The bar below shows scotlands exports to the rest of the UK and the world for the year 2014

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Brainstorming :

Có hai cách Brainstorming dựa trên 2 cách chia Body đối với bài này

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Cách 1: Chia the UK và the World

1. Introduction:

- Paraphrase

2. Overview:

- Những lĩnh vực nào the UK cao hơn the world ?

- Lĩnh vực nào chiếm cao nhất ở cả 2 nơi ?

3. Details:

a. Body 1: The World

- Business cao nhất, theo sau bởi Chemicals và Wholesale

- Manufacture: gần bằng Other

- Còn lại dưới 3

b. Body 2: the UK

- Chemicals cao nhất,

- Manufacture thứ hai

- Electrical lớn hơn the World

- Còn lại xấp xỉ từ 0.5 đến 2.5

Cách 2: Chia theo mức độ chênh lệch

1. Introduction:

- Paraphrase

2. Overview:

- Những lĩnh vực nào the UK cao hơn the world ?

- Lĩnh vực nào chiếm cao nhất ở cả 2 nơi ?

3. Details:

a. Body 1: Chênh lệch nhiều

- Business

- Wholesale

- Chemicals

- Other

b. Body 2: Chênh lệch ít

- Các ngành còn lại

mẫu:

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CÁCH 1 : Chia the UK và the World

The provided graph illustrates the information about the exportation of different fields in Scotland to other areas in Britain and the globe in the year of 2014

Taken as a whole, most of the categories of the world were superior to the data

of the UK, aparting from Electrical & Instrument Engineering In addition, the amount of money earned from Business Services & Finance, Hotels &

Restaurant Services of the remainers of the globe made up the highest over the period shown

Concerning the exportation to the rest of the world, being 13.8 billion, the first position was represented to Business Services & Finance, Hotels & Restaurant Services This followed by 9.5 of Chemicals & Mineral Products and 8.2 of Wholesale & Retail At the same time, Scotland witnessed comparable figures for Food & Drink and Other Manufacturing, at around 5.9 billion By

comparison, Scotland recorded a trough about the statistics of Agriculture, Forestry, Fishing & Mining, Metals, Mechanical & Transport Equipment,

Electrical & Instrument Engineering and Other Services, at under 3 billion

Regarding Scotland's exports to the other sections in the UK, despite the

predominance of Chemicals & Mineral Products with 5 billion, this field was just about a half of that of the world The number of billions received from Manufacturing of Food and Drink, furthermore, was dwarfed by the previous ( 4.4 ) The figure for Electrical & Instrument Engineering was similar and became the only area which outnumbered the world By contrast, there was a significant gap between Metals, Mechanical & Transport Equipment, Electrical

& Instrument Engineering and the mentioned sectors, at 2.1 billion In the interim, the others were seen the similar data, which occupied less than 2 billion

of Scotland

CÁCH 2 : Chia theo mức độ chênh lệch ( Body 1 : Chênh lệch ít - Body 2 : Chênh lệch nhiều )

The supplied diagram compares data on the imports of British and global

remainers from Scotland in the year of 2014

Taken as a whole, most of the categories of the world were superior to the data

of the UK, aparting from Electrical & Instrument Engineering The amount of money earned from Business Services & Finance, Hotels & Restaurant Services

of ROW, in addition, made up the highest over the period shown

Scotland experienced similar levels in the Metals, Mechanical & Transport Equipment’s export to the rest of the UK and the world, at around 2.4 billion In terms of Manufacturing of Food and Drink, about 5.8 billion was received from the global exportation, compared to 4.4 billion of Britain At the same time, there was a slight difference of 1.7 billion in the statistics of money obtained from international and British import Electrical & Instrument Engineering as the only area that the former was subordinate to the latter Likewise, the

comparable disparity was seen in the figures for Agriculture, Forestry, Fishing

& Mining ( 0.6 and 2.4 billion ), which stood at the bottom in both 2 mentioned locations in 2014

In stark contrast to this, ranked the first in ROW with 13.8 billion, the value of Scotland’s export of the field called Business Services & Finance, Hotels & Restaurant Services was more than 8 times as high as that of Britain By

comparison, the volume of the global Wholesale & Retail import was

approximately 8.2 billion The figure of the UK was considerably lower, at only 1.1 billion Regarding Other Manufacturing and Services, the gap between the expenditure for import in the world and the UK was narrowed, with 4,5 and 2,1 billion in turn

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