WRITING PORTFORLIO WRITING SKILL 3 topic 1 module 2 one of the most important events in your life

Yes 2 Does the introduction include the hook, background information and thesis statement?. Yes 4 Does the body include the topic sentence?. Body: Topic sentence: I was astonished and ec

HANOI UNIVERSITY OF INDUSTR

FACULTY OF FOREIGN LANGUAGES

WRITING PORTFORLIO WRITING SKILL 3

Class: NNA3B

Student’s name: Ph m M nh C ạ ạ ườ ng Student code: 2020606653

Teacher’s name: Ms Dinh Ngoc

Hanoi, 2021

Topic 1 Module 2: : One of the most important events in your life

Outline:

Introduction:

Hook: A superbly crucial event is a neccessity in our life

Background information: At the end of grade 12, I had an intensely essential entrance exam

Thesis statement: I had distracted from studying and had a big problem

Body:

Topic: Grade 12 was a meaningful year for me, but I was just letting it go for a while and getting into a real trouble

Setting: At the first semester of grade 12, I truly did not concentrate on my learning course and played a lot

Climax: At the end of that semester, when I received my final result of the test, I was completely stressful and worried Consequently, I fightened and scared to be failed in my entrance exam

Solution: I was determined to learn everything again in such a thoroughly short time and also trying to make use of my friends assistances

Conclusion: Luckily, I had passed my entrance exam with a really high score After this

event, I realized that everything happened in a abosolutely hard way If you did not care much about it, you would be a failure

‘Ver 1:

A superbly crucial event is a neccessity in our life At the end of grade 12, I had an intensely essential entrance exam I had distracted from studying and had a big problem

Grade 12 was a meaningful year for me, but I was just letting it go for a while and getting into a real trouble Grade 12 was a meaningful year for me, but I was just letting it go for

a while and getting into a real trouble Because I did not realize how important my study was, I had just ignored what my teachers adviced and what my parents said and played

At the end of that semester, when I received my final result of the test, I was completely stressful and worried Consequently, I fightened and scared to be failed in my entrance exam For this reason, I was determined to learn everything again in such a thoroughly short time and also trying to make use of my friends assistances In such a short time, I noticably seen my improvements through my effort As a result, at my second test, I had got a reall good result which was made a suprise achievement in my entrance exam

Luckily, I had passed my entrance exam with a really high score After this event, I realized that everything happened in a abosolutely hard way If you did not care much about it, you would be a failure So taking care anything or you waste lots of time

correction

1 Does the essay havethree

paragraphs?

Yes

2 Does the introduction include the

hook, background information and

thesis statement?

Yes

3 Does the body contain enough

background information and specific

details? Do they support the topic

sentence of the body paragraph?

Yes

4 Does the body include the topic

sentence? Which one?

Yes It is: “Grade 12 was a meaningful year for me, but I was just letting it go for a while and getting into a real

trouble”

5 Does the essay include time adverbs

and subordinating conjunctions?

Yes

6 Are all the verbs in the correct

forms?

Yes

7 Does the conclusion explain what

you learned from the experience?

Yes

Ver 2:

When it comes to a crucial event of my life, my entrance exams suddenly springs to mind To this day, I still remember vividly that at the end of my grade 12 I had the entrance exams to offer a place at university I had distracted from learning and gotten into a immensely big trouble

Grade 12 is absolutely important and meaningful to everyone to decide whether keeping motivating or not I did not exception previously, but I had left things behind and done whatever I wanted I had just ignored what my teacher adviced and what my parents said

as I did not realize how important learning was Then at the very end of the first semester,

without any sustained effort, I received my dreadful results which was utterly deserted Consequently, I started to feel frighten and scared to be a failure in the last final tests or the entrance exams At the same time I deeply understood the idiom “ No pain no cure “ and decided to try all over again In such a thoroughly short time, I emphasized on praticing the knowledge by doing the test as much as possible and also learned more deeply over what I was learned Noticeably, I seen my improvement constantly After a couple of months, I finally did the entrance exams and what I acquired was literally astonishing

Luckily, I had realized the matter early enough to start a sustained effort And finally I had passed and offered a place at a reputable university – Ha Noi University of Industry Through the event, I obtained a substantial lesson by all means about the effort Everything is born to let me down if I do not find the way to overcome, I will be a failure Taking care or wasting your time meaningless

Topic 2 Module 2: My most memorable memory.

Outline:

Introduction:

Hook: Having a prodigious vacation at least once before leaving everything behind or your life will be boring

Background knowledge: I had a gripping trip to HCM city with my lovely family

Thesis: A hideous issue happened

Body:

Topic sentence: I was astonished and ecstatic as soon as I knew that I would have a trip to

Ho Chi Minh city

Descriptive details: + Was picked up late

+ Flight deferred

+ Arrived on time

Conclusion: I was definitely scared of being late and missed the flight at such an

appalling moment On the other hand, it will always in my memorable memory that I never forget

Ver 1

Narrative essay Having a prodigious vacation at least once before leaving everything behind or your life will be boring Last summer vacation, I had a gripping trip to Ho Chi Minh city with my lovely family Conversely, a hideous issue happened then

I was astonished and ecstatic as soon as I knew that I would have a trip to Ho Chi Minh city Consequently, I prepared lots of things carefully for it Everything would be brilliant

if a hideous issue did not happen On the day I went, the driver who picked me up to the airport was 30 minutes late Luckily, my flight was deferred about an hour due to the bad weather For this reason, I still arrived at the airport on time for the flight It took me about two hours to get to Ho Chi Minh city When I got there, I was extremely stunned by the vibrant scenery Indeed, Ho Chi Minh City always has a profound effect on me, so I really enjoyed the trip

I was definitely scared of being late and missed the flight at such an appalling moment

On the other hand, it will always in my memorable memory that I never forget

CHECKLIST

correction

1 Does the essay have three

paragraphs?

Yes

2 Does the introduction include

the hook, background information and thesis statement?

but i think it should be a question to make this information more attractive

3 Does the body contain enough

background information and specific details? Do they support the topic sentence of the body paragraph?

yes

4 Does the body include the topic

sentence? Which one?

Yes, Topic sentence: “I was astonished and ecstatic as soon as I knew that I would have

a trip to Ho Chi Minh city”

5 Does the essay include time

adverbs and subordinating conjunctions?

yes

6 Are all the verbs in the correct

forms?

yes

Ver 2:

It is widely known that having a prodigious vacation at least once before leaving

everything behind or you life will be boring Last summer vacation, I had a gripping trip

to Ho Chi Minh city with my lovely family Conversely, a hideous issue happened then

I was extremely astonished and ecstatic as soon as I knew that I would have a trip to Ho Chi Minh city As nothing more than a consequence, I meticulously prepared several things for it Everything would be perfect if a heinous incident did not occur The driver that picked me up from the airport was 30 minutes late on the day I traveled Luckily, my flight was deferred about an hour due to the bad weather Hence, I got at the airport on time for my trip By aircraft, it took me roughly two hours to reach to Ho Chi Minh City When I got there, I was extremely stunned by the vibrant scenery Indeed, Ho Chi Minh City always has a profound effect on me, so I really enjoyed the trip

I was definitely scared of being late and missed the flight at such an appalling moment

On the other hand, it will always in my memorable memory that I never forget

Ver 3:

There is a saying goes a prodigious vacation at least once before leaving everything behind or your life will be boring That was the reason why I had a gripping trip to Ho Chi Minh city with my lovely family Conversely, a hideous issue happened then

I was extremely astonished and ecstatic as soon as I knew that I would have a trip to Ho Chi Minh city As nothing more than a consequence, I meticulously prepared several things for it Everything would be perfect if a heinous incident did not occur The driver that picked me up from the airport was 30 minutes late on the day I traveled Luckily, my flight was deferred about an hour due to the bad weather Hence, I got at the airport on time for my trip By aircraft, it took me roughly two hours to reach to Ho Chi Minh City

I was absolutely gobsmacked by the vivid surroundings when I arrived Indeed, Ho Chi Minh City always has a profound effect on me, so I really enjoyed the trip

I was definitely scared of being late and missed my flight at such an appalling moment

On the other hand, it will always in my memorable memory that I never forget.

Outline

Topic 3 module 2: A misunderstanding between you and your friend?

Introduction:

Hook: Have you ever had a misunderstanding between you and your best friend?

Background information: In my best friend’s 18th birthday party, I wanted to make a

surprise for her, but things didn’t like I thought

Thesis statement: I definitely make a big mistake

Body:

Topic sentence: 23/04/2020 was my best friend’s 18th birthday, which was really

meaningful with me, so I decided to astonish her

Descriptive details: + Planned what I should do

+ Explained with my friends + Prepared things

+ Made mistake

Conclusion: After such a horrible experience, my relationship with my bestfriend

absolutely is being gone on Conversely, with this experience I could know that

everything should be prepared carefully A small mistake makes a big misunderstanding between us

Ver: 1

Have you ever had a misunderstanding between you and your best friend? At my best friend's 18th birthday party, I honestly wanted to make a surprise for her, but things did not happen as I thought I definitely made a terrible mistake

April 24th, 2020, was my best friend's 18th birthday, which was thoroughly meaningful

to me, so I decided to do something to astonish her Before her birthday party happened, I had planned a couple of weeks to surprise her Consequently, I explained my intention to

my friend to prepare carefully Thinking about what I ought to do first was unquestionably a hard portion of my intention Besides, I altogether finished it without any mistakes Things would happen directly and superbly if I did not lie to her that I had

to go to another party Since I needed to take the birthday cake from another position, I had to lie to her As a result, she was immensely sad and disappointed due to waiting too long for such an important event And her best friend did not come and share with her happiness Luckily, I got there after beginning a couple of minutes She went to me, hugged and complained if I did not make things complicated Apart from her tear, I saw the happiness in her eyes as the most incredible moments in my life

After such a horrible experience, my relationship with my best friend absolutely is being gone on Conversely, I could know that everything that is prepared carefully will remarkably be superb, but do not try to make things complicated A small mistake makes

a big misunderstanding between us

CHECKLIST

correction

1 Does the essay have three paragraphs? Yes

2 Does the introduction include the hook,

background information and thesis

statement?

Yes

3 Does the body contain enough

background information and specific

details? Do they support the topic

sentence of the body paragraph?

Yes

4 Does the body include the topic sentence?

Which one?

Yes It is “April 24th, 2020, was my best friend's 18th birthday, which was thoroughly meaningful to

me, so I decided to do something to astonish her.”

5 Does the essay include time adverbs and

subordinating conjunctions?

Yes

6 Are all the verbs in the correct forms? Yes

7 Does the conclusion explain what you

learned from the experience?

Yes

Ver 2:

Have you ever had a misunderstanding between you and your best friend? At my best friend's 18th birthday party, I honestly wanted to make a surprise for her, but things did not happen as I thought I definitely made a terrible mistake

April 24th, 2020, was my best friend's 18th birthday, which was thoroughly meaningful

to me, so I decided to do something to astonish her Before her birthday party happened, I had planned a couple of weeks to surprise her Then, I explained my intention to my friend to prepare carefully Thinking about what I ought to do first was unquestionably a

hard portion of my intention Fortuitously, I altogether finished it without any mistakes Things would be happened directly and superbly if I did not lie to her that I had to join another party Since I needed to take the birthday cake from another position, I had to lie

to her As a result, she was immensely sad and disappointed due to waiting too long for such an important event And her best friend did not come and share with her happiness Luckily, I got there after beginning a couple of minutes She went to me, hugged and complained if I did not make things complicated Apart from her tear, I saw the happiness

in her eyes as the most incredible moments in my life

After such a horrible experience, my relationship with my best friend absolutely is being gone on Conversely, I could know that everything that is prepared carefully will remarkably be superb, but do not try to make things complicated A small mistake makes

a big misunderstanding between us

Topic 1 Module 3: TV is bad for children Do you agree or disagree?

Outline:

Introduction:

-Hook: With the rapid technological developments, many incredible devices were

invented include TV

-Background information: Some research has shown that there is nothing detrimetal in watching TV, but others have not

-Thesis statement: I strongly believe that spending too much time on TV has a negative effect on children due to three main reasons

Body paragraph:

-Topic sentence: It is widely known that TV has a several of impacts on children

-Examples/reason: + Affecting eyes

+ Containing cruel content

+ Being addicted

-Counter-argument: This may be true; otherwise, this evidence does not mean that TV is not crucial

-Refutation: It simply demonstrates that we ought to let children contact positively by supervising the time they could watch the TV

Conclusion: Watching TV is literally harmful for the children who is not in control of

their abilities due to its effect on their eyes, its cruel content, and its addiction

Version 1:

With the rapid technological developments, many incredible devices were invented include TV Some research shown that there is nothing detrimetal in watching TV, but others indicated that TV has a deleterious impact on children, and try to prevent their child from watching TV Personally, I strongly believe that spending too much time on

TV has an adverse effect on children due to three main reasons, which I will mention below

It is widely known that TV has a several of impacts on children First of all, spending in front of TV set more than a couple of hours daily could make children meet some vision problems easily than others UV radiation, which is contained in TV light, can

temporarily damage their cornea and the conjunctiva after exposuring regularly As a result, children will simply be nearsighted Additionally, TV might be involved violent content, political matters or even adult content, if children consistently disturbs these kind

of contents, they will be distorting their mind Nowadays, smart TV is well received with the intelligent and convenient contact leading to the booming era of social media such as Youtube, Facebook, and Tiktok Hence, being contained negative content is not excepted through all the social network normally, and children will meet the cruel content easily and grow their mind in a really negative way Finally, being addicted to TV is currently engaged Because of busy and stressful lifestyle of the parents, they tend to ignore and leave their children behind the TV screen Subsequently, children is addicted the

interesting thing in the TV Gradually, they will be lost the social contact with thier friends, less active and energetic than others This may be true; otherwise, this evidence does not mean that TV is not crucial It simply demonstrates that we ought to let children contact positively by supervising the time they could watch the TV

Watching TV is literally harmful for the children who is not in control of their abilities due to its effect on their eyes, its cruel content, and its addiction

Questions Answers Suggested correction

1 Does the essay have 3

paragraph?

Yes

2 Does the introduction

include a hook and a

thesis?

Yes

3 Does the body paragraph

have a topic sentence?

Yes