genetically modified This lows down the price of the products and make more people can afford to them Moreover, genetic engineering is expected to be a cure for genetic disorder such as Down syndrome
Apart from a cure for many dieases, genetic engineering is also used in the food we eat or in the clothes
we wear In agriculture, many plants which are genetically modified can be tolerant of insects,
environmental conditions and produce better harvest than ordinary ones It is used also in cotton, a main ingredient to make most kinds of clothes An estimated 55% of cotton used to make clothes has been genetically modified and this number will be 71% by 2040, which shows that the use of GM (genetically modified) in the fashion industry is becoming more common.(Phần này bạn nên trích nguồn cụ thể nhé)
Although genetic engineering has been used a lot to make our life better, there are still concerns about the harmful effects it may cause to the health of people and the entire ecosystem Some scientists express strong reservations about the safety of GM foods when there are cases about allergic reactions caused by eating these foods Moreover, there are concerns about the impact of genetic engineering in soil microbe and non-targer organisms (which is not genetically modified)
In conclusion, with regard to the advantages and disadvantages of genetic engineering, I would argue
Trang 4that we should continue to develop this technology in order to improve our life and I also recommend that scientists take actions to minimise the potential problem of genetic engineering to the environment.Điểm: 8.75
Trang 52.Write an essay (150 - 300 words) about this topic:
Some people say that in our modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of
handwriting To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Bài làm:
A common opinion is that with the increasing role computers play in our society; handwriting is no longer
an important skill to learn at an early age Unfortunately this opinion is misguided I firmly believe that handwriting is very important even in today’s era of technology A number of arguments surround my opinion
Handwriting is important because research shows that when children learn how to do it, they also learn how to express themselves Handwriting is so much more than simply putting letters on a page; it is a keypart of learning to communicate Writing is almost as important as speaking, as a medium for
communicating thought For this reason it is said that "Writing is a secondary power of speech, and they who cannot write are in part dumb." Scrawls that cannot be read may be compared to talking that cannot
be understood; and writing difficult to decipher, to stammering speech
Handwriting is also important because kids are required to use it daily in school from kindergarten on Children who struggle with the mechanics of handwriting may have trouble taking notes or tests or completing their schoolwork This can affect both their self-esteem and their attitude toward school Good handwriting can mean better grades Studies show that the same mediocre paper is graded much higher
if the handwriting is neat and much lower if the writing is not
What is more, handwriting proficiency inspires confidence The more children practice a skill such as handwriting, the stronger the motor pathways become until the skill becomes automatic Once it's
mastered, children can move on to focus on the subject, rather than worry about how to form letters Furthermore, handwriting aids memory For example, if a person writes a list or a note — then loses it —
he is much more likely to remember what he wrote than if he just tried to memorize it
In summary, handwriting skills are very essential even today Apart from being a tool of communication, it helps the brain develop, it can improve grades and confidence and also aids memory
Nhận xét của giáo viên :
A common opinion is that with the increasing role of computers which play in our society; handwriting is
no longer an important skill to learn at an early age Unfortunately this opinion is misguided I firmly believe that handwriting is very important even in today’s era of technology A number of arguments surround my opinion
Handwriting is important because research shows that when children learn how to do it, they also learn how to express themselves Handwriting is so much more than simply putting letters on a page; it is a keypart of learning to communicate Writing is almost as important as speaking, as a medium for
communicating thought For this reason it is said that "Writing is a secondary power of speech, and they who cannot write are in part dumb." Scrawls that cannot be read may be compared to talking that cannot
be understood; and writing difficult to decipher, to stammering speech.(đoạn này em nên trích nguồn ở chỗ Scrawls ( năm, tác phẩm nào?))
Handwriting is also important because kids are required to use it daily in school from kindergarten on Children who struggle with the mechanics of handwriting may have trouble taking notes or tests or completing their schoolwork This can affect both their self-esteem and their attitude toward school Good handwriting can mean better grades Studies show that the same mediocre paper is graded much higher
if the handwriting is neat and much lower if the writing is not
Trang 6What is more, handwriting proficiency inspires confidence The more children practice a skill such as handwriting, the stronger the motor pathways become until the skill becomes automatic Once it's
mastered, children can move on to focus on the subject, rather than worry about how to form letters Furthermore, handwriting aids memory For example, if a person writes a list or a note — then loses it —
he is much more likely to remember what he wrote than if he just tried to memorize it
In summary, handwriting skills are very essential even today Apart from being a tool of communication, it helps the brain develop, it can improve grades and confidence and also aids memory
Điểm: 8.75
Trang 7It is true that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting I personally think so Skills of handwriting involve craftsmanship, artistic way of presenting letters and require a great deal of time and practice Moreover, in the morden life, it is very outdated to write a letter
by our hand instead of typing on our computer keyboard In the essay following, we will discuss
To begin with, a hand writing which is written in a quick and careful way by our right hand used to be a criterion for academic success and highly appreciate in the past but now it is not anymore Assignments, homework, tests and other school activities are mostly done on our computers and this is the reason why
a student needs to grasp the skills of computing /-heart For example, someone has sent a good deal of assignments and all of them were sent to his teachers' email addresses, not a single one was handwritten
by him What eveybody calculate is that the time typing on the computer keyboard is three times less thanthe time write by our hand In addition, many people spend a big number of their free time honing
excellent handwriting Indeed, it is very unnecesary We should keen on studying or reviewing our
knowledge instead of honing excellent handwriting
Furthermore, there is nobody handwriting It is very outdated to handwriting in lieu of typing on the computer keyboard Moreover, there are no companies or firms handwriting for their projects Definitely, they hire only the workers who know a lot about computers in the light of the fact that their works have a relation to the computers and skills of typing the computer keyboard Last but not least, the world is now covered by technology In the future, there will be nobody who write a letter by his right hand Moreover, computers and smartphones are very comfortable in studying Whenever we want to ask our teacher any questions, we only need to send a email letter to our teacher and wait their answers
In conclusion, it is unnecessary to teach children about the handwriting skills Also, with the aim of getting
a certainly job in the future, we have to type on the computer keyboard in lieu of writing by our right hands
Nhận xét của giáo viên :
It is true that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting
I personally think so Skills of handwriting involve craftsmanship, artistic way of presenting letters and require a great deal of time and practice Moreover, in the morden life, it is very outdated to write a letter
by our hand instead of typing on our computer keyboard In the essay following, we will discuss
To begin with, a hand writing which is written in a quick and careful way by our right h[removed]một số người dùng tay trái để viết mà) used to be a criterion for academic success and highly appreciate in the past but now it is not anymore Assignments, homework, tests and other school activities are mostly done
on our computers and this is the reason why a student needs to grasp the skills of computing For
example, someone has sent a good deal of assignments and all of them were sent to his teachers' email addresses, not a single one was handwritten by him What everybody calculate is that the time used for typing on the computer keyboard is three times less than the time used for writing by our hand In
addition, many people spend a big number of their free time honing excellent handwriting Indeed, it is very unnecesary We should keen on studying or reviewing our knowledge instead of honing excellent handwriting
Furthermore, there is nobody handwriting It is very outdated to handwriting in lieu of typing on the computer keyboard Moreover, there are no companies or firms which prefer handwriting for their
projects Definitely, they hire only the workers who know a lot about computers in the light of the fact that their works have a relation to the computers and skills of typing the computer keyboard Last but not least,the world is now covered by technology In the future, there will be nobody who write a letter by
his right hand Moreover, computers and smartphones are very comfortable in studying Whenever we want to ask our teacher any questions, we only need to send a email letter to our teacher and wait their answers
In conclusion, it is unnecessary to teach children about the handwriting skills Also, with the aim of getting
Trang 8a certainly job in the future, we have to type on the computer keyboard in lieu of writing by our right hands.
Điểm: 8.75
Trang 9In today’s modern era, educating children is a subject that many parents and governments are actually concerning about Many people contend that children should be taught the skills of handwriting thoroughlyfrom elementary schools In my viewpoint, this is dispensable because of the following reasons.
The first justification to support the perspective that kids should be not heavily pressured by learning handwriting skill is that nowadays, thanks to the technological advances, there are several alternatives forhandwriting like typing or using voice Not only do these alternatives help writer to compose a message more far quickly, but also they assist to convey message faster and more conveniently through
telecommunication The development of fast-paced modern technology might eliminate the presence of pen in the near future Instead of spending much time in exercising writing by hand, children should engage in other physical and intellectual activities such as swimming, acting, maths, literature and so forth Learning variety of skills allows young people to develop themselves comprehensively that benefit them in later life
On the other hand, many opponents argue that penmanship indicates the character of a person, if one has a beautiful handwriting, he or she will be cautious and prudent This notion is true but not enough Firstly, many creative people are incredibly successful in their lives and careers without carefulness Therefore, this virtue is essential for everyone but not compulsory, especially to those who work in artistic activities Secondly, parents can also apply other methods to help their children more careful such as teaching them to keep their personal hygiene clean, assigning them to do housework regularly That not only form kid’s caution but also bring to them various practical knowledge that makes them have a good command of different domains in life
From what have been discussed above, I truly believe that art of writing will be obsolete in today’s digital world due to the appearance of enormous technological substitutes Ones should invest their time in doing other meaningful activities that they are really captivated
Nhận xét của giáo viên :
In today’s modern era, educating children is a subject that many parents and the governments are actually concerning about Many people contend that children should be taught the skills of handwriting thoroughly from elementary schools In my viewpoint, this is dispensable because of the following
reasons
The first justification to support the perspective that kids should be not heavily pressured by learning handwriting skill is that nowadays, thanks to the technological advances, there are several alternatives forhandwriting like typing or using voice Not only do these alternatives help writer to compose a message more far quickly, but also they assist to convey message faster and more conveniently through
telecommunication The development of fast-paced modern technology might eliminate the presence of pen in the near future Instead of spending much time in exercising writing by hand, children should engage in other physical and intellectual activities such as swimming, acting, maths, literature and so forth Learning variety of skills allows young people to develop themselves comprehensively that benefit them in later life
On the other hand, many opponents argue that penmanship indicates the character of a person, if one has a beautiful handwriting, he or she will be cautious and prudent This notion is true but not enough Firstly, many creative people are incredibly successful in their lives and careers without carefulness Therefore, this virtue is essential for everyone but not compulsory, especially to those who work in artistic activities Secondly, parents can also apply other methods to help their children more careful such as teaching them to keep their personal hygiene clean, assigning them to do housework regularly That not onlyforms kid’s caution but also brings to them various practical knowledge that makes them have a good command of different domains in life
From what have been discussed above, I truly believe that art of writing will be obsolete in today’s digital world due to the appearance of enormous technological substitutes Ones should invest their time in doing other meaningful activities that they are really captivated
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Trang 11Many people say that teaching children about the skills of handwriting is unnecessary and unimportant This is time-consuming, helpless and unreliable for our modern life, but I do not think so In my opinion, teaching children about the skills of handwriting is necessary, important and useful for the modern life This brings a lot of advantages for the children life in the future.
Firstly, the beautiful handwriting will help the children have a lot of good grades in studying They will have high mark in the examinations or in studying, so they can pass the exam easily.Therefore, the children will feel more comfortable and confident in study
Secondly, the beautiful writing will help the children enjoy the sympathy of the examiners of the
examinations Therefore, the chlidren will have a lot of advantages of another children when they do the test Moreover, they will satisfy the examiners through their beatiful handwriting Moreover, their spirit as well as their enthusiasm will better and more comfortable
Finally, having the beautiful handwriting also helps them take part in a lot of the beautiful writing contests This helps them have many chances to advance their knowledge or study experience So it can make the children improve writing skills through real beautiful writing contests Hence, it helps guys study more and more enthusiastic than before This will help them become love studying and love the life more
In conclusion, teaching children about the skills of handwriting is very important, useful and necessary in our modern life The beautiful handwriting is an advantage for them in the future life People should teach them about skills of handwriting more and more I hope the children will have the beautiful handwriting in the future
Nhận xét của giáo viên :
Many people say that teaching children about the skills of handwriting is unnecessary and unimportant This is time-consuming, helpless and unreliable for our modern life, but I do not think so In my opinion, teaching children about the skills of handwriting is necessary, important and useful for the modern life This brings a lot of advantages for the children life in the future
Firstly, the beautiful handwriting will help the children have a lot of good grades in studying They will have high marks in the examinations or in studying, so they can pass the exam easily.Therefore, the children will feel more comfortable and confident in study
Secondly, the beautiful writing will help the children enjoy the sympathy of the examiners of the
examinations Therefore, the children will have a lot of advantages of another children when they do the test Moreover, they will satisfy the examiners through their beatiful handwriting Moreover, their spirit as well as their enthusiasm will better and more comfortable
Finally, having the beautiful handwriting also helps them take part in a lot of the beautiful writing contests This helps them have many chances to advance their knowledge or study experience So it can make the children improve writing skills through really beautiful writing contests Hence, it helps guys study more and more enthusiasticallythan before This will help them become love studying and love the life more
In conclusion, teaching children about the skills of handwriting is very important, useful and necessary in our modern life The beautiful handwriting is an advantage for them in the future life People should teach them about skills of handwriting more and more I hope the children will have the beautiful handwriting in the future
Điểm:9
Trang 123 Write an essay (150 - 300 words) about this topic:
In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include
any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Bài làm:
It is far more normal for people opting for living solo rather than living with their families, especially in some developed countries From my own knowledge and experiences, I believe that this trend has detrimental effects on society and individual as well
From the broader viewpoint of the whole economy, many more inhabitants preferring living independently can be considered as negative Firstly, when the proportion of one person household rises, there is a tendency for the escalation of housing prices Therefore, a whole host of people will find it difficult to lease
or buy a house at a reasonable cost Secondly, if there is a large number of mature adults settling upon being single instead of married, the birth rate will shrink and the population will become aging It also has meant that the labor force of this nations will gradually fall down and the government has to prepare to spend more money on medical aid programs due to the growth in the number of elderly citizens,
particularly when their children are not present at home to look after them
Furthmore, single life may have some drawbacks on each individual The feeling of loneliness and isolation may be experienced by the solitary people because they miss out the emotional support and daily conversation provided by their relatives or roommates Normally, such kind of people spend more time and put more efforts into pursuit career than those who are family-oriented As a result, they may encounter depression, stress and not have time to take care of themselves
Briefly, I would argue that this trend must be seen as injurious progress
Nhận xét của giáo viên :
It is far more normal for people opting for living solo rather than living with their families, especially in some developed countries From my own knowledge and experiences, I believe that this trend has detrimental effects on society and individual as well
From the broader viewpoint of the whole economy, many more inhabitants preferring living independently can be considered as negative Firstly, when the proportion of one person household rises, there is a tendency for the escalation of housing prices Therefore, a whole host of people will find it difficult to lease
or buy a house at a reasonable cost Secondly, if there is a large number of mature adults settling upon being single instead of married, the birth rate will shrink and the population will become aging It also has meant that the labor force of this nations will gradually fall down and the government has to prepare to spend more money on medical aid programs due to the growth in the number of elderly citizens,
particularly when their children are not present at home to look after them
Furthmore, single life may have some drawbacks on each individual The feeling of loneliness and isolation may be experienced by the solitary people because they miss out the emotional support and daily conversation provided by their relatives or roommates Normally, such kind of people spend more time and put more efforts into pursuit career than those who are family-oriented As a result, they may encounter depression, stress and they do not have time to take care of themselves
Briefly, I would argue that this trend the trend of living alone must be seen as injurious progress
Điểm: 9
Trang 13It is undeniably true that more people are now into living alone than ever before in some nations around the world In my opinion, I believe this way of living can be both advantageous and disadvantageous Thisessay will give some supported reasons and related examples to the answer.
Firstly, it is obvious that living separately from others tends to be more and more prevalent these days and can bring individuals a host of benefits such as the freedom and private space One salient example
of this is that the young generations in Việt Nam who are still single or studying away really want to stay with themselves for the reason that they dislike to be disturbed or annoyed from surrounding people It is likely to be hard for them to decide what and how suitable they can do to be able to satisfy themselves their private livestyle without triggering bad influences to their peers or parents One more specific example for this matter is that the arguments and conflicts between parents and children in Vietnamese families seems to be more serious in recent time mainly due to the fact that parents always interfere with their private problems, which are the clothes the adolescents choose to put on or the friends they spend time with Needless to say, the young eventually want to be more free doing anything they like without being under the observation or supervision from their close relatives and family members
On the other hand, there are various issues for people living alone which can make them get stuck in tackling private dilemmas.Take my personal story for example, whenever I prepare to get out to some special events or workshops, it makes me difficult to decide what should I wear formally and properly on these occasions and it wastes a lot of my time That's not all, I find it hard to be able to manage myself when I meet technical problems in the moment of being alone At that instance, I really wish to have someone by my side in order to give me a hand
To sum up, ít has both benefits and drawbacks in the way the people choose to live alone I still think that being close to others would be much preferable if everyone know how to regulate their daily activities more plausibly
Nhận xét của giáo viên :
It is undeniably true that more people are now into living alone than ever before in some nations around the world In my opinion, I believe this way of living can be both advantageous and disadvantageous This essay will give some supported reasons and related examples to the answer.
Firstly, it is obvious that living separately from others tends to be more and more prevalent these days and can bring individuals a host of benefits such as the freedom and private space One salient example of this is that the young generations in Việt Nam Vietnam who are still single or studying away really want to stay with themselves for the reason that they dislike to be disturbed
or annoyed from surrounding people It is likely to be hard for them to decide what and how suitable they can do to be able to satisfy themselves their private livestyle without triggering bad influences to on their peers or parents One more specific example for this matter is that the arguments and conflicts between parents and children in Vietnamese families seems to be more serious in recent time mainly due to the fact that parents always interfere with their private problems, which are the clothes the adolescents choose chose to put on or the friends they spend time with Needless to say, the young eventually want to be more free doing anything they like without being under the observation or supervision from their close relatives and family
members.
On the other hand, there are various issues for people living alone which can make them get
Trang 14stuck in tackling private dilemmas.Take my personal story for example, whenever I prepare to get out to some special events or workshops, it makes me difficult to decide what should I wear formally and properly on these occasions and it wastes a lot of my time That's not all, I find it hard to be able to manage myself when I meet technical problems in the moment of being alone
At that instance, I really wish to have someone by my side in order to give me a hand
To sum up, ít has both benefits and drawbacks in the way the people choose to live alone I still think that being close to others would be much preferable if everyone know how to regulate their daily activities more plausibly.
Điểm: 8.75
Trang 15Nowadays, a large range of people decided to live alone In recent years, most people, especially in the developing countries, likely to opt for living alone What I personally think is that it has some
disadvantages while some people think that it also has several advantages In this following essay, we will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks
In the first place, living alone has a few disadvantages Obviously, living alone is costly due to the
increase in population and housing price It will be also more difficult to find a house at a suitable price Moreover, living alone means that we can't receive any help from our families Therefore, whenever we get troubles, overcoming these issues is very hard In addition, living solo can be very dangerous if we are too young because thieves are able to break into our house at any time to steal valuables and money,sometimes they may even kill us Last but not least, when living alone, people can feel homesick, they miss all the members of their family Consequently, this lifestyle is not their favorite choice anymore.Despite having some drawbacks, this living trend also brings people lots of advantages Firstly, we will be very comfortable if we live alone Also, there are private things that we need to do, while we do not want
to let others know, such as writing diary, eating snack all day and so on Secondly, for those who have been pampered by parents since childhood, when living alone, they will learn how to be more
independent and more mature Thirdly, living alone can give us a hand bringing a lot of opportunities in order to find out about yourself such as strengths, weaknesses, motivations, behaviors, and desires Finally, living alone can make us appreciate others more Taking apart for a long time will actually make
us more cherish Also, we will recognize everybody with a whole new angle It also means that people willlove each other more Accordingly, there will not have fightings and quarrels anymore
To sum up, living alone has not only the advantages but also the disadvantages However, I personally believe that we should live with parents or relatives until we are old enogh to live alone
Nhận xét của giáo viên :
Nowadays, a large range of people decided to live alone In recent years, most people, especially in the developing countries, likely to opt for living alone What I personally think is that it has some
disadvantages while some people think that it also has several advantages In this following essay, we will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks
In the first place, living alone has a few disadvantages Obviously, living alone is costly due to the
increase in population and housing price/ expense(Dùng từ này hay hơn em nhé) It will be also more difficult to find a house at a suitable price Moreover, living alone means that we can't receive any help from our families Therefore, whenever we get troubles, overcoming these issues is very hard In addition,living solosolely can be very dangerous if we are too young because thieves are able to break into our house at any time to steal valuables and money, sometimes they may even kill us Last but not least, when living alone, people can feel homesick, they miss all the members of their family Consequently, thislifestyle is not their favorite choice anymore
Despite having some drawbacks, this living trend also brings people lots of advantages Firstly, we will be very comfortable if we live alone Also, there are private things that we need to do, while we do not want
to let others know, such as writing diary, eating snack all day and so on Secondly, for those who have been pampered by parents since childhood, when living alone, they will learn how to be more
independent and more mature Thirdly, living alone can give us a hand bringing to bring/ in bringing a lot
of opportunities in order to find out about discover(Dùng từ này hay hơn em nhé) yourself such as strengths, weaknesses, motivations, behaviors, and desires Finally, living alone can make us appreciate others more Taking apart for a long time will actually make us more cherish Also, we will recognize everybody with a whole new angle It also means that people will love each other more Accordingly, there will not have fightings and quarrels anymore
To sum up, living alone has not only the advantages but also the disadvantages However, I personally believe that we should live with parents or relatives until we are old enogh to live alone
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