The table below describes percentages of home schooled students in SomeCountry in 1999-2004.. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.. You should write
Trang 1The table below describes percentages of home schooled students in SomeCountry
in 1999-2004 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
You should write at least 150 words.
This table shows homeschooled students in Somecountry in year 1999-2004 in
percenages
The main trend is that all grades including kindergarten is growing every year
Kindergarten started highest at 2.4 and ended with percentage of 2.9 percent with a constant increase But grades 1-2 and grades 5-6 show a little different trend, both started
at 1,5 percent in 1999 and declines (declined) a little bit in 2000 Both of them increased slowly in 2002 and both held that course to 2004 where grades 1-2 reached 2,1 percent and grades 5-6 reached 2.6 percent
Grades 3-4 had a slow but steady growth throughout all six years It started at 1.6 percent
in 1999 and increased by 0.1 every year except in 2003 when it peaked up at 0.2 percent Grades 7-8 started at 1.6 percent and stays there for three years until it rapidly rised up to 2.2 and peaked at 2.5 in 2004
Overall, all grades including kindergarten has had a rise at roughly minimum 1 percent and more in 6 years
This is a good report; here is how you can make it better: the coherence needs
improvement, meaning the logical connection between sentences inside a paragraph and between paragraphs Use more connective words (Furthermore, However, etc) The groupings you�ve done are fine, but try to use more variations describing those statistics: use words such as numbers, figures, percentages, etc The grammar and the spelling need some extra attention