Luận điểm mơ hồ hoặc không rõ ràng.. 1 điểm 0,75 điểm 0,5 điểm 0 điểm Bố cục Tổ chức tốt; sắp xếp hợp lý, phát triển logic; bố cục rõ ràng Có tổ chức, nhưng phát triển chưa logic, cảm gi
Trang 1THE PEOPLE’S COMMITTEE OF BINH DUONG PROVINCE
THUDAUMOT UNIVERSITY FACULTY OF FOREIGN LANGUAGES
Literary Analysis Paper Title:
The setting of
“A Clean, Well-Lighted Place”
by Earnest Hemingway
Student: Nguyễn Thị Ngân Giang Code: 2022202010129
Class: D20NNAN07
Lecturer: Nguyễn Hoàng Minh Đức
Course: British and American literatures_NGNG.CQ.03
Trang 2Score Examiner’s Signature 1 Examiner’s Signature 2
In figures In words
Criteria for assessment
- Thesis/Claim (10pt):
- Organization (15pt):
- Evidence and Reasoning/Analysis (15pt):
- Writing Convention (15pt):
- Resources (15pt):
- Presentation skill (30pt):
Total:
Trang 3Tiêu chí Tốt
100%
Khá 75%
Trung bình 50%
Kém 0%
Điểm số GK1 GK2
Chủ đề
Luận điểm
mạnh mẽ, rõ ràng, có
lập trường
Luận điểm nêu được chủ đề và
có lập trường nhưng chưa vững.
Luận điểm mơ hồ hoặc không rõ ràng.
Bài viết hoàn toàn lạc đề, hoặc
bị thiếu câu chủ đề.
1 điểm 0,75 điểm 0,5 điểm 0 điểm
Bố cục
Tổ chức tốt; sắp xếp
hợp lý, phát triển
logic; bố cục rõ ràng
Có tổ chức, nhưng phát triển chưa logic, cảm giác chỉ
có phần bắt đầu và kết thúc
Một số phần lan man; bắt đầu và kết thúc không rõ ràng
Tổ chức kém;
không tiến triển logic; bắt đầu và kết thúc mơ hồ 1,5 điểm 1 điểm 0,5 điểm 0 điểm
Bằng
chứng và
Lý luận /
Phân
tích
Dẫn chứng được lựa
chọn tốt và mạnh mẽ
hỗ trợ luận điểm.
Dẫn chứng hỗ trợ luận điểm Lập luận
rõ ràng
và logic
Dẫn chứng yếu.
Lý luận không rõ ràng
hoặc không đầy đủ
Dẫn chứng không thuyết phục hoặc lạc đề.
Lý luận không đủ hoặc phi logic.
1,5 điểm 1 điểm 0,5 điểm 0 điểm
Quy ước
viết
Hầu như không có
lỗi Câu được xây
dựng tốt và đa dạng.
Các câu kết nối các ý
tưởng rõ ràng, chứng
tỏ một kiến thức
vững vàng về văn
phong học thuật.
Một số lỗi, nhưng không tác động đến nội dung toàn bài.
Các câu kết nối các
ý tưởng rõ ràng.
Thể hiện người viết
có kiến thức về văn phong học thuật.
Câu lặp đi lặp lại trong kết cấu bài.
Một số câu gây khó hiểu, nhưng hầu hết
rõ ràng.
Thể hiện người viết chú ý đến văn phong học thuật, nhưng cần một số chỉnh sửa.
Nhiều lỗi ảnh hưởng đến nội dung bài viết.
Câu văn không
rõ ràng.
1,5 điểm 1 điểm 0,5 điểm 0 điểm
Trang 4dẫn và
trình
bày
TLTK
Trích dẫn và trình
bày tài liệu tham
khảo rõ ràng và đúng
quy định
Trích dẫn và trình bày tài liệu tham khảo đúng quy định nhưng một số chỗ chưa rõ ràng.
Trích dẫn và trình bày tài liệu tham khảo đúng quy định nhưng chưa rõ ràng
Trích dẫn và trình bày tài liệu tham khảo không đúng quy định, không rõ ràng 1,5 điểm 1 điểm 0,5 điểm 0 điểm
K
năng
thuyết
trình
(powerp
oint)
Sử dụng thành thạo
và hiệu quả công cụ
trình chiếu
(powerpoint).
Sử dụng thành thạo công cụ trình chiếu (powerpoint).
Có sử dụng công
cụ trình chiếu (powerpoint).
Không sử dụng công cụ trình chiếu (powerpoint).
K
năng
thuyết
trình
(speech)
Trình bày lưu loát,
tự tin Âm phát ra
chính xác, rõ ràng.
Không có dầu hiệu
đọc slides
Trình bày chậm rãi nhưng tương đối trôi chảy, âm phát
ra tương đối chính xác Không gây khó hiểu.
Trình bày ngập ngừng quá lâu, âm phát ra không rõ ràng, không chính xác Có dấu hiệu đọc slides rõ ràng
Không trình bày nội dung bài báo cáo.
ĐIỂM TỔNG CÁ NHÂN ĐIỂM THỐNG NHẤT
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Chapter I: Introduction 6
Chapter II: Content 6
2.1 The appearance of the man sitting alone, drinking late at night in a café 6
2.2 The late-night talk in the café between the old waiter and the new waiter 7
2.3 The conversation in the old waiter's soul 8
Chapter 3: Conclusion 10
References 11
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-Chapter I: Introduction
American novelist and short-story writer Ernest Hemingway, whose full name is Ernest Miller Hemingway He was born on July 21, 1899, in Cicero, Illinois, and passed away on July 2, 1961, in Ketchum, Idaho In 1954, he received the Nobel Prize in
Literature for his creative and innovative writings Ernest Hemingway wrote a short story titled A Clean and Well-Lighted Place, which was originally published in Scribner's Magazine in March 1933 Later that year, it was included in the collection Winner Take Nothing This short story is an exploration of the meaning of life The goal of the essay is
to analyze the setting of the narrative The story is about an old man who sits in a well-lighted cafe every night drinking brandy to drown his terrible grief, two waiters start talking to one another While the older waiter is patient, and sympathy, and
understanding of the loneliness of the old man, in contrast, the younger one is haughty with the customer and he just wants to go home early with his wife The older waiter starts to have his existential crisis when the café shuts for the evening and the customer is sent home He finally finds a sense of meaning and purpose in his existence while
navigating the long, dark hours of the night in a world that appears to be "full of
nothing." Additionally, the paper will aim to have a deep understanding of the different stages of life from the young waiter to the old waiter and lastly the old man to see the contrast between the two generations
Chapter II: Content
2.1 The appearance of the man sitting alone, drinking late at night in a café.
First, the appearance of the man sitting alone, drinking late at night in a café, clearly demonstrates his loneliness It was very late, and everyone had left the cafe except
an old man, who sat in the shadow of the leaves of the tree made against the electric light
Trang 7old man who is a regular visitor is a clean man (Benert, 1974) The cafe is a "clean, well-lighted place," a haven from the night's darkness outside Darkness represents man's loneliness, sadness, death, and nothingness The light represents comfort, tranquility, pleasantness, and being in the company of people
On the other hand, the term "a clean, well-lighted place" is indicative of a man's aspiration for peace, safety, and comfort Moreover, the bar, which is another setting in this short story, is the opposite of this There are rumors that this bar has bright lights throughout But unlike the cafe, the bar is not a cozy place "He disliked bars and bodegas
"A clean, well-lighted cafe was a very different thing" (5) While there is light and
darkness, there is also "shadow," which is caused by light but, unlike light, only provides short relief from the pains of darkness, which the elderly man is attempting to avoid by sitting in the shadow cast by the leaves against the light In conclusion, older individuals may suffer from loneliness, a lack of meaning in life, and depression, just like the elderly man who seeks a bright place to feel optimism about the future
2.2 The late-night talk in the café between the old waiter and the new waiter
Second, the late-night talk in the café between the old waiter and the new waiter reveals the old waiter's sympathy for the lonely old man The waiters got into a small disagreement after the old man left because the older waiter wanted to keep the café open longer while the younger waiter wanted to close it, and this continued until they finally closed it I am of those who like to stay late at the café," the older waiter said "With all those who do not want to go to bed With all those who need a light for the night." (l16) Another piece of evidence is, "It is not only a question of youth and confidence although those things are very beautiful Each night I am reluctant to close up because there may
be someone who needs the cafe." (l25) In contrast to the old waiter, the young man just wants to go home with his wife and is unable to understand the old man, demonstrating the selfishness and materialism of the young generation The author might develop the lessons for each character by the way they act using only a few simple details The way
Trang 8According to Maliha “Hemingway is the founder of the new writing style called the Iceberg Theory which is also known as the theory of omission” Hemingway thought his style of writing was often suggestive and not that direct, leading to the reader using his or her imagination in order not to lose the subtle parts of Hemingway's intentions (Tyler 22) About Hemingway's theory a linguist named Leech stated that "The important information in Hemingway's text lies in the implied, but unstated parts He wanted the reader to feel something beyond their understanding" (Leech & Short 183)
2.3 The conversation in the old waiter's soul
Finally, the conversation in the old waiter's soul knows that life is meaningless and that we all need a bright and pleasant place to sit to avoid thinking about the dark devil of death The old man and the old waiter symbolize loneliness, and they always seek out a well-lit place to find a light of hope in their lives It was only that light was all it needed and a certain cleanness and order (l12) The old man also had a conversation with himself
to discover what life was like, and when he got home, he had insomnia, which is a terrible reality of the life of the elderly Turning off the electric light he continued the conversation with himself, It was the light of course but it is necessary that the place be clean and pleasant (l6)
A clean, well-lit atmosphere is a short narrative that teaches us the importance of having a meaningful existence for each individual, such as when the story begins in a clean, well-lit café and concludes with a statement about insomnia, which symbolizes the terrible reality of life for the elderly Moreover, the word nada also repeat many times by the old waiter It is apparent, as Carlos Baker has indicated (Hemingway, p 124), that the older waiter uses the word nada in a special sense For him the term represents, not a mere negativity, the absence of something, but a real constituent of the universe the essence of life and of each life: "It was all a nothing and a man was nothing too.""
Trang 9inspiration to the people Furthermore, experts believe that the story represents nothingness, loneliness, and the significance of women in a man's existence But I believe the story is actually about modern American society and its impact on people, particularly the youth The young generation's feelings and morality are affected by social change, which is why they are unable to understand the emotions of others People become so materialistic that they assume that only money can provide happiness, which is false because money is not everything
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"A Clean, Well-Lighted Place" is one of the best stories of Hemingway’s talent and also of his Iceberg Theory, in which he represents what it means to be alive in different stages of life, from the young to the middle-aged to the old The story is started
in a clean, well-lit café and ends with Hemingway's talent and also his Iceberg Theory, in which he represents what it means to be alive in different stages of life, from the young to the middle-aged to the old The story is started in a clean, well-lit café and ends with insomnia, which represents something that usually happens in elders' daily lives According to scholars, the story is a representation of nothingness and the meaning of life Therefore, I believe that the story is also about the different points of view from young to middle-aged to old At every stage, we also have different goals to accomplish, like the young waiter who has youth, a wife, a job, and is full of confidence But in contrast, the old waiter also has a job, but he feels nothing in life, just like the old man who drinks brandy to forget the sadness in the present
Trang 11Ernest Hemingway Retrieved from https://www.britannica.com/biography/Ernest-Hemingway
Gabriel, J F (1961) The Logic of Confusion in: Hemingway’s “A Clean, Well-Lighted Place.” College English, 22(8), 539-546. https://doi.org/10.2307/373494
Leech, Geoffrey and Short, Michael Style in fiction: A Linguistic introduction to English Fictional Prose London: Longman, 1981/1992
Maliha, H A American Modern Society and Young Generation with Reference to" A Clean, Well-Lighted Place
PURNAMA, A H (2016) Loneliness in Hemingway’s A Clean, Well-Lighted Place Tyler, Lisa Student Companion to Ernest Hemingway London: Greenwood Press, 2001